書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 觀點(diǎn)辯論）（一）
2004年雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)使中國(guó)令世人矚目，中國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)員創(chuàng)造了新的奧運(yùn)會(huì)金牌記錄。獲金牌的運(yùn)動(dòng)員除了得到政府獎(jiǎng)金20萬(wàn)元以外，還會(huì)從地方得到更多的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)。對(duì)此，社會(huì)各界反響不一。
贊 成 不 贊 成
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)員為國(guó)爭(zhēng)了光
2．運(yùn)動(dòng)員付出了許多辛苦和汗水
3．獎(jiǎng)金有利于中國(guó)體育后備力量的培養(yǎng) 1．運(yùn)動(dòng)員是國(guó)家培養(yǎng)出來(lái)的，為國(guó)爭(zhēng)光理所當(dāng)然
2．得到大量獎(jiǎng)金后，有些隊(duì)員就會(huì)退役
3．一些企業(yè)趁機(jī)炒作，從中獲取廣告效應(yīng)
請(qǐng)你就此現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單闡述，并提出自己的一些看法或建議。（120詞左右）
提示詞匯：獎(jiǎng)金bonus
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 觀點(diǎn)辯論）（一）
書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo):
一、議論文常用詞匯和句型：
Opinions are divided on the question.
Some are in favor of it.(be for/ approve of/agree/support…) In their opinion,…/They hold the view that…
Others hold the opposite opinion(be against/disagree…). They argue that…
Every coin has two sides.
As far as I am concerned…/In my opinion…
二、議論性作文的結(jié)構(gòu)：
1. 開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地點(diǎn)明所要闡述的內(nèi)容。
2. 分析不同的觀點(diǎn)：可采用分類式或?qū)Ρ仁剑㈥U明理由。要注意層次清楚
條理清晰。
3. 歸納總結(jié)或發(fā)表評(píng)論。
2004年雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)使中國(guó)令世人矚目，中國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)員創(chuàng)造了新的奧運(yùn)會(huì)金牌記錄。獲金牌的運(yùn)動(dòng)員除了得到政府獎(jiǎng)金20萬(wàn)元以外，還會(huì)從地方得到更多的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)。對(duì)此，社會(huì)各界反響不一。
贊 成 不 贊 成
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)員為國(guó)爭(zhēng)了光
2．運(yùn)動(dòng)員付出了許多辛苦和汗水
3．獎(jiǎng)金有利于中國(guó)體育后備力量的培養(yǎng) 1．運(yùn)動(dòng)員是國(guó)家培養(yǎng)出來(lái)的，為國(guó)爭(zhēng)光理所當(dāng)然
2．得到大量獎(jiǎng)金后，有些隊(duì)員就會(huì)退役
3．一些企業(yè)趁機(jī)炒作，從中獲取廣告效應(yīng)
請(qǐng)你就此現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單闡述，并提出自己的一些看法或建議。（120詞左右）
提示詞匯：獎(jiǎng)金bonus
范文：
China drew the most ever attention of the world in the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, in which the Chinese athletes set a new record by winning more gold medals than before. The winners of gold medals each received more rewards from local governments as well as a bonus of 200,000
yuan from the central government. Opinions are divided on the phenomenon.
Some are in favor of it. In their opinion, athletes have won great honour for the country and to win a gold medal, athletes have to make great efforts. What’s more, rewards will benefit the training of future players.
In contrast, others hold the opinion that athletes are trained by the country so they are supposed to win honor for China. Also some athletes will probably quit after getting much money. What’s worse, some enterprises will take advantage of the successful athletes to advertise for them, which will have a bad effect on their image.
