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Don't be afraid to be different
1.On this picture is vivid to show us, 2.three pencils on the cartoon, 3.but only one is eraser, others 4.are show us their pen points. Such an image shows us that not only pen points are very useful to us, but also eraser is very helpful when we have mistakes, so 5.don't be afraid about different to others and you are special and there must be useful for your talent.
In the real world we often 6.to see some people have special talent. But 7.mostly time their talent can't be admitted. But 8.their easy to be successful in some field, 9.like Bill Gates drop outschool to 10.working about software and computer program. Now he becomes one of the richest person in the world. His company：Microsoft，is very famous and greatly promotes our lifestyle.
In my opinion, if someone are think different is a guilty, 11.they will be afraid to show their specialty. Difference is a gift that god give to us, showing we have some special talent to do some special things. Don't be afraid for your difference, that is important to us.
批注：
1、開篇第一句幾乎沒有對(duì)的，on this picture是介詞短語不能作為主語成分;vivid是形容詞詞性，不能去修飾動(dòng)詞show;be to do表示將來要發(fā)生的動(dòng)作，這里用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表示就可以。整句改為：This picture vividly shows us that...
2、用there be句型，去掉on the cartoon,與上句重復(fù)出現(xiàn)。
3、在英文中，兩句話之間不能用逗號(hào)連接，簡單的就是用and連接起來。
4、實(shí)義動(dòng)詞與be動(dòng)詞不能一起并列使用，去掉are。
5、be afraid to be different
6、to see是不定式不能做謂語動(dòng)詞，把to去掉;句式雜糅，people have special talent是個(gè)完整的句子，改為前邊句子的從句，改為people who have.....
7、副詞不能修飾名詞，修飾time改為Most of the time
8、their是形容詞性物主代詞，不能做主語，后邊得跟名詞，改為They are
9、改為定語從句，drop前加上who,并改為過去時(shí)態(tài)。
10、不定式to do,為動(dòng)詞原形，改為work in the field of software and computer program.
11、同樣的錯(cuò)誤，實(shí)義動(dòng)詞與be動(dòng)詞不能一起并列使用，去掉are，主語是第三人稱，改為thinks difference
以上這位學(xué)員的基礎(chǔ)很薄弱，大家要引以為鑒，看看是否自己存在這樣的問題，尤其是句式雜糅;謂語動(dòng)詞混用等。希望大家都能夠順利的復(fù)習(xí)考研英語。