析型作文之8分作文
根據(jù)內(nèi)容的不同，分析型作文一般可分為分析原因型、分析作用型、分析優(yōu)劣型、分析影響型、分析狀況型、分析決定因素型及分析解決方法型等不同類型。
引出原因的四種表達(dá)：There are three/various reasons for...;What are the possible reasons for.../Why...?;Possible reasons for ... may be as follows;Possible reasons for... may be a , b and c;
引出具體解決方法的四種表達(dá)方式：There are three/various solutions to the problem;What are the possible solutions to it?;Possible solutions to it are as follows;Possbile solutions to it may be part-time job,scholarship and financial aid.
分析型作文之11分作文
一、段落間的連貫手段：過渡銜接詞在段落間的運(yùn)用、關(guān)鍵詞的重復(fù)使用、過渡句的運(yùn)用、語法上的人稱照應(yīng)和指示照應(yīng)、實(shí)詞銜接手段（同義詞和近義詞替代、上下義詞替代）、敘述型作文常用的體現(xiàn)篇章連貫的手段
二、對段落進(jìn)行優(yōu)化：可以用不同的段落銜接手段體現(xiàn)篇章的連貫。
You can see a live show on TV. We can get the information of soports events on TV. But there is a unique topic you can only read from the sports line in newspaper. The sports lovers can sit in a comfortable chair, hold the newspaper and read what the coach said and what the players felt.
以上段落中出現(xiàn)了三種不同的稱謂：you,we,the sports lovers,細(xì)細(xì)研究，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，前兩種稱謂都是用來指代the sportslovers。作者根據(jù)漢語習(xí)慣用“你可以...”以及“我們可以...”來表示泛指，但是在英語中像這樣在同一個段落或同一篇文章中混淆稱謂的現(xiàn)象是不允許的。
三、常用句型
１、 分析影響／利弊
There are three/a number of consequences of...
... brings about some great/serious consequences
... involves/entails some great/serious consequences
Its side effects are enormous
Perhaps the most serious/obvious consequence is...
The immediate result is...
... deprives/strips people of...
... is/becomes the victim of...
... will exercise/exert a beneficial influence / effect/impact on...
2、分析原因
There are probably three / a number of reasons for...
why...?/What are the reasons for...?
This phenomenon involves / entails several complicated factors /reasons
... is mainly because of/due to/owing to...
It is due to...,rather than..., let alone...
... ont only because...,but (also) because...
... partly/in part because..., partly/in part because...
Corrupts/erodes one's minds/virtues
One/We may lay/place blame for B on A
... Contributes to...
Some may attribute.../it to...
... undermines...
... poses a threat to...
3、分析問題／現(xiàn)象
There are too many examples/instances of...
Nowa days, every one of us is confronted/faced with too many examples/instances of...
Some...Others...Still others... Even there are those who..
Sometimes,... More often,...
4、分析解決方法
Such a tragedy would not happen if we knew the following ways to handle...(虛擬語氣)
The key words are..., ... and ...
Only in this way,could/can...(倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）
It is high time that...
The impact could be minimized if we follow the ways / suggestions above
These are the secrets of a successful...
作業(yè)：（以下為一篇11分范文，請練習(xí)按要求改寫成漂亮的14分作文）
When others ask for help,we may hesitate to say "no" in two situations.First,if the matter is dishonest or even illegal,we should say "no".Second,we can't do it.
要求：1、把藍(lán)色粗體改為"sometimes,... More ofen,it is because..."的句型
Many people don't say no when they should,mainly for two reasons. In most cases,they don't want to lose the friendship with the person asking for help.It is also likely that they may gain various profits if they help others even if it would not be legal.
要求：1、把藍(lán)色粗體第一句改為" Two ingredients could account for..." 的句型；
2、把藍(lán)色粗體第二句主要原因改為" It is mainly due to..." 的句型；
3、把藍(lán)色粗體第三句次要原因用"another reason is connected with..." 的句型改寫；
Nevertheless,did they ever think of its negative effects? When the matter turns out to be unsuccessful, the friends in need of help will miss the valuable time and chance to solve the problem.This may even ruin their friendship.And when they accept the "dirty" gifts,they have lost something much more important-integrity.There fore , don't hesitate to say "no", otherwise, it will harm the interests of other people or even the whole society..
要求：1、把藍(lán)色粗體第一句改為" Nevertheless,it involves/entails some unfavorable consequences." 的句型；
2、把藍(lán)色粗體第二句改為" ...undermines..." 的句型；
3、把藍(lán)色粗體第三句改為"... will pose a threat to..." 的句型；
參考答案：
When others ask for help,we may hesitate to say "no" in two situations.Sometimes,if the matter is dishonest or even illegal,we will say "no".More often,it is because it is beyond our abilities.
Two ingredients could account for peoples reluctance to say "no" . It is mainly due to their unwillingness to lose the friendship with the person asking for help.Another reason is connected with the various profits they can get if they help others even if it would not be legal.
Nevertheless,it involves some unfavorable consequences. When the matter turns out to be unsuccessful, the friends in need of help will miss the valuable time and chance to solve the problem.This may even undermine their friendship.And when they accept the "dirty" gifts,they have lost something much more important-integrity.There fore , don't hesitate to say "no", otherwise, it will pose a threat to the interests of other people or even the whole society..
