Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)道路事故會(huì)給人們的生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)帶來很大的損失
2)分析道路事故發(fā)生的主要原因
3)如何降低事故發(fā)生率
Road Accidents
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)問題，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出道路事故的嚴(yán)重性及主要危害;分析導(dǎo)致道路事故的主要原因;說明應(yīng)該如何降低道路事故的發(fā)生率。
高分范文
Road Accidents
Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives.
[3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.
[7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
[1]插入語，as意為“作為”。
[2]表遞進(jìn)。
[3]用于引出原因。
[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[5]“增加了…的機(jī)會(huì)或可能性”。
[6]“監(jiān)管不力”，weak的使用準(zhǔn)確地道。
[7]“考慮到，鑒于”，介詞。
[8]用于引出解決辦法，表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為“早該是…的時(shí)候了”。
[9]“only+狀語”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。
佳句臨摹
1.佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.
臨?。阂恍┤耸『罂赡軙?huì)變得灰心喪氣，甚至?xí)艞壋晒Φ南Ｍ?BR> ___________________________________________________________________________.
2.佳句：More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.
臨摹：許多學(xué)生認(rèn)為考取更多的證書可以增加他們找工作的機(jī)會(huì)。
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3.佳句：It is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.
臨?。阂虼耍覀?cè)缭撽P(guān)注一下人口過剩問題了。
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【KEY】
1. Some people, after a failure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success.
2. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed.
3. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.
1)道路事故會(huì)給人們的生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)帶來很大的損失
2)分析道路事故發(fā)生的主要原因
3)如何降低事故發(fā)生率
Road Accidents
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)問題，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出道路事故的嚴(yán)重性及主要危害;分析導(dǎo)致道路事故的主要原因;說明應(yīng)該如何降低道路事故的發(fā)生率。
高分范文
Road Accidents
Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives.
[3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.
[7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
[1]插入語，as意為“作為”。
[2]表遞進(jìn)。
[3]用于引出原因。
[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[5]“增加了…的機(jī)會(huì)或可能性”。
[6]“監(jiān)管不力”，weak的使用準(zhǔn)確地道。
[7]“考慮到，鑒于”，介詞。
[8]用于引出解決辦法，表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為“早該是…的時(shí)候了”。
[9]“only+狀語”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。
佳句臨摹
1.佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.
臨?。阂恍┤耸『罂赡軙?huì)變得灰心喪氣，甚至?xí)艞壋晒Φ南Ｍ?BR> ___________________________________________________________________________.
2.佳句：More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.
臨摹：許多學(xué)生認(rèn)為考取更多的證書可以增加他們找工作的機(jī)會(huì)。
___________________________________________________________________________.
3.佳句：It is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.
臨?。阂虼耍覀?cè)缭撽P(guān)注一下人口過剩問題了。
___________________________________________________________________________.
【KEY】
1. Some people, after a failure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success.
2. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed.
3. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.