為了大家能夠更好地備考雅思考試，今天特意為大家整理了“雅思寫作失敗開頭范例”，希望對(duì)大家有幫助!
開頭一：中式英文，人見(jiàn)人暈
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life.
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower
opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city
centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For
example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do
bad things, he will get “baoying”.
開頭二：廢話連篇不知所云
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this
topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案：開門見(jiàn)山，直奔主題
In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to
get married.
Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book
or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have
a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to
read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more
important in our daily life.
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really
very very important!
開頭三：觀點(diǎn)模糊，態(tài)度曖昧
典型失敗案例：
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,
only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
開頭四：偏離主題，無(wú)軌電車
典型失敗案例：
Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and
quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you
agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have
these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,
music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our
friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
開頭五：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，慘不忍睹
典型失敗案例：
Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility
and also be punished? (雅思真題)
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are
not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish
parents too besides children is also should.
開頭六：過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單，沒(méi)有重點(diǎn)
典型失敗案例：
Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
開頭七：用詞不當(dāng)，表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)
典型失敗案例：
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they
are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
開頭八：意思重復(fù)，原地踏步
典型失敗案例：
Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And
it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes
harmful to our society.
開頭九： 觀點(diǎn)武斷，態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬
典型失敗案例：
Topic1-The importance of confidence
In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the
successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who
don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey
the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m
sure there will be no traffic problem any more.
開頭十：中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)，胡亂翻譯
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a
sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
正確說(shuō)法：Happiness lies in having many children
Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,
don’t know is don’t know”……
Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her
family?
Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,
rat’s son can make hole…
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people
always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.
開頭一：中式英文，人見(jiàn)人暈
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life.
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower
opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city
centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For
example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do
bad things, he will get “baoying”.
開頭二：廢話連篇不知所云
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this
topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案：開門見(jiàn)山，直奔主題
In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to
get married.
Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book
or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have
a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to
read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more
important in our daily life.
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really
very very important!
開頭三：觀點(diǎn)模糊，態(tài)度曖昧
典型失敗案例：
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,
only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
開頭四：偏離主題，無(wú)軌電車
典型失敗案例：
Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and
quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you
agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have
these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,
music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our
friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
開頭五：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，慘不忍睹
典型失敗案例：
Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility
and also be punished? (雅思真題)
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are
not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish
parents too besides children is also should.
開頭六：過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單，沒(méi)有重點(diǎn)
典型失敗案例：
Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
開頭七：用詞不當(dāng)，表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)
典型失敗案例：
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they
are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
開頭八：意思重復(fù)，原地踏步
典型失敗案例：
Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And
it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes
harmful to our society.
開頭九： 觀點(diǎn)武斷，態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬
典型失敗案例：
Topic1-The importance of confidence
In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the
successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who
don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey
the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m
sure there will be no traffic problem any more.
開頭十：中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)，胡亂翻譯
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a
sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
正確說(shuō)法：Happiness lies in having many children
Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,
don’t know is don’t know”……
Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her
family?
Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,
rat’s son can make hole…
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people
always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.