總體來講這篇四級(jí)作文出的基本中規(guī)中矩。
從結(jié)構(gòu)來看屬于典型的給定觀點(diǎn)的文章，三段論很清晰，任務(wù)很明確。能用到的語言也在我們的預(yù)測(cè)范圍之內(nèi)。
第一段，開頭的句子我們就可以寫到：Now we are entering a brand newera full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken placein people's attitude towards some traditional practice只是緊接著只需要把spelling放到后面點(diǎn)明即可。后面加上一句This issue has been brought into public focusand called for further concern。(這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
第一段就圓滿了。
第二段開頭任務(wù)明確寫原因：
開頭句子給大家備好了：(這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
A number of factors could accountfor the problem, but the following are the most critical ones。
這段的內(nèi)容是比較好想的，第一個(gè)原因我準(zhǔn)備從信息角度入手，并且在內(nèi)容的預(yù)測(cè)上我也是給同學(xué)們準(zhǔn)備了信息方面的句子(這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
First, information is expanding atsuch an increasing rate that our society is called the one of information. The informationis so immense that students haven' t ample energy and time to deal deeply withspelling,這里我用到了很好的代詞：one,和句式：so…that…既然是范文我就自己小小的發(fā)揮了一下：some computer programs, such as word ,havedone the spelling checking work for us 。
第二個(gè)原因：萬惡考為首，
Second, the standardized-test oriented way of Englishlearning, in which the high score can be achieved without spelling, putstudents to the position in which they have the quite reason to ignorespelling。
在這個(gè)句子中用到了同學(xué)們熟悉的表達(dá)：put students to the position。還很拽的用到了一個(gè)主干隔離結(jié)構(gòu)in which the high score can beachieved without spelling，一個(gè)好的單詞testoriented以什么為目標(biāo)。
這段也很圓滿。
第三段：這段更是平淡無奇：
但開頭的句子是沒有問題的，我們很熟悉的開頭句。
This issue may lead to a number ofunfavorable consequences, with the following two the most serious. (這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
后面有兩種寫法：
一種是寫危害：
但是誠(chéng)實(shí)的講我認(rèn)為這個(gè)現(xiàn)象沒有什么太大的危害，但是不寫的話又無話可說了。
我自己也是想了很久才想到了兩點(diǎn)所謂的危害。
For one thing ,… for another ,這樣的句子和京劇里面的亮相是一個(gè)概念。
For one thing, the informationwould be incorrect when conveyed by hand- writing way and cause some badeffects. For another, we may indulge ourselves in this way of inaccuracy whichmay influence our attitude of learning or research。
這兩個(gè)危害我是憋了好久才想出來了，又不敢寫的太難，大家就將就看了，
有危害總要解決下吧，咱的強(qiáng)項(xiàng)啊！
The awareness of the importance ofthis issue should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken. It isreasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improved in the nearfuture. 多棒的結(jié)尾?。?這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
還有一種寫法就是：直接寫解決的方法會(huì)簡(jiǎn)單些 ：
In viewof the importance of this issue , effective measures should be taken beforethings get worse. For one thing, it is essential that students should beencouraged to use less automatic spelling checking tools。(回憶下上課講的上下義詞) For another, spellingshould be highlighted in the English test ,such as CET-4 and CET 6.What’s more,the public should enhance their awareness of the importance of spelling .Withthese measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the situation ofpoor spelling will be improved in the near future。
針對(duì)不同的兩個(gè)原因提出兩個(gè)不同的解決方法。
歡迎廣大考生來訪問我的博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen
參考范文：
Now we are entering a brand newera full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken placein people's attitude towards some traditional practice, especially in the areaof English learning , one of which is less attention has been given to spellingby college students . This issue has been brought into public focus and calledfor further concern。
A number of factors could accountfor the problem, but the following are the most critical ones. First, informationis expanding at such an increasing rate that our society is called the one ofinformation. The information is so immense that students haven' t ample energyand time to deal deeply with spelling, and some computer programs, such as word,have done the spelling checking work for us . Second, the standardized-test orientedway of English learning, in which the high score can be achieved withoutspelling, put students to the position in which they have the quite reason toignore spelling。
This issue may lead to a number ofunfavorable consequences, with the following two the most serious. For onething, the information would be incorrect when conveyed by hand- writing wayand cause some bad effects. For another, we may indulge ourselves in this wayof inaccuracy which may influence our attitude of learning or research. The awarenessof the importance of this issue should be enhanced and some proper measures shouldbe taken. It is reasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improvedin the near future。
三段的第二種寫法：In view of the importance of this issue ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For one thing, itis essential that students should be encouraged to use less automatic spellingchecking tools. For another, spelling should be highlighted in the English test,such as CET-4 and CET 6.What’s more ,the public should enhance their awarenessof the importance of spelling .With these measures taken, it is reasonable forus to believe that the situation of poor spelling will be improved in the nearfuture。
