2016托福寫作范文:上課

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  •     托福獨立寫作題目:上課
        Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
        托福獨立寫作范文:
        Some people think that university students should be able to choose whether to go to classes or not. I could not disagree more with this idea. Even though students can have excused absences, for example, when they are sick or have something emergent to attend to, generally they should be required to go to classes. In fact, attending classes has many advantages, three of them most important: learning from the teacher, interacting with classmates, and developing responsibility.
        Attending classes has the benefit of receiving the best that a teacher can offer. Good teachers review the difficult and key points of the material in the course textbook. The best teachers do more than this. They conduct group discussion of the material, and present alternative points of view on the same issue. This increases students' real understanding and critical thinking. Moreover, teachers supplement the textbook material with information provided by guest speakers, which further enhances students' understanding. All this implies that, if students are absent from class, it is tantamount to forfeiting their right to full benefits of teacher-guided learning in class.
        Going to classes also helps students learn how to work with their classmates. In class, students need to put forward their ideas. They have to take questions from their classmates and when their classmates have a different point of view, they have to defend their own. All this is conducted in a friendly manner. Interaction of this kind teaches students about how to work with other people.
        Finally, going to classes enables students to develop responsibility. Having to finish all the assigned readings before class helps prepare them for getting a job. So does requirement of being punctual for class. Similarly, having to complete assignments on time for class helps them to foster responsibility.
        Admittedly, students can obtain information from books, but they benefit a great deal more when they go to classes. They have the advantage of learning from their teacher, of interacting with other people, and of developing the responsibility required of a good worker as well as a good student. If these skills in life are in no sense optional, how can attending classes in a university be optional?
        原文來源:哈佛21篇
        托福獨立寫作解析
        1. Attending classes has the benefit(好處=advantages) of receiving the best that a teacher can offer.
        上課有能夠接收好的老師提供信息的好
        2. Good teachers review the difficult and key points(重點) of the material in the course textbook.
        好老師復習課本材料上的重難點
        3. The best teachers do more than(不僅)this.
        好的老師不僅做這些。
        4. They conduct group discussion(進行小組討論)of the material, and present alternative(不同的)points of view(觀點)on the same issue.
        他們對材料進行小組討論,并且對同一問題提出不同觀點。
        5. This increases students' real understanding and critical thinking(批判性思維).
        這會增加學生的真正理解和批片性思維。
        6. Moreover(而且=furthermore,表示遞進關(guān)系), teachers supplement(補充) the textbook material with information provided by guestspeakers(done做后置定語), which further enhances(提升,促進=improve) students' understanding.
        而且,老師會用客座教授提供的信息對課本材料進行補充,這會進一步提升學生的理解。
        7.All this implies(暗示,說明=indicates) that, if students are absent(缺席的)from class, it is tantamount(相等的)to forfeiting(剝奪) their right to full benefits of(發(fā)揮...的好處)teacher-guided(老師引導的,students-centered學生中心的)learning in class.
        所有的這些意味著,如果學生缺席課堂,這等同于剝奪他們發(fā)揮老師引導的課堂的好處。
        8. Going to classes also helps students learn how to work with(與...合作) their classmates.
        上課也會幫助學生學會如何與同學合作
        9. In class, students need to put forward(提出) their ideas. 在課堂上,學生需要突出他們的觀點。
        10.They have to take(have to do不得不/必須做sth) questions from their classmates and when their classmates have a different point of view, they have to defend(辯護)their own.
        他們必須接受來自同學們的問題而且danger他們的同學有不同觀點時,他們必須為自己的觀點辯護。
        11. All this is conducted(做)in a friendly manner. Interaction of this kind(這種互動)teaches students about how to work with other people.
        這種互動教給學生如何與他人合作
        12. Finally,going to classes enables students to develop(enable sb to do sth使某人能做某事)responsibility.
        后,上課使學生能夠培養(yǎng)責任心。
        13. Having to finish all the assigned(布置的)readings before class helps prepare them for getting(prepare sb for doing為sb做sth做準備)a job.
        必須在上課前完成布置的閱讀幫助他們?yōu)閷碚业焦ぷ髯鰷蕚洹?BR>    14. So does(so does/do...,...也是) requirement of being punctual for(準時...) class.
        課堂準時的要求也是如此
        15.Similarly, having to complete assignments on time(punctually) for class helps them to foster responsibility(=develop responsibility).
        同理,必須按時完成課堂作業(yè)幫助他們培養(yǎng)責任心
        16. Admittedly(誠然,表示讓步關(guān)系), students can obtaininformation(獲得信息,obtain=gain=acquire) from books, but they benefit(v.受益) a great deal(許多) more when they go to classes.
        誠然,學生可以從書本上獲得信息,但是當他們?nèi)ド险n的時候,他們獲益更多。
        17. They have the advantage(=benefit)of learning from their teacher, of interacting with other people, and of developing the responsibility required of a good worker(后置定語)as well as(=and,也)a good student.
        他們有向老師學習,和其他人互動和培養(yǎng)一個好員工所需的責任心的好處。
        18. If these skills in life are in no sense(=not不是) optional(可選擇的), how can attending classes in a university be optional?
        如果這些生活技能不是可選擇的,在大學上課怎么能選擇呢?