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1.覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；
2.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；
3.在使用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)或高級詞匯時允許有些許錯誤；
4.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
大部分考生在句型詞匯及句子連接方面達不到要求，導致低分。本文以2001年考題為例，談一談如何運用較復雜的句型語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。
2001年考題：
假設(shè)你是李華,你的澳大利亞朋友Dick聽說中國的中小學正在減輕學生的學習負擔, 來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一封回信，談一談減負給你的學習和生活帶來的變化。
周末活動 （減負前） 周末活動：（減負后）
白天： 上課，做作業(yè) 白天： 餐館博物館，學習電腦，繪畫
晚上： 做作業(yè) 晚上： 看新聞，讀書，看報
就寢時間： 11：30 就寢時間： 10：00
注意：
1．詞數(shù)為100左右
2．開頭已為你寫好
3．生詞： 減輕學習負擔—reduce learning load
Dear Dick，
How nice to hear from you again…….
當年大部分考生只是對圖表進行了簡單的翻譯，導致文章異常單調(diào)、重復，分數(shù)很不理想。如何才能在簡單的內(nèi)容上運用較復雜的句型詞匯呢？考生在寫“減負前”的情況時只會簡單地寫: I always had classes and did homework in the daytime and did homework at night. I often went to bed at 11:30. 這無異于簡單機械地翻譯中文！得分可想而知！
其實考生完全可以使用學過的比較復雜的句型語法結(jié)構(gòu)。例如我們可以使用too…to句型：I was too busy having classes and doing homework at weekends to go to bed before 11:30. 我們也可以使用定語從句: I used to spend whole weekends attending classes and doing homework, which often kept me up until 11:30 at night. 我們還可以使用倒裝句：Not until 11:30 PM could I go to bed because I had to finish my homework after having lessons by day. 或者：So busy was I attending classes and doing homework that I could not go to sleep before 11:30 at night. 我們甚至還可以使用擬人手法：Weekends used to find me attending school and doing homework.
由此讀者可以看出：高分和低分的作文的區(qū)別主要體現(xiàn)在語言形式方面。故考生努力的方向就應(yīng)該是有意識地，恰當?shù)厥褂帽容^復雜的句型語法和詞匯。讀者應(yīng)先培養(yǎng)這種意識，然后進行大量練習。下面的練習重點訓練的就是句型詞匯和有效連接，請讀者不要進行簡單的翻譯，而是通讀上下文，盡量多地使用復雜多樣的句型詞匯。
根據(jù)2001年考題填空。
Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again.
1.過去______________, I used to have classes all day and do homework at night. And I didn’t go to bed until 11:30.
2.連接詞______________, nowadays, I have more time做我想做的_______________________________________________________________.
周末變得更加豐富多彩了_________________________________________________________________.
3.白天___________________________, I often visit museums or 學電腦及繪畫____________________________________________________.
使用擬人句_________________________________________________________________.
4.In the evening,使用either…or句型_________________________________________________________________.
5.而且________________________________________________, I go to bed/sleep earlier than before—at ten o’clock.
6.發(fā)揮一句I hope __________________________________________________________________.
參考答案：
1．過去In the past , I used to have classes all day and do homework at night. And I didn’t go to bed until 11:30.
2．連接詞Fortunately/ However, nowadays, I have more time 做我想做的to do what I desire/like/ choose/ want/ prefer/am fond of .周末更加豐富多彩了the weekends have become more interesting/fun/ less tiring/ no longer study-centered/ exam-oriented .
3．白天In the daytime/ during the day, I often visit museums or 學電腦及繪畫learn computer and drawing/go to computer and drawing lessons.
使用擬人句 Daytime finds me visiting museums or learning computer and drawing.
4.In the evening, 使用either…or句型I can either watch news reports or read newspapers and books.
5.而且What is more/In addition/ Besides/ More importantly, I go to bed/sleep earlier than before—at ten o’clock.
6.發(fā)揮一句I hope things won’t have to change in the future/ can become even better/ the learning load could be further reduced. I hope you are also enjoying pleasant weekends now.
