英語作文，是指用英語針對某一內(nèi)容寫出一篇文章，是英語考試最常見的一種題目類型，英語作文要求閱讀、寫作能力比較高，也是考生最容易失分的題型。以下是整理的《小學六年級英語作文及點評》，希望幫助到您。
【Zoom’s Weekend】
Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.
【要領點評】
寫法：這篇習作是按時間順序記敘了Zoom的周末活動。
時態(tài)：這篇文章可以用三種時態(tài)來寫，由于本單元主要講的是一般過去時態(tài)，所以我們采用一般過去時態(tài)比較合適。
句型：主語+動詞過去式+過去時間。
注意：活動的相關表達法采用新舊知識結合的方法，但要注意動詞過去式的拼寫。
【A Farewell Party】
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.
Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.
Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.
點評：
寫法：這篇習作記敘了一個告別晚會。記敘了學年末的告別晚會上大家都表演了什么節(jié)目，以及晚會后大家要去看望劉蕓的故事。
時態(tài)：這篇習作可采用三種時態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要出現(xiàn)的時態(tài)是一般將來時和現(xiàn)在進行時，所以這里我們才用一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時和一般將來時來寫。
句型：
一般現(xiàn)在時：主語+動詞原形+其他。
現(xiàn)在進行時：主語+現(xiàn)在分詞+其他。
一般將來時：主語+ be going to / will +動詞原形+其他。
注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的時態(tài)比較多，所以要注意一下時態(tài)的變化。學生們都在表演什么節(jié)目可以用現(xiàn)在進行時，將要去做什么，要用將來時。另外還要注意，一般現(xiàn)在時在肯定句中，主語是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞也要用第三人稱單數(shù)。
【Tom’s Holiday】
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.
【要領點評】
寫法：這篇習作是按照地點的順序記敘假期里的活動，記敘了假期里去北京做了哪些活動以及對活動的感受。
時態(tài)：這篇文章可采用兩種時態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要講述的是一般過去時的用法，所以這里大部分我們采用一般過去時比較合適。
句型：主語+動詞過去式+其他?? 主語+will+動詞原形+其他
注意：活動的相關表達法可采用舊知識和新知識相結合去寫，但要注意動詞過去式的變化規(guī)則。例：eat 的過去式為ate，為不規(guī)則變化。
【Zoom’s Weekend】
Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.
【要領點評】
寫法：這篇習作是按時間順序記敘了Zoom的周末活動。
時態(tài)：這篇文章可以用三種時態(tài)來寫，由于本單元主要講的是一般過去時態(tài)，所以我們采用一般過去時態(tài)比較合適。
句型：主語+動詞過去式+過去時間。
注意：活動的相關表達法采用新舊知識結合的方法，但要注意動詞過去式的拼寫。
【A Farewell Party】
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.
Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.
Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.
點評：
寫法：這篇習作記敘了一個告別晚會。記敘了學年末的告別晚會上大家都表演了什么節(jié)目，以及晚會后大家要去看望劉蕓的故事。
時態(tài)：這篇習作可采用三種時態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要出現(xiàn)的時態(tài)是一般將來時和現(xiàn)在進行時，所以這里我們才用一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時和一般將來時來寫。
句型：
一般現(xiàn)在時：主語+動詞原形+其他。
現(xiàn)在進行時：主語+現(xiàn)在分詞+其他。
一般將來時：主語+ be going to / will +動詞原形+其他。
注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的時態(tài)比較多，所以要注意一下時態(tài)的變化。學生們都在表演什么節(jié)目可以用現(xiàn)在進行時，將要去做什么，要用將來時。另外還要注意，一般現(xiàn)在時在肯定句中，主語是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞也要用第三人稱單數(shù)。
【Tom’s Holiday】
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.
【要領點評】
寫法：這篇習作是按照地點的順序記敘假期里的活動，記敘了假期里去北京做了哪些活動以及對活動的感受。
時態(tài)：這篇文章可采用兩種時態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要講述的是一般過去時的用法，所以這里大部分我們采用一般過去時比較合適。
句型：主語+動詞過去式+其他?? 主語+will+動詞原形+其他
注意：活動的相關表達法可采用舊知識和新知識相結合去寫，但要注意動詞過去式的變化規(guī)則。例：eat 的過去式為ate，為不規(guī)則變化。