2016年12月10日托福寫(xiě)作機(jī)經(jīng)

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    【綜合寫(xiě)作】
    關(guān)于加拿大一種當(dāng)?shù)卣Z(yǔ)言的保護(hù)。閱讀說(shuō)了幾個(gè)影響語(yǔ)言消失的factor,聽(tīng)力反駁。
    閱讀文章:
    1. 根據(jù)一個(gè)survey,當(dāng)?shù)厥鶜q以下才有百分之二十的人說(shuō)當(dāng)?shù)卦?,而且在減少。
    2. 當(dāng)?shù)貪O業(yè)為了實(shí)現(xiàn)國(guó)際化,只說(shuō)international話,比如說(shuō)像English這種語(yǔ)言。因此,父母不鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)當(dāng)?shù)卦挕?BR>    3. 電視和電臺(tái)大部分都是用English和French播的,這對(duì)年輕人影響比較大的。所以也造成這種語(yǔ)言的后繼無(wú)人。
    聽(tīng)力文章:
    1. 閱讀中survey的數(shù)據(jù)不準(zhǔn)確,實(shí)際收據(jù)比這個(gè)要多。因?yàn)閟urvey 只是針對(duì)traditional的當(dāng)?shù)卦?,而年輕人說(shuō)的也是當(dāng)?shù)卦?,只不過(guò)比較modern。
    2. 聽(tīng)力說(shuō)及時(shí)發(fā)展?jié)O業(yè)也還是需要和local交易的。而local人只說(shuō)當(dāng)?shù)卦?,所以在工作中說(shuō)當(dāng)?shù)卦捯埠苤匾?,父母?jìng)円惨庾R(shí)到了,開(kāi)始讓孩子們學(xué)。
    3. 聽(tīng)力說(shuō)確實(shí)電視和電臺(tái)是這樣的,但是網(wǎng)絡(luò)媒體并不這樣,人家大部分還是用native language的,而且聽(tīng)眾也挺多的。
    【獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作】
    Which option do you prefer? Travel to foreign countries when you are young than when you are older. Give specific reasons or examples to support your decision.
    題目解析:
    這道題算是一道老題,和今年5月29日那場(chǎng)考試的題目(It is better to take risks and explore new things when you are older than when you are young.)極其類(lèi)似。并且,也呼應(yīng)了2015年北美考場(chǎng)的真題。所以,部分同學(xué)對(duì)此可能并不陌生。
    寫(xiě)作思路解析:
    選擇年輕時(shí)旅行
    1. 豐富生活
    列出細(xì)節(jié)(the Golden Gate Bridge ,The Pyramids and The Louvre)具體描繪世界之五彩繽紛。拿書(shū)本所學(xué)和實(shí)際經(jīng)歷對(duì)比,感嘆紙上得來(lái)終覺(jué)淺。拿年輕實(shí)現(xiàn)旅行夢(mèng)想和年老后悔對(duì)比,鼓勵(lì)年輕人盡早行動(dòng)。
    2. 對(duì)未來(lái)有幫助
    一是能在旅行中經(jīng)歷困難,解決困難。二是交到更多朋友,培養(yǎng)同理心,看問(wèn)題更多深刻。
    3. 讓步段:老年人雖然更有時(shí)間和金錢(qián),但是旅行應(yīng)趁早,可以提前體驗(yàn)到生活的多彩,而且老了身體可能還不好就會(huì)錯(cuò)過(guò)。
    Globalization has made the world become smaller and the people from all over the world become closer. Many people show a desire to experience different natural and cultural environment in foreign countries. Traveling is usually their first choice. Although the cost may be high for the young, from my perspective, traveling to foreign countries in youth is better than at old age.
    To begin with, the young are going to obtain a richer life through traveling to foreign countries. The world is a stunning place, full of treasures for people to explore. Although the young may learn the magnificence of The Pyramids and The Louvre in books, their impression of them are just limited to pictures and verbal descriptions. Only when the young visit these places in person will the sites become part of their lives. If one wants to ride a bicycle across the Golden Gate Bridge in youth, but he fails to achieve the dream, he will live in regret for the rest of his life. On the contrary, if he achieves it, he will have many proud moments when he looks back on his life.
    Besides, traveling to foreign countries in youth helps the young to perform better in their future careers and studies. The charm of traveling lies in its unexpected adventures. The young may encounter all kinds of difficulties, but anything is possible as long as they have confidence and wills. Traveling to different countries will force the young to care for issues that are bigger than those in their daily lives. Compassion and love will arise in the heart of the young for the pain and suffering experienced by others. Deep and consistent connections may be created with those new friends who they meet during traveling. Along with the new friends during the trip, the young can listen to the sour, sweet, bitter or hot stories, talk to people with different personalities and acquire insights on their own lives.
    Granted, some people may argue that young people usually lack money and they are supposed to work hard. Retirement period is a good time to travel to foreign countries, because the senior could usually afford both the time and money. However, it’s worthwhile to invest money and sacrifice time into tasting various aspects of life in the world as early as possible.
    In conclusion, it is highly rewarding to travel in foreign countries in youth and it is better to start earlier, for people won’t always be young. Instead of regretting at old ages due to poor physical conditions, it is better to travel in youth.
    

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