As far as I am concerned, it is necessary to do so since it can inspire athletes to do better in the next Olympics.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（議論文 觀點(diǎn)辯論）（二）
假如你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。最近，你班同學(xué)正在參加21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)“大家談”欄目的一個(gè)討論。本次話題為：“父母有沒(méi)有必要陪讀？”
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列情況給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，客觀地介紹討論的情況。
70%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為： 30%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：
1． 父母不應(yīng)該陪讀
2． 父母陪讀讓我們養(yǎng)成依賴的習(xí)慣，不利于我們將來(lái)自控能力的培養(yǎng)，不利于我們培養(yǎng)良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。
3． 父母陪讀影響了他們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)和休息。 1． 父母應(yīng)該陪讀
2． 父母陪讀能使我們騰出更多的專心學(xué)習(xí)，使我們身體更健康。
3． 父母陪讀能幫助我們確立學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，督促我們完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，鼓勵(lì)我們獨(dú)立解決困難，培養(yǎng)我們養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。
注意：1. 信的形式已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好。
2．詞數(shù)100左右。
3．參考詞匯：陪讀 accompany sb. studying at school 督促 urge
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 觀點(diǎn)辯論）（二）
假如你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。最近，你班同學(xué)正在參加21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)“大家談”欄目的一個(gè)討論。本次話題為：“父母有沒(méi)有必要陪讀？”
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列情況給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，客觀地介紹討論的情況。
70%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為： 30%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：
1． 父母不應(yīng)該陪讀
2． 父母陪讀讓我們養(yǎng)成依賴的習(xí)慣，不利于我們將來(lái)自控能力的培養(yǎng)，不利于我們培養(yǎng)良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。
3． 父母陪讀影響了他們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)和休息。 1． 父母應(yīng)該陪讀
2． 父母陪讀能使我們騰出更多的專心學(xué)習(xí)，使我們身體更健康。
3． 父母陪讀能幫助我們確立學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，督促我們完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，鼓勵(lì)我們獨(dú)立解決困難，培養(yǎng)我們養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。
注意：1. 信的形式已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好。
2．詞數(shù)100左右。
3．參考詞匯：陪讀 accompany sb. studying at school 督促 urge
Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on whether students should be accompanied by parents studying at school. Opinions are divided on the topic.
70% of my classmates hold the view that there is no need for parents to do so. For one thing, we may fall into the habit of dependence, which will have a negative effect on the development of our self-control ability. For another, it will affect our parents’ work, study and rest.
However, 30% of us are in favor of it. In their opinion, with parents accompanying us, we can spare more time to concentrate on our study and we will become more healthy. Furthermore, parents can help set our study goal and urge us to complete our study tasks. Also we can overcome difficulties on our own. with their encouragement and develop a good habit of studying.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（三）
假如你們學(xué)校“英語(yǔ)愛(ài)好者俱樂(lè)部”將對(duì)“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：
部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣
良好的飲食習(xí)慣
個(gè)人看法
注意：1.發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.發(fā)言稿開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3.詞數(shù)：120左右.
4.參考詞匯:偏食be particular about food 零食 snack
Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore , it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. ____________________________________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you!
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（三）
假如你們學(xué)?！坝⒄Z(yǔ)愛(ài)好者俱樂(lè)部”將對(duì)“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：
部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣
良好的飲食習(xí)慣
個(gè)人看法
注意：1.發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.發(fā)言稿開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3.詞數(shù)：120左右.
4.參考詞匯:偏食be particular about food 零食 snack
范文：
Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s a very important for us to from healthy
eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often
go to school without breakfast and some like to have snacks during breaks, as a result of which they can’t take in enough nutrients. We can also find that some students are particular about food; and
still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.
To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
That’s all. Thank you!
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（四）
假設(shè)你是李華，在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間，到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译?看了一場(chǎng)精彩的電影，但在觀影過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)給*經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封信。
1. 因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映晚點(diǎn)；
2. 影片播放音量過(guò)大；
3. 安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患；
適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)：80～120；
2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
參考詞匯：安全出口－exit
安全隱患－potential safety hazard
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（四）
假設(shè)你是李華，在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間，到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译?看了一場(chǎng)精彩的電影，但在觀影過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)給*經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封信。
1. 因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映晚點(diǎn)；
2. 影片播放音量過(guò)大；
3. 安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患；
適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)：80～120；
2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
參考詞匯：安全出口－exit
安全隱患－potential safety hazard
Dear Manager,
I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was
very good, but I’d like to tell you several problems I found while watching the film.
Firstly, because there were too many advertisements, the film failed to begin on time, which made some audience angry. Secondly, the volume was too high, only to make me feel uncomfortable. And the last, when the film was on, I looked around carefully but didn’t see an exit sign. I think we shouldn’t ignore potential safety hazard in public places, especially in a cinema.
