Essay examinations are a fact of college life.
You may have taken it to enter your present college, __1__
to get into an English class,or as requirement__2__
in one of your other college courses. Whether they
are whole papers written in class and test questions__3__
that require a paragraph response, but essay__4__
examinations offer you with the opportunity to express__5__
your mastery of a subject--to apply, synthesis,__6__
compare, or describe ideas from your own perspective.
They represent a chance for you to demonstrate
not only your collection of facts and details,__7__
but also your completely understanding of how all__8__
the parts of a topic fit together. Your audience here
is just one person--your instructor--for whom you__9__
must demonstrate your understanding and applying__10__
of the course material.
答案：
1.it改為one
這里需要的代詞應理解為“這樣的一個考試”，而不是“這個考試”；另外，it的形式與上文的examination不符
2. as后加冠詞a
表示“一個要求”
3. and改為or
應組成“whether...or...”結構
4. 去掉but
whether開頭的句子是一個主從復合句，所以主句前不加連詞but
5. 去掉with或將offer改為provide
offer是及物動詞，可跟雙賓語
6.synthesis改為synthesize
這里的平行結構除了synthesis之外都是名詞，所以需要改為動詞形式
7. collection改為recollection
這里不表示“收集”，而是“有關事實和細節(jié)的會議”
8.completely改為complete
被修飾詞understanding是動名詞，所以應用形容詞來修飾
9.for改為to
“for whom”言下之意是“為了指導老師來展示....”，而“to whom”是“展示給老師看”
10.applying改為application
如果一個詞本身有名詞形式，盡量不要使用動名詞
You may have taken it to enter your present college, __1__
to get into an English class,or as requirement__2__
in one of your other college courses. Whether they
are whole papers written in class and test questions__3__
that require a paragraph response, but essay__4__
examinations offer you with the opportunity to express__5__
your mastery of a subject--to apply, synthesis,__6__
compare, or describe ideas from your own perspective.
They represent a chance for you to demonstrate
not only your collection of facts and details,__7__
but also your completely understanding of how all__8__
the parts of a topic fit together. Your audience here
is just one person--your instructor--for whom you__9__
must demonstrate your understanding and applying__10__
of the course material.
答案：
1.it改為one
這里需要的代詞應理解為“這樣的一個考試”，而不是“這個考試”；另外，it的形式與上文的examination不符
2. as后加冠詞a
表示“一個要求”
3. and改為or
應組成“whether...or...”結構
4. 去掉but
whether開頭的句子是一個主從復合句，所以主句前不加連詞but
5. 去掉with或將offer改為provide
offer是及物動詞，可跟雙賓語
6.synthesis改為synthesize
這里的平行結構除了synthesis之外都是名詞，所以需要改為動詞形式
7. collection改為recollection
這里不表示“收集”，而是“有關事實和細節(jié)的會議”
8.completely改為complete
被修飾詞understanding是動名詞，所以應用形容詞來修飾
9.for改為to
“for whom”言下之意是“為了指導老師來展示....”，而“to whom”是“展示給老師看”
10.applying改為application
如果一個詞本身有名詞形式，盡量不要使用動名詞