4月23日托福綜合寫(xiě)作
Topic 議題：feeders are bad for birds |
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Reading |
Listening |
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Sub-point 1分論點(diǎn)1 |
>Birds gather easily, thus spreading diseases. |
The diseases that spread in Hinch are always group-by-group. It has nothing to do with humans. |
Sub-point2分論點(diǎn)2 |
Birds are exposed to predators. |
If humans feed birds, extra nutrition will make them stronger and healthier,enhancing the speed of reproduction. The number of new-born birds will be larger than the number of dead birds. |
Sub-point3分論點(diǎn)3 |
It 眀椀氀氀 influence birds’ migration pattern. |
It will not disturb the pattern of natural migration, because birds will depend on shortened sunlight to decide the migration time. |
Sample answer:
The writer and the speaker have a debate on feeding bird during the winter. The writer believes it has negative influences on birds, which is opposed by the following lecture.
First, the writer claims that birds gather easily, thus spreading diseases. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him/her, the diseases that spread in Hinch are always group-by-group. It has nothing to do with humans.
Secondly, the passage states that bad weather results in shortage of food supply. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that if humans feed birds, extra nutrition will make them stronger and healthier, enhancing the speed of reproduction. The number of new-born birds will be larger than the number of dead birds.
Last, the writer argues that it will influence birds’ migration pattern. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. It will not disturb the pattern of natural migration, because birds will depend on shortened sunlight to decide the migration time.
4月23日托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作：
作文題目： |
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing sports teaches people more important lessons about life. |
題型類(lèi)別: |
同不同意類(lèi) |
題材類(lèi)別： |
事實(shí)類(lèi) |
相關(guān)舊題： |
2010.12.19ML/2015.6.14ML |
寫(xiě)作思路： |
這道題是比較典型的事實(shí)類(lèi)題目。可以采取拆分的方法比較好解題。 可以拆不同的sports或者lessons都可以。我們可以說(shuō)籃球教會(huì)我們團(tuán)隊(duì)合作精神，長(zhǎng)跑教會(huì)我們堅(jiān)持不懈的毅力以及蹦極教會(huì)我們勇氣。當(dāng)然還有很多其他方面，比如運(yùn)動(dòng)教會(huì)我們樂(lè)觀的心態(tài)，教會(huì)我們競(jìng)爭(zhēng)意識(shí)，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力等等。想到思路之后還要注意細(xì)節(jié)的展開(kāi)，充分論證。 |
寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)： |
Agree: 單邊：（任選三點(diǎn)即可）
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4月23日托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作真題重現(xiàn)：
Getting advice from people who are older than you is more valuable than from people of your age.
4月23日托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作題目分析：
題目大意：從年長(zhǎng)的人獲得建議要比從同齡人獲得建議更有價(jià)值。此題目重復(fù)2014年11月8日B卷原題，解題思路和老年人的建議有沒(méi)有價(jià)值是一樣的。波波建議選擇同意，對(duì)advice 進(jìn)行拆分，拆分成工作和教育兩個(gè)角度，分別證明年長(zhǎng)人的意見(jiàn)的作用。
參考范文：
Since any individual, whether young or old, will encounter various problems and troubles throughout the whole life, it is certainly necessary to consult others for suggestions and solutions. Nowadays many young people hold that advice from their peers is usually more valuable than that from people of older age, because people at the same age are more likely to understand their situation. However, as far as I am concerned, it is a wise move to listen to the older people’s suggestions, because rich experience and profound knowledge accumulated by older people will offer us a proper guidance in many ways, especially in the aspects of receiving education and hunting for a job.
First of all, consider the educational issue. Obviously, students are constantly faced with various upcoming problems and puzzles in the course of furthering their study. As for high school students, the would-be undergraduates, how to successful apply for an ideal university and choose a promosing major usually matters a lot. In order to unravel the above puzzels, they had better consult those people of older age who will give advices such as passing TOEFL with top score and participating various extracurricular activities. In fact, the above experience is exclusive to those who have undergone the whole process of applying for university. Also, as newcomers entering college or universities, the freshmen are usually confronted with various troubles while embarking on the brandnew campus life. To be specific, some students from disadvantaged families may be concerned about how to gain scholarship from school. The sophermores and junior students are likely to provide practical instructions instead of their classmates.
Furthermore, the same logic can apply to job-hunting. After leaving schools, graduates will enter the highly competitive job market. Due to the lack of knowledge of the real working environment, they are in great need of instructions and suggestions from senior employees. To be specific, senior employees can hold a interview training, in which students will be informed of how to dress up, how to write a resume and how to respond to the questions from interviewers. Also, the skills of communicating efficiently with the employers and the ability to get along well with co-workers will be imparted to potential employees. On the contrary, people at the same age with us are also still feel confused about how to seek an ideal job, thus reducing the value of the suggestion given by them.
Admittedly, the generation gap between us and people of older age may poses an obstruction to communication between them. However, the above claim is far from the truth. With the improvement of educational background on the part of the elder, they are able to guide yongsters in a more acceptable way and thus the gap between the younger and the older can be well bridged.
In conclusion, the advice from the elder is of greater value than that from the peers, especially when we meet problems in education and career.