Of course, it’s my own opinion, but I do hope that my suggestion will be a little help to you and that your cinema will take on a new look.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（五）
今年寒假，你參加了社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，去某旅行社當(dāng)業(yè)余導(dǎo)游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)該旅行社提供的數(shù)據(jù)和你的所見(jiàn)所聞，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，作為寒假作業(yè)交給你的英語(yǔ)老師。
Number of people in City X travelling
abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006
要求：1. 簡(jiǎn)析表格，說(shuō)明產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；2. 結(jié)合漫畫(huà)，談?wù)劸惩饴糜纬霈F(xiàn)的問(wèn)題；
3. 針對(duì)所出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題闡述你自己的看法（至少兩點(diǎn)）；4. 詞數(shù)120左右；
5. 參考詞匯：吐痰 spit v.
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（五）
今年寒假，你參加了社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，去某旅行社當(dāng)業(yè)余導(dǎo)游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)該旅行社提供的數(shù)據(jù)和你的所見(jiàn)所聞，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，作為寒假作業(yè)交給你的英語(yǔ)老師。
Number of people in City X travelling
abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006
要求：1. 簡(jiǎn)析表格，說(shuō)明產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；2. 結(jié)合漫畫(huà)，談?wù)劸惩饴糜纬霈F(xiàn)的問(wèn)題；
3. 針對(duì)所出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題闡述你自己的看法（至少兩點(diǎn)）；4. 詞數(shù)120左右；
5. 參考詞匯：吐痰 spit v.
When people’s life is getting better and better, more and more people choose to spend their holidays abroad. The year 2006 sees a sharp increase in the number of overseas travelers compared with the year 2001, when the number was already more than double that of the year 1996. It’s a good thing that Chinese tourism is developing very fast. And yet, reports about people’s bad manners flood in. Some are even asked if all Chinese spit and litter everywhere. The poor behavior has done great harm to the image of China, which is really shameful.
China has long been regarded as a country with good manners. Everybody should keep some do’s and don’ts in their mind to guide their behavior in public, home and abroad. Win respect for yourself and our country!
一、 評(píng)分原則
1． 詞數(shù)少于100，從總分中減去2分。
2． 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。
3． 拼寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。
4． 如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以致影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。
二、 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)
1. 簡(jiǎn)析表格內(nèi)容；
2. 出境旅游人數(shù)快速增長(zhǎng)的原因，如：生活水平的提高（學(xué)生需自己發(fā)揮）
3. 漫畫(huà)中的問(wèn)題: 隨地吐痰，亂扔垃圾
4. 個(gè)人的看法，指出這些行為是不文明的；要提倡社會(huì)公德（學(xué)生需自己發(fā)揮至少兩點(diǎn)）
書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)（結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表看法）
常用句型:
1. As is shown by the graph/in the table。。（概述圖表，得出結(jié)論）
It can be seen from the table that … （概述圖表，得出結(jié)論）
A. 正如曲線所示，最近54年來(lái)該國(guó)人口飛速增長(zhǎng)。
As is shown by the graph, there has been a rapid increase in the population of the country in the
past five years.
B. 從表中所給的統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字可以看出，從1985年到1990年中國(guó)的人均收入迅速提高。
From the statistics given in the table it can be seen that the average personal income of the Chinese people increased (grew 、rose) rapidly from 1985 to 1990.
C. 從曲線圖可以得出結(jié)論，最近5年來(lái)中國(guó)人口的出生率已經(jīng)大大下降。
It can be concluded from the graph that there has been a great decline in birth rates in China in the past five years.
2. … amount to … （數(shù)量總計(jì)）
add up to/come to /sum up to
全部費(fèi)用合計(jì)200美元。
All the expenses (costs) amount to (= add up to) $ 200.
3. … increase/rise/grow/climb from … to … （數(shù)量增減）
…decrease/fall/drop from…to…
A. 這個(gè)工廠生產(chǎn)的彩電已由1986年的5000臺(tái)增加到1990年的21000臺(tái)。
The number of colour TV sets produced by the factory increased (rose , grew , climbed) from 5000 in 1986 to 21000 in 1990.
