下面以sleeping話題為例,分別是一般的老師作答和雅思口語考官的回答進(jìn)行對比,從詞匯,語法,連貫度等能夠看得到和感受得到的方面進(jìn)行分析,看看各自的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)以及得分水平:
1. How many hours do you sleep every day? Why? “你每天睡多少個(gè)小時(shí)?為什么?”
老師回答:Mostly 6-7 hours. For me, I still need about 8-9 to feel really alert throughout the day. If I sleep any less than 6 hours I will feel tired the next day.
老師的回答,首先是針對問題直接作答“Mostly 6-7 hours.”然后for me,進(jìn)行解釋,少于六小時(shí)很累。看起來整個(gè)回答也是完整的,而且句式和詞匯都避免了單一,能夠拿到6.5分左右的水平。那么為什么各個(gè)方面都沒有問題卻只能拿到6.5分呢?其實(shí)考生們在讀的時(shí)候會發(fā)現(xiàn),似乎少了一些什么,英式表達(dá)?交流的感覺?……所以下面來對比一下考官的回答,一探究竟。
考官回答:It’s kind of hard to say for sure, but I guess on average, I probably get about 7 or 8 hours of sleep a day, something like that. I’m normally in bed at about 11 ish, and I usually get up sometime around 7. So yeah, 7 to 8 hours is about the norm for me.
最開始說明了對這個(gè)問題的總體的看法,然后則是but I guess on average,交流標(biāo)記詞的感覺,似乎給人一種在和某人交流的感覺。然后陳述自己的時(shí)間安排,用了something like that顯得比較地道,符合英美人士說話的習(xí)慣。I’m……,and I usually……,So yeah……比較連貫。再整體來看看考官答案,沒有華麗的辭藻和過難的句子,但是卻非常的地道,給人一種和某人交流的感覺,且似乎是在聽英美人士說話。而且句式也不止簡單句,所以綜合詞匯,句式和連貫度,以及整體的效果,此答案可以拿到8分的水平,當(dāng)然這里沒有考慮發(fā)音和考場具體情況。
上述兩個(gè)范文其實(shí)都是非常不錯(cuò)的,但是考慮到多方面的因素,建議考生選擇考官答案進(jìn)行參考??忌€可以參考下面的兩個(gè)范文的對比,也是十分有代表性的,同樣是非常好的范文,但是考官回答會更加的貼切,給人一種交流的感覺以及英美人士說話的感覺。
2. Is taking a nap important?
老師回答:The desire for a short nap during the day does not arise out of laziness, rather the need for the body to rejuvenate. Napping is a pleasurable yet brief period of sleep when our minds and bodies can take a break. Though many judge it as a pastime for children or the elderly, napping can benefit people of all ages.(很規(guī)整,但是偏書面化,句式和詞匯無可挑剔,內(nèi)容連貫度可以再增加連接詞和交流標(biāo)記詞)
考官回答:No, I wouldn’t say it is. And also I think it kind of depends on the person, because some people do feel the need to have a nap to give them energy for the rest of the day, but for others, like myself, we can quite easily get through the day without taking a nap.(簡單,口語化,給人地道的感覺)
1. How many hours do you sleep every day? Why? “你每天睡多少個(gè)小時(shí)?為什么?”
老師回答:Mostly 6-7 hours. For me, I still need about 8-9 to feel really alert throughout the day. If I sleep any less than 6 hours I will feel tired the next day.
老師的回答,首先是針對問題直接作答“Mostly 6-7 hours.”然后for me,進(jìn)行解釋,少于六小時(shí)很累。看起來整個(gè)回答也是完整的,而且句式和詞匯都避免了單一,能夠拿到6.5分左右的水平。那么為什么各個(gè)方面都沒有問題卻只能拿到6.5分呢?其實(shí)考生們在讀的時(shí)候會發(fā)現(xiàn),似乎少了一些什么,英式表達(dá)?交流的感覺?……所以下面來對比一下考官的回答,一探究竟。
考官回答:It’s kind of hard to say for sure, but I guess on average, I probably get about 7 or 8 hours of sleep a day, something like that. I’m normally in bed at about 11 ish, and I usually get up sometime around 7. So yeah, 7 to 8 hours is about the norm for me.
最開始說明了對這個(gè)問題的總體的看法,然后則是but I guess on average,交流標(biāo)記詞的感覺,似乎給人一種在和某人交流的感覺。然后陳述自己的時(shí)間安排,用了something like that顯得比較地道,符合英美人士說話的習(xí)慣。I’m……,and I usually……,So yeah……比較連貫。再整體來看看考官答案,沒有華麗的辭藻和過難的句子,但是卻非常的地道,給人一種和某人交流的感覺,且似乎是在聽英美人士說話。而且句式也不止簡單句,所以綜合詞匯,句式和連貫度,以及整體的效果,此答案可以拿到8分的水平,當(dāng)然這里沒有考慮發(fā)音和考場具體情況。
上述兩個(gè)范文其實(shí)都是非常不錯(cuò)的,但是考慮到多方面的因素,建議考生選擇考官答案進(jìn)行參考??忌€可以參考下面的兩個(gè)范文的對比,也是十分有代表性的,同樣是非常好的范文,但是考官回答會更加的貼切,給人一種交流的感覺以及英美人士說話的感覺。
2. Is taking a nap important?
老師回答:The desire for a short nap during the day does not arise out of laziness, rather the need for the body to rejuvenate. Napping is a pleasurable yet brief period of sleep when our minds and bodies can take a break. Though many judge it as a pastime for children or the elderly, napping can benefit people of all ages.(很規(guī)整,但是偏書面化,句式和詞匯無可挑剔,內(nèi)容連貫度可以再增加連接詞和交流標(biāo)記詞)
考官回答:No, I wouldn’t say it is. And also I think it kind of depends on the person, because some people do feel the need to have a nap to give them energy for the rest of the day, but for others, like myself, we can quite easily get through the day without taking a nap.(簡單,口語化,給人地道的感覺)