根據(jù)內(nèi)容的不同，分析型作文一般可分為分析原因型、分析作用型、分析優(yōu)劣型、分析影響型、分析狀況型、分析決定因素型及分析解決方法型等不同類型。
引出原因的四種表達(dá)：There are three/various reasons for...;What are the possible reasons for.../Why...?;Possible reasons for ... may be as follows;Possible reasons for... may be a , b and c;
引出具體解決方法的四種表達(dá)方式：There are three/various solutions to the problem;What are the possible solutions to it?;Possible solutions to it are as follows;Possbile solutions to it may be part-time job,scholarship and financial aid.
分析型作文之11分作文
一、段落間的連貫手段：過渡銜接詞在段落間的運(yùn)用、關(guān)鍵詞的重復(fù)使用、過渡句的運(yùn)用、語法上的人稱照應(yīng)和指示照應(yīng)、實(shí)詞銜接手段（同義詞和近義詞替代、上下義詞替代）、敘述型作文常用的體現(xiàn)篇章連貫的手段
二、對段落進(jìn)行優(yōu)化：可以用不同的段落銜接手段體現(xiàn)篇章的連貫。
You can see a live show on TV. We can get the information of soports events on TV. But there is a unique topic you can only read from the sports line in newspaper. The sports lovers can sit in a comfortable chair, hold the newspaper and read what the coach said and what the players felt.
以上段落中出現(xiàn)了三種不同的稱謂：you,we,the sports lovers,細(xì)細(xì)研究，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，前兩種稱謂都是用來指代the sportslovers。作者根據(jù)漢語習(xí)慣用“你可以...”以及“我們可以...”來表示泛指，但是在英語中像這樣在同一個段落或同一篇文章中混淆稱謂的現(xiàn)象是不允許的。
三、常用句型
１、 分析影響／利弊
There are three/a number of consequences of...
... brings about some great/serious consequences
... involves/entails some great/serious consequences
Its side effects are enormous
Perhaps the most serious/obvious consequence is...
The immediate result is...
... deprives/strips people of...
... is/becomes the victim of...
... will exercise/exert a beneficial influence / effect/impact on...
2、分析原因
There are probably three / a number of reasons for...
why...?/What are the reasons for...?
This phenomenon involves / entails several complicated factors /reasons
... is mainly because of/due to/owing to...
It is due to...,rather than..., let alone...
... ont only because...,but (also) because...
... partly/in part because..., partly/in part because...
Corrupts/erodes one's minds/virtues
One/We may lay/place blame for B on A
... Contributes to...
Some may attribute.../it to...
... undermines...
... poses a threat to...
3、分析問題／現(xiàn)象
There are too many examples/instances of...
Nowa days, every one of us is confronted/faced with too many examples/instances of...
Some...Others...Still others... Even there are those who..
Sometimes,... More often,...
4、分析解決方法
Such a tragedy would not happen if we knew the following ways to handle...(虛擬語氣)
The key words are..., ... and ...
Only in this way,could/can...(倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）
It is high time that...
The impact could be minimized if we follow the ways / suggestions above
These are the secrets of a successful...
作業(yè)：（以下為一篇11分范文，請練習(xí)按要求改寫成漂亮的14分作文）
When others ask for help,we may hesitate to say "no" in two situations.First,if the matter is dishonest or even illegal,we should say "no".Second,we can't do it.
要求：1、把藍(lán)色粗體改為"sometimes,... More ofen,it is because..."的句型
Many people don't say no when they should,mainly for two reasons. In most cases,they don't want to lose the friendship with the person asking for help.It is also likely that they may gain various profits if they help others even if it would not be legal.
要求：1、把藍(lán)色粗體第一句改為" Two ingredients could account for..." 的句型；
2、把藍(lán)色粗體第二句主要原因改為" It is mainly due to..." 的句型；
3、把藍(lán)色粗體第三句次要原因用"another reason is connected with..." 的句型改寫；
Nevertheless,did they ever think of its negative effects? When the matter turns out to be unsuccessful, the friends in need of help will miss the valuable time and chance to solve the problem.This may even ruin their friendship.And when they accept the "dirty" gifts,they have lost something much more important-integrity.There fore , don't hesitate to say "no", otherwise, it will harm the interests of other people or even the whole society..
要求：1、把藍(lán)色粗體第一句改為" Nevertheless,it involves/entails some unfavorable consequences." 的句型；
2、把藍(lán)色粗體第二句改為" ...undermines..." 的句型；
3、把藍(lán)色粗體第三句改為"... will pose a threat to..." 的句型；
參考答案：
When others ask for help,we may hesitate to say "no" in two situations.Sometimes,if the matter is dishonest or even illegal,we will say "no".More often,it is because it is beyond our abilities.
Two ingredients could account for peoples reluctance to say "no" . It is mainly due to their unwillingness to lose the friendship with the person asking for help.Another reason is connected with the various profits they can get if they help others even if it would not be legal.
Nevertheless,it involves some unfavorable consequences. When the matter turns out to be unsuccessful, the friends in need of help will miss the valuable time and chance to solve the problem.This may even undermine their friendship.And when they accept the "dirty" gifts,they have lost something much more important-integrity.There fore , don't hesitate to say "no", otherwise, it will pose a threat to the interests of other people or even the whole society..