雅思口語(yǔ)part1中式思維范文分析

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下面我們以part1手寫和電腦的話題問(wèn)題來(lái)為大家具體分析,首先來(lái)看看中式思維作答的話題問(wèn)題及內(nèi)容分析:
    Do you often write things?
    Yes, I write all the time. I write when I answer questions, when I send e-mails, when I write letters to relatives. Each thing that I write gives me the chance to improve my writing. I do not take spelling or grammatical shortcuts, because that obfuscates good writing.
    整體看此范文,無(wú)論是從句式還是詞匯上來(lái)看,似乎都是沒(méi)有很大問(wèn)題的,甚至稱得上詞匯多樣,句式多變。但是仔細(xì)分析其意思,我們可以看到問(wèn)題是“你經(jīng)常寫一些東西嗎?”下面的回答是“是的,我總是寫一些東西?!边@里是沒(méi)有什么問(wèn)題的,直接回答問(wèn)題符合口語(yǔ)回答標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。但是下面的具體陳述,就很明顯能夠體現(xiàn)出嚴(yán)重的中式思維?!爱?dāng)我回答問(wèn)題的時(shí)候我會(huì)寫,當(dāng)我發(fā)郵件的時(shí)候我會(huì)寫,當(dāng)我給我親戚寫信的時(shí)候我會(huì)寫。每件事情都能夠幫助我提高我的書法……”這樣讀起來(lái)很顯然那就是中文的思維方式,稍顯啰嗦,考生可以直接回答寫些什么,說(shuō)明writing的好處即可。句式可以再靈活一些。所以這樣的回答最多能夠得5.5-6分,再加上發(fā)音問(wèn)題的誤差,還可能更低。
    接下來(lái)我們來(lái)對(duì)比一下偏英式思維的回答,還以此話題為例:
    How can children today improve (or, practice) their handwriting?
    Practice makes perfect. Have them trace a model. Let them treat it like homework and spend 30 minutes or more everyday working on it, at first. Besides, parents and teachers should encourage them to slow down when handwriting assignments.
    “現(xiàn)在的人們?nèi)绾翁岣咚麄兊臅鴮?”首句回答是“孰能生巧。”不僅直接作答此問(wèn)題,而且還運(yùn)用俗語(yǔ),簡(jiǎn)單而有力,且符合英式思維。后面接著解釋如何熟能生巧,模仿,具體該怎么模仿練習(xí)。Besides,后面還說(shuō)明了父母和家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該怎么配合孩子們進(jìn)行書法練習(xí)……無(wú)論是從詞匯句式還是從邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)上都是十分連貫清晰的,比較符合英式思維的方式。而俗語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用還能夠?yàn)榭谡Z(yǔ)加分。綜合得分在7分及以上的水平,當(dāng)然這里是不考慮發(fā)音問(wèn)題和考場(chǎng)情況的。