應(yīng)用文中的道歉信是指因過(guò)失或疏忽做錯(cuò)了事，給別人帶來(lái)了麻煩或損失，發(fā)覺(jué)后要立即寫(xiě)信給對(duì)方賠禮道歉時(shí)寫(xiě)的信件。道歉是一種禮貌，道歉信要寫(xiě)得坦率，誠(chéng)懇。下面是為大家準(zhǔn)備的2010年高考英語(yǔ)試題山東卷的道歉信寫(xiě)作，一起看看吧。
【題目要求】
假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解釋原因；
3. 另約時(shí)間。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120~150；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
【審題】
1. 一封道歉信；
2. 文體：電子郵件。
3. 半開(kāi)放：“原因”需要考生自編。
英語(yǔ)考場(chǎng)作文一般說(shuō)來(lái)長(zhǎng)時(shí)間25分鐘，而且有字?jǐn)?shù)要求120-150。仔細(xì)審題凸顯重要。題干內(nèi)的開(kāi)放性——解釋原因“因故”而未給出“故”的確切內(nèi)容，要求考生自己思考合理的緣由，那么在跨文化背景的前提下，一個(gè)什么樣的理由才是來(lái)自英國(guó)的Tom可以接受的呢？
據(jù)參加當(dāng)年高考閱卷的老師說(shuō)，大部分考生寫(xiě)的原因是：爺爺奶奶生病、父母臨時(shí)有要事需要他們或者是臨時(shí)調(diào)課等諸如此類(lèi)。拿高考來(lái)說(shuō)，基本閱卷老師皆中國(guó)老師，可以理解這樣的解釋?zhuān)灰Z(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤不是太多，考生拿到及格線(xiàn)以上沒(méi)有問(wèn)題。
但是，從道歉信的寫(xiě)作角度來(lái)講，因?yàn)镃ultural differences之故，如上原因，感覺(jué)只是在李華為自己的違約找了個(gè)借口，而失真誠(chéng)感，對(duì)于在英國(guó)長(zhǎng)大的Tom,恐難接受。既然道歉，作者就應(yīng)該換位思考，所編的理由，符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文化的背景。既然Tom身在中國(guó)，對(duì)于李華要去機(jī)場(chǎng)接從國(guó)外回來(lái)的李明，而且是陪同李明的父母前往，帶著濃濃的親情、友情，這樣的描述會(huì)使得Tom讀來(lái)就自然而然地認(rèn)為你的失約是無(wú)可厚非的，可以理解的。
以上是分析2010山東卷英語(yǔ)作文的內(nèi)容選材時(shí)，給學(xué)生做的分析。此類(lèi)內(nèi)容學(xué)生一看題，第一直覺(jué)就是站在李華的角度來(lái)思考，其實(shí)犯了道歉信的大忌。
【優(yōu)秀范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you. I’m writing to tell you the reason for it.
Just now, my cousin, Li Ming, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that he would return the next Saturday morning. He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents. As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I’ll have to help him in the first place.
I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.
Wish you have a good time this weekend!
Yours,
Li Ming
【道歉信模板】
Dear ______,
①I(mǎi) am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.
②The reason is that ______（介紹原因）. ③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
④Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【道歉信中開(kāi)頭段常用句式和套話(huà)】
I am writing this letter to express my regret…
I am writing to apologize for…
I would like to give you my apology for…
I am very sorry to say that…
I must apologize about (not) doing sth…
Please accept my sincere apology for…
I am writing to say sorry for…
I am terribly sorry, but…
【道歉信中結(jié)尾段常用句式和套話(huà)】
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Please allow me to say sorry again.
Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
I am sorry that I can’t… and trust that you will be able to understand.
【題目要求】
假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解釋原因；
3. 另約時(shí)間。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120~150；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
【審題】
1. 一封道歉信；
2. 文體：電子郵件。
3. 半開(kāi)放：“原因”需要考生自編。
英語(yǔ)考場(chǎng)作文一般說(shuō)來(lái)長(zhǎng)時(shí)間25分鐘，而且有字?jǐn)?shù)要求120-150。仔細(xì)審題凸顯重要。題干內(nèi)的開(kāi)放性——解釋原因“因故”而未給出“故”的確切內(nèi)容，要求考生自己思考合理的緣由，那么在跨文化背景的前提下，一個(gè)什么樣的理由才是來(lái)自英國(guó)的Tom可以接受的呢？
據(jù)參加當(dāng)年高考閱卷的老師說(shuō)，大部分考生寫(xiě)的原因是：爺爺奶奶生病、父母臨時(shí)有要事需要他們或者是臨時(shí)調(diào)課等諸如此類(lèi)。拿高考來(lái)說(shuō)，基本閱卷老師皆中國(guó)老師，可以理解這樣的解釋?zhuān)灰Z(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤不是太多，考生拿到及格線(xiàn)以上沒(méi)有問(wèn)題。
但是，從道歉信的寫(xiě)作角度來(lái)講，因?yàn)镃ultural differences之故，如上原因，感覺(jué)只是在李華為自己的違約找了個(gè)借口，而失真誠(chéng)感，對(duì)于在英國(guó)長(zhǎng)大的Tom,恐難接受。既然道歉，作者就應(yīng)該換位思考，所編的理由，符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文化的背景。既然Tom身在中國(guó)，對(duì)于李華要去機(jī)場(chǎng)接從國(guó)外回來(lái)的李明，而且是陪同李明的父母前往，帶著濃濃的親情、友情，這樣的描述會(huì)使得Tom讀來(lái)就自然而然地認(rèn)為你的失約是無(wú)可厚非的，可以理解的。
以上是分析2010山東卷英語(yǔ)作文的內(nèi)容選材時(shí)，給學(xué)生做的分析。此類(lèi)內(nèi)容學(xué)生一看題，第一直覺(jué)就是站在李華的角度來(lái)思考，其實(shí)犯了道歉信的大忌。
【優(yōu)秀范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you. I’m writing to tell you the reason for it.
Just now, my cousin, Li Ming, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that he would return the next Saturday morning. He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents. As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I’ll have to help him in the first place.
I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.
Wish you have a good time this weekend!
Yours,
Li Ming
【道歉信模板】
Dear ______,
①I(mǎi) am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）.
②The reason is that ______（介紹原因）. ③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
④Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【道歉信中開(kāi)頭段常用句式和套話(huà)】
I am writing this letter to express my regret…
I am writing to apologize for…
I would like to give you my apology for…
I am very sorry to say that…
I must apologize about (not) doing sth…
Please accept my sincere apology for…
I am writing to say sorry for…
I am terribly sorry, but…
【道歉信中結(jié)尾段常用句式和套話(huà)】
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Please allow me to say sorry again.
Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
I am sorry that I can’t… and trust that you will be able to understand.