芬芳襲人花枝俏，喜氣盈門捷報到。心花怒放看通知，夢想實現(xiàn)今日事，喜笑顏開憶往昔，勤學(xué)苦讀最美麗。在學(xué)習(xí)中學(xué)會復(fù)習(xí)，在運用中培養(yǎng)能力，在總結(jié)中不斷提高。以下是為大家整理的《六年級英語作文及點評【三篇】》 供您查閱。
【第一篇：A Farewell Party】
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.
Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.
Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.
點評：
寫法：這篇習(xí)作記敘了一個告別晚會。記敘了學(xué)年末的告別晚會上大家都表演了什么節(jié)目，以及晚會后大家要去看望劉蕓的故事。
時態(tài)：這篇習(xí)作可采用三種時態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要出現(xiàn)的時態(tài)是一般將來時和現(xiàn)在進行時，所以這里我們才用一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時和一般將來時來寫。
句型：
一般現(xiàn)在時：主語+動詞原形+其他。
現(xiàn)在進行時：主語+現(xiàn)在分詞+其他。
一般將來時：主語+ be going to / will +動詞原形+其他。
注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的時態(tài)比較多，所以要注意一下時態(tài)的變化。學(xué)生們都在表演什么節(jié)目可以用現(xiàn)在進行時，將要去做什么，要用將來時。另外還要注意，一般現(xiàn)在時在肯定句中，主語是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞也要用第三人稱單數(shù)。
【第二篇：A Post Card from John】
Dear Sarah,
This post card shows you a picture from my holiday. We got Kunming on Wednesday. On the first day we visited Stone Forest. It’s very beautiful. I love it very much. On Thursday Kathy and I got lost in the city. We asked a policeman for help. He helped us find the hotel. On Friday we went to a small village. We saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. We enjoyed ourselves. Last day we went shopping ane bought some presents for friends. Tomorrow we will be back home.
John
【要領(lǐng)點評】
寫法：這是一封明信片，按照時間順序記敘了約翰假期去昆明度假這幾天的活動。分別記敘了游覽石林，迷路，看民族舞，購物，買禮物等活動。
時態(tài)：這篇文章由于是記敘已經(jīng)發(fā)過的事，所以大部分可以采用一般過去時來寫。
句型：主語+動詞過去式+其他。
注意：描述已經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事要用一般過去時，在寫這篇文章的時候要注意動詞的過去式的變化，尤其是動詞過去式的不規(guī)則變化。沒發(fā)生過的事要用一般將來時。
【第三篇：Tom’s Holiday】
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.
【要領(lǐng)點評】
寫法：這篇習(xí)作是按照地點的順序記敘假期里的活動，記敘了假期里去北京做了哪些活動以及對活動的感受。
時態(tài)：這篇文章可采用兩種時態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要講述的是一般過去時的用法，所以這里大部分我們采用一般過去時比較合適。
句型：主語+動詞過去式+其他?? 主語+will+動詞原形+其他
注意：活動的相關(guān)表達(dá)法可采用舊知識和新知識相結(jié)合去寫，但要注意動詞過去式的變化規(guī)則。例：eat 的過去式為ate，為不規(guī)則變化。