雅思寫作考試對于一部分同學來說是一大難點，大家在平時練習雅思寫作的時候可以練習一下真題，下面是出國留學網(wǎng)為大家?guī)淼?021年7月10日雅思寫作真題與范文。
一、2021年7月10日雅思寫作真題與范文
小作文
類型：柱狀圖主題：英國在2001-2008吃蔬菜和水果的人數(shù)百分比。
大作文
Education of young people is a highly prioritized in many countries. However educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
范文
Many countries prioritize mainly the education of children. However，some people opine to have societies start funding iliterate adults to learn. I agree with the view and， this essay will explain the reasons for adult schooling.
Firstly， when a person struggles with reading or writing， social impacts are profound. Over a while， they develop low self-esteem， feel emotions such as shame and fear： For example， being iliterate， the individual would avoid situations where they have to communicate and make decisions.Secondly， unlearned adults are more susceptible to live destitutely. In developing countries， people living in poverty are either unemployed or work in low-skilled jobs. As a result of unemployment and to make ends meet， children are sent to work， while others get involved in theft and other crimes. With the funds， they can study in vocational training schools to develop skills to earn a decent living； and literacy training which raises reading proficiency.
Lastly， uneducated individuals are prone to health issues. Due to the fact， they have trouble reading and understanding safety protocols， tend to have more workplace accidents and prolonged recovery period. Crucial information like the inability to read prescription labels and drug overdose is more common among these people. We can ask them to repeat instructions and assess their baseline information about their health before proceeding further.
In conclusion， I reiterate that it is immensely vital for adults to be literate in today＇s society and， we must take urgent measures and invest more to educate these adults.
二、雅思寫作技巧
1、為了高級而高級的做法，只會弄巧成拙，簡單樸素的表達就夠了。
2、字小的、字間隔窄的同學，請把練字提上日程，不是練好不好看，而是練大小和間距，不要在這上面吃虧。
3、文章的邏輯只正確是不夠的，還要夠明顯，明顯，明顯！也就是說，文章一定要讓考官一目了然地、準確地把握到你的邏輯框架。要明顯很簡單，主要就是從連接詞上面搞。
4、一些輔導材料基本喜歡把寫作分為各種類別，真滴沒有必要，作文就是一個分析問題+表達觀點+解決問題的過程，如果是問是否agree， 那就去掉解決問題這一步，如果問how to solve the problem，那就是這三個都放。
三、雅思寫作高分句型
1.So + 形容詞+ be + 主詞+ that + 從句（如此……以致于……） 例如：
So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.
時間是如此珍貴，我們經(jīng)不起浪費它。
2.形容詞+ as +主語+ be，主語+ 謂語（雖然……） 例如：
Rich as our country is， the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對令人不滿意。
3.The + 比較級+主語+謂語，the +比較級+主語+謂語（愈……愈……） 例如：
The harder you work， the more progress you make.
你愈努力，你愈進步。
4.It is time + 主語+ 過去式（該是……的時候了） 例如：
It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
該是有關當局采取適當?shù)拇胧﹣斫鉀Q交通問題的時候了。
注意：此句型可以轉(zhuǎn)化為簡單句句型：It is time for sth./for sb to do…. 例如：
It is time for lunch.
該吃午飯了。
5.To be frank/ To tell the truth， …. （老實說， ……） 例如：
To be frank/ To tell the truth， whether you like it or not， you have no other choice.
老實說，不論你喜不喜歡，你別無選擇。
6.it took him a year to do….（ 他用了1年的時間來做……） 例如：
Asfar as we know， it took him more than a year to write the book.
目前為止我們所知道的是，他用了1年的時間來寫這本書。
It took them a long time to realize they had made a mistake.
過了很久，他們才意識到犯錯了。
四、雅思大作文寫作的注意事項
考官對模板深惡痛絕的程度可能超過很多考生的想象，而且，如果考生在第一段還使用大量惡俗的模板，還在第一句說with the development of society，那他會發(fā)現(xiàn)他的成績單上的作文得分會在4分左右。其實，翻翻雅思考官的范文，我們會發(fā)現(xiàn)，考官在第一段只干了兩件事情：引出背景+表明觀點，甚至很多考官只干了第一件事情（引出背景），僅此而已。但是，考官的首段會很具體，會和文章特定場合掛鉤
作文還要加標題
英語考試有一個國際慣例（common practice）：寫作文時不需要加標題，直接寫正文就行。加標題屬于浪費感情，浪費表情。而且，這個標題可能太大，一篇250字的文章不能承擔標題之重；這個標題可能太小，只照顧到你這篇文章的一小部分；這個標題可能加錯了，意思與文章相反，反而會誤導考官。總之，不需要加任何標題。
留給大作文的時間太短
考官明確提出，Task 2 carries more weights（大作文占的分量要比小作文大），而且考官在改作文的時候確實以大作文為主。但是考生在考試的時候，小作文控制不住時間，寫得過于詳細，最后留給大作文的時間只有半個小時不到，這樣做就死定了。所以，我們建議小作文的時間控制在20分鐘以內(nèi)，超過20分鐘沒寫完也不要再寫了，而寫大作文的時間一定要大于等于40分鐘。