20108.27——8.31 GMAT作文機經 AI篇
AI5 “A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.
提綱：
1. 每一個政府官員都很難自己做出決策。每一個政令的頒布表面上仿佛是由一個人宣布的，其實背后的程序過程都是十分繁雜的。seperation of the three powers(the legislative, executive and judicial powers) In this work he argued that the three powers a state has are the Legislative, the Executive and the Judicial and that for a state to remain democratic, these powers must be separated and there must be checks and balances to prevent a single group from acquiring control over two or more of them.
任何一個政府官員做出決定都可能受到上司甚至是同事的限制，即使是總統(tǒng)，其實也僅僅是他的領導班子共同商議做出結論，更何況三權分立在保護了民主的同時本身也限制了每個個人甚至是每個group的決策權利以及對國家和社區(qū)的影響。
2. 而企業(yè)領導往往會有更大的決策權，而他們的決策也更容易被貫徹。在一個經濟為中心的國家相應的他們的對社區(qū)和國家的影響力也就更大。
3. 誠然在一個以政治為中心的國家里，企業(yè)領導對社區(qū)和國家產生影響的機會會較少，但經濟是政治的基礎，離開經濟政治是毫無影響力可言的。此外由于上面所說過的原因政府官員對社區(qū)和國家的影響同樣不會很大。
1. Admittedly, 領導人的作用有時不象企業(yè)家一樣apparent. 因為國家的發(fā)展，人們的生活，與企業(yè)closely related. 比如GATES，領導了信息產業(yè)革命;Rockefeller，控制國家的石油命脈took control of American oil supply。企業(yè)家通過影響企業(yè)的行為，從而直觀上影響人course of a community.
2. 但是，企業(yè)的一切影響is based on its existence, which is permitted by the government. 政府制定各種policy來允許企業(yè)的存在，企業(yè)家的一切行為需要被政府允許才能產生作用。
3. Moreover, 影響一個國家，需要強大的power, which can be only generated from absolutely authority. 這樣的絕對權力是企業(yè)不具備的。Yet even a cursory review of the history reveals substantial evidence that it is the government leader rather than the business leader that can make the pivotal decision when the nation is in crisis. 比如，在經濟recession，企業(yè)的力量無法使經濟好轉，revive the economy of the whole nation, 只有政府運用行政措施，制定positive policy to stimulate the companies and thus the economy of the whole nation. 比如Roosevelt. Bill Clinton. financial policy
1. Unlike business leader, government power is likely to subject to many more restraints. Our check-and-balance system, the legislation influence and the voting power are all factors that temper the power of government official to the course of a community or a nation. Moreover, powerful business leaders all too often seem to hold the actual legislative and judicial power by their financial supporting of official activities such as governmental elections.
2. While take more thorough consideration, the government official is likely to have more direct and broad influence on a community and a nation.
Evidence: various approach to influence other than financial approach
In addition the governmental official have the abilities to regulate commerce,
AI6 The most experienced candidate is usually the best candidate for the leadership position.
AI7 At the fast-paced world, employers can benefit more from energy and new ideas of younger workers than experience and wisdom of older workers.
AI5 “A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.
提綱：
1. 每一個政府官員都很難自己做出決策。每一個政令的頒布表面上仿佛是由一個人宣布的，其實背后的程序過程都是十分繁雜的。seperation of the three powers(the legislative, executive and judicial powers) In this work he argued that the three powers a state has are the Legislative, the Executive and the Judicial and that for a state to remain democratic, these powers must be separated and there must be checks and balances to prevent a single group from acquiring control over two or more of them.
任何一個政府官員做出決定都可能受到上司甚至是同事的限制，即使是總統(tǒng)，其實也僅僅是他的領導班子共同商議做出結論，更何況三權分立在保護了民主的同時本身也限制了每個個人甚至是每個group的決策權利以及對國家和社區(qū)的影響。
2. 而企業(yè)領導往往會有更大的決策權，而他們的決策也更容易被貫徹。在一個經濟為中心的國家相應的他們的對社區(qū)和國家的影響力也就更大。
3. 誠然在一個以政治為中心的國家里，企業(yè)領導對社區(qū)和國家產生影響的機會會較少，但經濟是政治的基礎，離開經濟政治是毫無影響力可言的。此外由于上面所說過的原因政府官員對社區(qū)和國家的影響同樣不會很大。
1. Admittedly, 領導人的作用有時不象企業(yè)家一樣apparent. 因為國家的發(fā)展，人們的生活，與企業(yè)closely related. 比如GATES，領導了信息產業(yè)革命;Rockefeller，控制國家的石油命脈took control of American oil supply。企業(yè)家通過影響企業(yè)的行為，從而直觀上影響人course of a community.
2. 但是，企業(yè)的一切影響is based on its existence, which is permitted by the government. 政府制定各種policy來允許企業(yè)的存在，企業(yè)家的一切行為需要被政府允許才能產生作用。
3. Moreover, 影響一個國家，需要強大的power, which can be only generated from absolutely authority. 這樣的絕對權力是企業(yè)不具備的。Yet even a cursory review of the history reveals substantial evidence that it is the government leader rather than the business leader that can make the pivotal decision when the nation is in crisis. 比如，在經濟recession，企業(yè)的力量無法使經濟好轉，revive the economy of the whole nation, 只有政府運用行政措施，制定positive policy to stimulate the companies and thus the economy of the whole nation. 比如Roosevelt. Bill Clinton. financial policy
1. Unlike business leader, government power is likely to subject to many more restraints. Our check-and-balance system, the legislation influence and the voting power are all factors that temper the power of government official to the course of a community or a nation. Moreover, powerful business leaders all too often seem to hold the actual legislative and judicial power by their financial supporting of official activities such as governmental elections.
2. While take more thorough consideration, the government official is likely to have more direct and broad influence on a community and a nation.
Evidence: various approach to influence other than financial approach
In addition the governmental official have the abilities to regulate commerce,
AI6 The most experienced candidate is usually the best candidate for the leadership position.
AI7 At the fast-paced world, employers can benefit more from energy and new ideas of younger workers than experience and wisdom of older workers.