新概念三為四級(jí)寫作增彩的詞匯結(jié)構(gòu)

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    新概念英語(yǔ)第三冊(cè)是一本主要集合了閱讀與寫作精華的教材,從新概念三冊(cè)的教學(xué)中,我們可以提煉出很多的亮點(diǎn)為我們的四級(jí)寫作增色,往往一個(gè)較好的句型或詞匯結(jié)構(gòu)就能使整篇文章煥然一新,給人一種新鮮極強(qiáng)的沖擊力。我們先簡(jiǎn)單回想一下我們的同學(xué)在四級(jí)寫作中必出現(xiàn)的一些常用詞匯或結(jié)構(gòu):議論文一進(jìn)入分點(diǎn)論證立刻就會(huì)用 first (firstly , secondly) 這樣的過(guò)度詞,一談到根據(jù)什么,就會(huì)使用according to, 一說(shuō)到某種現(xiàn)象越來(lái)越普遍就一定會(huì)用 more and more,一談到什么觀點(diǎn)就會(huì)用 I think, in fact, in my eyes, 一想加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣就會(huì)用very,甚至實(shí)在搜不到詞了,連用好幾次very…… 等等。 試想一下,四級(jí)寫作的閱卷老師每天會(huì)改無(wú)數(shù)的作文,每篇作文千篇一律都會(huì)必然出現(xiàn)上述的一些詞,當(dāng)他改完幾十篇這樣的作文后,還會(huì)慷慨地打出高分么?我在教學(xué)中反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào),所謂這樣的常用詞或結(jié)構(gòu),其實(shí)就是我們?cè)趯懽髦谐32荒苡玫脑~或結(jié)構(gòu)。要想脫穎而出,必須講求拋棄俗氣的常用的寫作手法。我們從新三中盡可輕松找到令人為之振奮的詞匯結(jié)構(gòu)。
    一、詞匯亮點(diǎn)。More and more 我們可以換用成accumulate(lesson 1, 1.4 when the evidence began to accumulate…),(increase 也已被太多人使用)如“超女引起了越來(lái)越多觀眾的興趣?!盩he audience’s interests on the Super Girl have been accumulating. 對(duì)于in my eyes,我們可以使用for my own part;According to, 我們可以使用in the light of.
    二、選詞。在記敘文里一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的動(dòng)作新三的選詞也是非常講究的,如Lesson 22,(1.13) He entered the cell and presented the letter to the aristocrat.(沒有使用give, pass 或show, 使用了present這個(gè)比較正式的詞更能體現(xiàn)當(dāng)時(shí)舞臺(tái)的氣氛)
    三、用詞的多變豐富性。如表示不同程度的詞匯結(jié)構(gòu)在新三里出現(xiàn)的有:rarely, considerable, reluctantly, gigantic, highly, tremendous, this is no doubt that…… indeed, much to someone’s amusement/surprise/happiness/sadness, no one can... genuinely, etc.這里需要強(qiáng)調(diào)的是新三里使用多次的一個(gè)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)語(yǔ)氣的手法,fail to do something, 配合在fail 前加個(gè)never, 那這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)將給文章帶來(lái)非常堅(jiān)決的語(yǔ)氣。
    四、謀篇。1,當(dāng)需要論證某事物的另一方面時(shí),新三多處采用了只用某常用結(jié)構(gòu)的后半部分的手法。如Lesson 11,(1.4), On the other hand, is never troubled by such feelings…lesson 12,(1.4)The other side of the picture is quite the opposite以及l(fā)esson 23,(1.5) On the other hand, your stomach would turn at the idea of frying potatoes in animal fat. 這三個(gè)例子里,全文都沒有on the one hand, on the first side等,達(dá)到簡(jiǎn)潔而又醒目的效果。2,議論文大多需要我們論證一件比較有爭(zhēng)議的現(xiàn)象:可以采用這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)開篇:Lesson 23,(1.9)No creature has received more praise and abuse than the common garden snail. 如論證春節(jié)是否該禁止燃放鞭炮,我們就可以仿寫成No festival product has received more praise and abuse than the firework.
    在議論文中,學(xué)生總要陳述自己的觀點(diǎn),要想使自己的觀點(diǎn)有說(shuō)服力,我們須要把握好一點(diǎn):好的議論文是處處都是自己的觀點(diǎn),但不帶一點(diǎn)“我”的痕跡,用第三人稱的口吻貌似客觀地講述事實(shí),而并不是第一人稱,這樣文章就更有說(shuō)服力和可信度。比如 lesson 22, (1.3)one would expect them to know their parts by heart……此句的變化形式為it is widely expected that….lesson 27,(1.1) It has been said that everyone lives by selling something…
    五、修辭手法多樣。 Lesson 23,(1.14) …a huge number of snails taking a stroll on some of my prize plants. (擬人) lesson 31,(1.9) ...his eccentricity had become legendary long before he died.(hyperbole)
    六、簡(jiǎn)潔。在lesson 12,(1.3)里有一句對(duì)荒島理想生活的描述,看起來(lái)非常普通:Life there is simple and good.這句話非常干凈利落地描述了整個(gè)理想化后的荒島生活,我們寫作也是如此,一篇好的文章就應(yīng)該是simple and good.
    七、語(yǔ)言的渲染力。Lesson 42.(1.29) In the eerie silence of the cavern, the only sound that could be heard was made by water which dripped continuously from the high dome above them. 僅僅用eerie來(lái)修飾silence 就充分體現(xiàn)了這種寂靜的特別,使人有身臨其境的感覺。
    總而言之,學(xué)習(xí)新三,可以從選詞,結(jié)構(gòu),謀篇,修辭手法,語(yǔ)言的簡(jiǎn)潔與張力等各方面提高學(xué)生的寫作能力。