從結(jié)構(gòu)來看屬于典型的給定觀點(diǎn)的文章，三段論很清晰，任務(wù)很明確。能用到的語言也在我們的預(yù)測(cè)范圍之內(nèi)。
第一段，開頭的句子我們就可以寫到：Now we are entering a brand newera full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken placein people's attitude towards some traditional practice只是緊接著只需要把spelling放到后面點(diǎn)明即可。后面加上一句This issue has been brought into public focusand called for further concern。(這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
第一段就圓滿了。
第二段開頭任務(wù)明確寫原因：
開頭句子給大家備好了：(這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
A number of factors could accountfor the problem, but the following are the most critical ones。
這段的內(nèi)容是比較好想的，第一個(gè)原因我準(zhǔn)備從信息角度入手，并且在內(nèi)容的預(yù)測(cè)上我也是給同學(xué)們準(zhǔn)備了信息方面的句子(這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
First, information is expanding atsuch an increasing rate that our society is called the one of information. The informationis so immense that students haven' t ample energy and time to deal deeply withspelling,這里我用到了很好的代詞：one,和句式：so…that…既然是范文我就自己小小的發(fā)揮了一下：some computer programs, such as word ,havedone the spelling checking work for us 。
第二個(gè)原因：萬惡考為首，
Second, the standardized-test oriented way of Englishlearning, in which the high score can be achieved without spelling, putstudents to the position in which they have the quite reason to ignorespelling。
在這個(gè)句子中用到了同學(xué)們熟悉的表達(dá)：put students to the position。還很拽的用到了一個(gè)主干隔離結(jié)構(gòu)in which the high score can beachieved without spelling，一個(gè)好的單詞testoriented以什么為目標(biāo)。
這段也很圓滿。
第三段：這段更是平淡無奇：
但開頭的句子是沒有問題的，我們很熟悉的開頭句。
This issue may lead to a number ofunfavorable consequences, with the following two the most serious. (這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
后面有兩種寫法：
一種是寫危害：
但是誠(chéng)實(shí)的講我認(rèn)為這個(gè)現(xiàn)象沒有什么太大的危害，但是不寫的話又無話可說了。
我自己也是想了很久才想到了兩點(diǎn)所謂的危害。
For one thing ,… for another ,這樣的句子和京劇里面的亮相是一個(gè)概念。
For one thing, the informationwould be incorrect when conveyed by hand- writing way and cause some badeffects. For another, we may indulge ourselves in this way of inaccuracy whichmay influence our attitude of learning or research。
這兩個(gè)危害我是憋了好久才想出來了，又不敢寫的太難，大家就將就看了，
有危害總要解決下吧，咱的強(qiáng)項(xiàng)啊！
The awareness of the importance ofthis issue should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken. It isreasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improved in the nearfuture. 多棒的結(jié)尾?。?這點(diǎn)可以參看我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen)
還有一種寫法就是：直接寫解決的方法會(huì)簡(jiǎn)單些 ：
In viewof the importance of this issue , effective measures should be taken beforethings get worse. For one thing, it is essential that students should beencouraged to use less automatic spelling checking tools。(回憶下上課講的上下義詞) For another, spellingshould be highlighted in the English test ,such as CET-4 and CET 6.What’s more,the public should enhance their awareness of the importance of spelling .Withthese measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the situation ofpoor spelling will be improved in the near future。
針對(duì)不同的兩個(gè)原因提出兩個(gè)不同的解決方法。
歡迎廣大考生來訪問我的博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdhekaiwen
參考范文：
Now we are entering a brand newera full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken placein people's attitude towards some traditional practice, especially in the areaof English learning , one of which is less attention has been given to spellingby college students . This issue has been brought into public focus and calledfor further concern。
A number of factors could accountfor the problem, but the following are the most critical ones. First, informationis expanding at such an increasing rate that our society is called the one ofinformation. The information is so immense that students haven' t ample energyand time to deal deeply with spelling, and some computer programs, such as word,have done the spelling checking work for us . Second, the standardized-test orientedway of English learning, in which the high score can be achieved withoutspelling, put students to the position in which they have the quite reason toignore spelling。
This issue may lead to a number ofunfavorable consequences, with the following two the most serious. For onething, the information would be incorrect when conveyed by hand- writing wayand cause some bad effects. For another, we may indulge ourselves in this wayof inaccuracy which may influence our attitude of learning or research. The awarenessof the importance of this issue should be enhanced and some proper measures shouldbe taken. It is reasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improvedin the near future。
三段的第二種寫法：In view of the importance of this issue ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For one thing, itis essential that students should be encouraged to use less automatic spellingchecking tools. For another, spelling should be highlighted in the English test,such as CET-4 and CET 6.What’s more ,the public should enhance their awarenessof the importance of spelling .With these measures taken, it is reasonable forus to believe that the situation of poor spelling will be improved in the nearfuture。