議論型作文之11分作文
一、篇章連貫：可以通過文章內(nèi)容的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系來表現(xiàn)篇章的連貫性。
1、具體到一般： 表現(xiàn)形式為先舉例具體的事例進(jìn)行分析、說明，進(jìn)而得出論證或結(jié)論，在段末往往以主題句的形式表現(xiàn)出來。
2、一般到具體：表現(xiàn)為在文章段首以主題句的形式出現(xiàn)，然后通過具體的敘述、說明、舉例使主題句變得具體、明白、易懂。
二、 常用句型
１、 開頭
It's well known to us that...
Recently,... has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.
One of the universal issues we are faced with / that cause increasing concern is that...
People's view/opinions /ideas on ... vary from person to person.Some people think that ... they hold this opinion because... However,others hold that...
2、主要論述方法
A is to B what C is to D
According to ..., but there is no evidence whatsoever to show...
The example cited,while suggestive of these trends,is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to belivev that the data drawn form... is representative of...
As it stands, this argument suffers from three critical flaws.
3、結(jié)尾
In my opinion,it is more advisable to do ... than to do
Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...
It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of...
We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with
It is high time that we put an end to... Otherwise,...
作業(yè)：（以下為一篇11分范文，請練習(xí)按要求改寫成漂亮的14分作文）
With the deepening of reform and openingup of our country,studying overseas is becoming an increasingly popular option.(2) Some choose to further their studies abroad.(3) they insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways . (4) First,when they live in a foreign country,they can improve their foreign language skills.(5) Second,if they complete part or all of their education overseas,they can gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study.(6) Third , they can experience a different culture first-hand
要求：
1、句（2）（3）合成一句，句（2）改成帶定語從句的主語
2、句（4）中的狀語從句改稱獨(dú)立主謂語結(jié)構(gòu)
3、句（5）中條件狀語從句改稱主語，句（5）變成簡單句
(1)However,many people favor studying at home.(2) They argue that ,studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off and have no language and cultural barriers.
要求：
1、句（1）改成" there be"句型；
2、句（2）改成兩句，分別陳述兩個(gè)正反論證的兩個(gè)理由；
(1) I,myself,believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense.(20 some students wish to have overseas academic experience.(3) If they have got the chances and financial resources,they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision.(4) On the other hand , if conditions don't permit,they can pusue their studies at top universities in our conutry.(5) What counts is not the place where they study,but what they can learn.
要求：1、句（2）、（3）合成一句，句（2）改成句（3）中條件狀語從句中主語的定語從句；
參考答案：
With the deepening of reform and openingup of our country,studying overseas is becoming an increasingly popular option. People who choose to further their studies abroad insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways . First, living in a foreign country,they can improve their foreign language skills. Second, completing part or all of their education overseas,help them gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study. Third , they can experience a different culture first-hand
However,there are still many people who favor studying at home.(2) They argue that , for one thing, studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off . For another, there are no language and cultural barriers if they study in our country.
I,myself,believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense. If students who wish to have overseas academic experience. have got the chances and financial resources,they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision. On the other hand , if conditions don't permit,they can pusue their studies at top universities in our conutry. What counts is not the place where they study,but what they can learn.
一、篇章連貫：可以通過文章內(nèi)容的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系來表現(xiàn)篇章的連貫性。
1、具體到一般： 表現(xiàn)形式為先舉例具體的事例進(jìn)行分析、說明，進(jìn)而得出論證或結(jié)論，在段末往往以主題句的形式表現(xiàn)出來。
2、一般到具體：表現(xiàn)為在文章段首以主題句的形式出現(xiàn)，然后通過具體的敘述、說明、舉例使主題句變得具體、明白、易懂。
二、 常用句型
１、 開頭
It's well known to us that...
Recently,... has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.
One of the universal issues we are faced with / that cause increasing concern is that...
People's view/opinions /ideas on ... vary from person to person.Some people think that ... they hold this opinion because... However,others hold that...
2、主要論述方法
A is to B what C is to D
According to ..., but there is no evidence whatsoever to show...
The example cited,while suggestive of these trends,is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to belivev that the data drawn form... is representative of...
As it stands, this argument suffers from three critical flaws.
3、結(jié)尾
In my opinion,it is more advisable to do ... than to do
Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...
It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of...
We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with
It is high time that we put an end to... Otherwise,...
作業(yè)：（以下為一篇11分范文，請練習(xí)按要求改寫成漂亮的14分作文）
With the deepening of reform and openingup of our country,studying overseas is becoming an increasingly popular option.(2) Some choose to further their studies abroad.(3) they insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways . (4) First,when they live in a foreign country,they can improve their foreign language skills.(5) Second,if they complete part or all of their education overseas,they can gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study.(6) Third , they can experience a different culture first-hand
要求：
1、句（2）（3）合成一句，句（2）改成帶定語從句的主語
2、句（4）中的狀語從句改稱獨(dú)立主謂語結(jié)構(gòu)
3、句（5）中條件狀語從句改稱主語，句（5）變成簡單句
(1)However,many people favor studying at home.(2) They argue that ,studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off and have no language and cultural barriers.
要求：
1、句（1）改成" there be"句型；
2、句（2）改成兩句，分別陳述兩個(gè)正反論證的兩個(gè)理由；
(1) I,myself,believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense.(20 some students wish to have overseas academic experience.(3) If they have got the chances and financial resources,they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision.(4) On the other hand , if conditions don't permit,they can pusue their studies at top universities in our conutry.(5) What counts is not the place where they study,but what they can learn.
要求：1、句（2）、（3）合成一句，句（2）改成句（3）中條件狀語從句中主語的定語從句；
參考答案：
With the deepening of reform and openingup of our country,studying overseas is becoming an increasingly popular option. People who choose to further their studies abroad insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways . First, living in a foreign country,they can improve their foreign language skills. Second, completing part or all of their education overseas,help them gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study. Third , they can experience a different culture first-hand
However,there are still many people who favor studying at home.(2) They argue that , for one thing, studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off . For another, there are no language and cultural barriers if they study in our country.
I,myself,believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense. If students who wish to have overseas academic experience. have got the chances and financial resources,they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision. On the other hand , if conditions don't permit,they can pusue their studies at top universities in our conutry. What counts is not the place where they study,but what they can learn.