Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence.
Discuss both of views and give your opinion.
The impetus behind the development of society is generated by people from all walks of life, especially politicians and scientists. People pass different judgments on them and it seems hard to define whose accomplishment is superior to the other.
There is no denying that politicians exert tremendous influence on the society, regardless of eras. They are entitled to represent the country and its citizens, with the authority conferred by law. As policy makers, their decisions and instructions may manipulate the situation of the country and even the whole world. For instance, the reform and opening-up policy, proposed by the great politician — Deng Xiaoping, brings China a brand-new look; its far-reaching impact has lasted so far and will remain effective. However, it is a remarkable fact that wrong decisions sometimes leads to disasters; the war is a good case in point.
Scientists are also regarded as an indispensable part in human history. Technological advancements made by them have revolutionized people’s original lifestyles and improved the quality of their lives. Yuan Longping, the “Father of hybrid rice”, dramatically boosts the production and his achievement is utilized throughout the world. Another devotion of scientists that cannot be neglected is that they shoulder the responsibility for popularity of science and technology, which helps wipe off ignorance and superstitions; geocentric theory of the universe brings a new face on people’s scientific knowledge. Unfortunately, their intentions may result in some negative consequence, out of their expectations. Whether GMF(Genetically modified food) is a blessing or curse is still under discussion.
In conclusion, we should admit that both politicians and scientists are driving force behind the social developments; they make contributions in various forms in different fields. It is their combined effort that promotes the progress of human society. On the other hand, the problems arising should not be underestimated.
專家點評：
本次考試題目要求考生比較政治家和科學家對社會的影響。應(yīng)該說，可以擴展的內(nèi)容還是很大的。因為題目中的關(guān)鍵詞politician, scientist和influence的范圍都很廣，因此考生在完成這篇文章的時候可以從政治家和科學家對于社會，家庭和個人的影響上進行闡述。需要注意的是，考生要對這兩者均進行比較，且要以實例來進行說服論證，沒有具體的政治家和科學家的例子，文章將會相當枯燥且沒有說服力。
范文在這一點上就做的很好，給出了非常切實的例子來進行說明。文章結(jié)構(gòu)安排相當工整，也比較易讀，如果能在結(jié)尾段給出自己的傾向，而不是以喊口號的方式結(jié)尾的話，文章將會更好。
Discuss both of views and give your opinion.
The impetus behind the development of society is generated by people from all walks of life, especially politicians and scientists. People pass different judgments on them and it seems hard to define whose accomplishment is superior to the other.
There is no denying that politicians exert tremendous influence on the society, regardless of eras. They are entitled to represent the country and its citizens, with the authority conferred by law. As policy makers, their decisions and instructions may manipulate the situation of the country and even the whole world. For instance, the reform and opening-up policy, proposed by the great politician — Deng Xiaoping, brings China a brand-new look; its far-reaching impact has lasted so far and will remain effective. However, it is a remarkable fact that wrong decisions sometimes leads to disasters; the war is a good case in point.
Scientists are also regarded as an indispensable part in human history. Technological advancements made by them have revolutionized people’s original lifestyles and improved the quality of their lives. Yuan Longping, the “Father of hybrid rice”, dramatically boosts the production and his achievement is utilized throughout the world. Another devotion of scientists that cannot be neglected is that they shoulder the responsibility for popularity of science and technology, which helps wipe off ignorance and superstitions; geocentric theory of the universe brings a new face on people’s scientific knowledge. Unfortunately, their intentions may result in some negative consequence, out of their expectations. Whether GMF(Genetically modified food) is a blessing or curse is still under discussion.
In conclusion, we should admit that both politicians and scientists are driving force behind the social developments; they make contributions in various forms in different fields. It is their combined effort that promotes the progress of human society. On the other hand, the problems arising should not be underestimated.
專家點評：
本次考試題目要求考生比較政治家和科學家對社會的影響。應(yīng)該說，可以擴展的內(nèi)容還是很大的。因為題目中的關(guān)鍵詞politician, scientist和influence的范圍都很廣，因此考生在完成這篇文章的時候可以從政治家和科學家對于社會，家庭和個人的影響上進行闡述。需要注意的是，考生要對這兩者均進行比較，且要以實例來進行說服論證，沒有具體的政治家和科學家的例子，文章將會相當枯燥且沒有說服力。
范文在這一點上就做的很好，給出了非常切實的例子來進行說明。文章結(jié)構(gòu)安排相當工整，也比較易讀，如果能在結(jié)尾段給出自己的傾向，而不是以喊口號的方式結(jié)尾的話，文章將會更好。