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advantages of getting a loan from the bank for my studies
i am a college student f rom a farme r’s family in a mountaineous area . a year ago , i was admitted to a famous univer - sity . befor e ente ring the unive rsity , i was told tha t the necessary expenses during my four year s’study would cost nearly fifty thousand yuan . my parents had collected all the money ther e was to collect , including the money bor rowed f rom their relatives , but it was hardly enough to meet the needs . t hen , good news came that i could resor t to the bank for a loan . i thought it was a good idea and so i did it .
my decision was based on the following con sider ations : first , with the loan i can pay the tuition and support my life on the campus .
secondly , i don’t have to depend on my par ents who are always wor rying about the enormou s family expenditur e .thirdly , i will always have the pr ess ure upon me which forces me to study the hard way .
four thly , i have to live a very simple life and save every coin possible . t o sooner liquidat e the debt , i sometimes work as a home tutor , sometimes a door-to-door salesman , sometimes a restaur ant waiter .
fifthly , while doing par t-time jobs , i have accumulated a lot of social experience , bitt er sometimes , sweet occasionally , but happy all the time .
i think the above ar e the advantages the loan f rom the bank has brought to me . t hey are beneficial not only to my studies at the unive rsity but also to my future career , because i firmly believe in the saying“ har sh life produces a diligent and intelligent man .”
cet6六級(jí)作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析：
· 上大學(xué)需要費(fèi)用
* 家庭困難
* 助學(xué)貸款好消息
·優(yōu)點(diǎn)
* 付學(xué)費(fèi)和生活費(fèi)
* 不依賴(lài)父母
* 有壓力感
* 生活儉樸, 勤工儉學(xué)
* 品嘗社會(huì)百味
· 結(jié)論
* 艱苦的生活能培養(yǎng)出勤奮而有智慧的人
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cet6六級(jí)作文內(nèi)容分析：
本文是一篇記敘文。作者以第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě), 首先記敘希望助學(xué)貸款之由來(lái), 主體部分列出了助學(xué)貸款之五大優(yōu)點(diǎn)。后一句引言“ 艱苦的生活能培養(yǎng)出勤奮而有智慧的人”結(jié)束全文。這類(lèi)題目的寫(xiě)作必須整理出幾條輕重相當(dāng)?shù)膬?yōu)點(diǎn), 每條優(yōu)點(diǎn)的表達(dá)意義要完整, 可用一句、兩句或多句來(lái)寫(xiě)。本文較適合六級(jí)水平。
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cet6六級(jí)作文萬(wàn)能句型：
loan n . 貸款
mountaineous ar ea 山區(qū)
be admitt ed to 被錄取入
expen se n . 費(fèi)用
collect all the money there was to collect 收 集所有能收集到的錢(qián)
resort to 求助于
tuition n . 學(xué)費(fèi)
family expenditure 家庭開(kāi)支
study the ha rd way 努力學(xué)習(xí)
liquidat e the debt 償清欠債
home tutor 家教
door- to-door salesman 上門(mén)推銷(xiāo)員
accumulate v . 積累
social experience 社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)
bitte r sometimes , sweet occasionally , but happy all the
time 時(shí)苦時(shí)甜, 但總是很快樂(lè)
beneficial a . 有利的
ha rsh life produces a diligent and intelligent man . 艱苦的生活能培養(yǎng)出勤奮而有智慧的人