1.覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；
2.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；
3.在使用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)或高級詞匯時允許有些許錯誤；
4.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
大部分考生在句型詞匯及句子連接方面達不到要求，導致低分。本文以2001年考題為例，談一談如何運用較復雜的句型語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。
2001年考題：
假設(shè)你是李華,你的澳大利亞朋友Dick聽說中國的中小學正在減輕學生的學習負擔, 來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一封回信，談一談減負給你的學習和生活帶來的變化。
周末活動 （減負前） 周末活動：（減負后）
白天： 上課，做作業(yè) 白天： 餐館博物館，學習電腦，繪畫
晚上： 做作業(yè) 晚上： 看新聞，讀書，看報
就寢時間： 11：30 就寢時間： 10：00
注意：
1．詞數(shù)為100左右
2．開頭已為你寫好
3．生詞： 減輕學習負擔—reduce learning load
Dear Dick，
How nice to hear from you again…….
當年大部分考生只是對圖表進行了簡單的翻譯，導致文章異常單調(diào)、重復，分數(shù)很不理想。如何才能在簡單的內(nèi)容上運用較復雜的句型詞匯呢？考生在寫“減負前”的情況時只會簡單地寫: I always had classes and did homework in the daytime and did homework at night. I often went to bed at 11:30. 這無異于簡單機械地翻譯中文！得分可想而知！
其實考生完全可以使用學過的比較復雜的句型語法結(jié)構(gòu)。例如我們可以使用too…to句型：I was too busy having classes and doing homework at weekends to go to bed before 11:30. 我們也可以使用定語從句: I used to spend whole weekends attending classes and doing homework, which often kept me up until 11:30 at night. 我們還可以使用倒裝句：Not until 11:30 PM could I go to bed because I had to finish my homework after having lessons by day. 或者：So busy was I attending classes and doing homework that I could not go to sleep before 11:30 at night. 我們甚至還可以使用擬人手法：Weekends used to find me attending school and doing homework.
由此讀者可以看出：高分和低分的作文的區(qū)別主要體現(xiàn)在語言形式方面。故考生努力的方向就應(yīng)該是有意識地，恰當?shù)厥褂帽容^復雜的句型語法和詞匯。讀者應(yīng)先培養(yǎng)這種意識，然后進行大量練習。下面的練習重點訓練的就是句型詞匯和有效連接，請讀者不要進行簡單的翻譯，而是通讀上下文，盡量多地使用復雜多樣的句型詞匯。
根據(jù)2001年考題填空。
Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again.
1.過去______________, I used to have classes all day and do homework at night. And I didn’t go to bed until 11:30.
2.連接詞______________, nowadays, I have more time做我想做的_______________________________________________________________.
周末變得更加豐富多彩了_________________________________________________________________.
3.白天___________________________, I often visit museums or 學電腦及繪畫____________________________________________________.
使用擬人句_________________________________________________________________.
4.In the evening,使用either…or句型_________________________________________________________________.
5.而且________________________________________________, I go to bed/sleep earlier than before—at ten o’clock.
6.發(fā)揮一句I hope __________________________________________________________________.
參考答案：
1．過去In the past , I used to have classes all day and do homework at night. And I didn’t go to bed until 11:30.
2．連接詞Fortunately/ However, nowadays, I have more time 做我想做的to do what I desire/like/ choose/ want/ prefer/am fond of .周末更加豐富多彩了the weekends have become more interesting/fun/ less tiring/ no longer study-centered/ exam-oriented .
3．白天In the daytime/ during the day, I often visit museums or 學電腦及繪畫learn computer and drawing/go to computer and drawing lessons.
使用擬人句 Daytime finds me visiting museums or learning computer and drawing.
4.In the evening, 使用either…or句型I can either watch news reports or read newspapers and books.
5.而且What is more/In addition/ Besides/ More importantly, I go to bed/sleep earlier than before—at ten o’clock.
6.發(fā)揮一句I hope things won’t have to change in the future/ can become even better/ the learning load could be further reduced. I hope you are also enjoying pleasant weekends now.