B. 這個(gè)學(xué)校的教職工人數(shù)已減少到700人。
The number of teaching staff members in this school has decreased to 700 persons.
There is (was) a rapid/sharp/sudden /gradual/slow rise/decrease in …
…be on the increase/decline
最近幾年來(lái)這個(gè)地區(qū)的棉花產(chǎn)量有了迅速增長(zhǎng)。
There has been a rapid increase in the cotton output in this area in the past few years.
4.（be）three times as + 形容詞 + as …
(be) three times the size/amount/number/height/length of…
A. 現(xiàn)在我們地區(qū)的糧食產(chǎn)量相當(dāng)于1970年的3倍。
The grain production (= output)in our area now is three times as great as that of 1970.
B. 我校學(xué)生人數(shù)是去年的兩倍。
The number of the students in our school is twice that of last year.
5. Compared with … , …
與去年相比，今年13項(xiàng)主要產(chǎn)品的產(chǎn)量都有大幅度增長(zhǎng)。
Compared with that of last year, the output of 13 main products (= items) this year has increased to a great extent.
6. “結(jié)尾”段落中常用的句型：
1. In my opinion, … 2. Personally, I … 3. In short (= In brief), …
4. In conclusion, … 5.As far as I’m concerned, … 6. To conclude , it seems clear that …
至于說(shuō)到我，我贊成前一種觀點(diǎn)。所以，我的結(jié)論是，只要我們堅(jiān)持正確的東西，改正錯(cuò)誤的東西，我們就一定能成功。
As far as I’m concerned ,I’m in favour of the former view. Therefore, my conclusion is that we are certain to succeed as long as we stick to what is right and correct what is wrong.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（六）
假設(shè)你是李華.你將代表學(xué)校參加國(guó)際中學(xué)生論壇，就你所在城市的教育狀況發(fā)表演講。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下兩幅圖表,介紹你市高中學(xué)生構(gòu)成情況及畢業(yè)去向的選擇，并針對(duì)兩幅圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況發(fā)表你自己的看法。
注意：1．文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出；
2．詞數(shù)100左右(不包括已給部分)
3. 參考詞匯: 圖表: chart 職業(yè)學(xué)校: vocational school
外來(lái)務(wù)工人員: non-local workers
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（六）
假設(shè)你是李華.你將代表學(xué)校參加國(guó)際中學(xué)生論壇，就你所在城市的教育狀況發(fā)表演講。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下兩幅圖表,介紹你市高中學(xué)生構(gòu)成情況及畢業(yè)去向的選擇，并針對(duì)兩幅圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況發(fā)表你自己的看法。
注意：1．文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出；2．詞數(shù)100左右(不包括已給部分)
3. 參考詞匯: 圖表: chart 職業(yè)學(xué)校: vocational school
外來(lái)務(wù)工人員: non-local workers
范文：
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I'm going to talk about the high school education of my city.
From Chart 1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. Another 1 percent are foreigner students.
As is shown in chart 2, sixty percent of them intend to go to university, which is double the number of those who will attend vocational schools. Besides, the other ten percent choose to go abroad for further study.
In conclusion, it seems clear that our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers, whose children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city students. Also with the economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up businesses here and they are happy to send their children to local schools to learn more about China and Chinese culture. In addition, we have more freedom to choose what we would like to do after graduation. Going to college is no longer the only choice for most of us as it was years ago.
I believe the future of the education in our city is promising!
That's all. Thank you.
07揚(yáng)州一模試卷書(shū)面表達(dá)范文：
Different Sources of Income Between Chinese and American Students
These two charts show the differences in the sources of income between Chinese and American students. As is shown in the charts, Chinese students get 90 percent of their income from their parents while American students get only 50 percent from parents. Besides, for Chinese students, income from doing part time jobs makes up only 5 percent of the total. So does income from scholarships. However, money from part time jobs and scholarships for American students amount to 35 and 15 percent respectively.
From the analysis above, we can easily find out the reasons. Chinese parents like to take more care of their children. They’d rather work hard and save money in order to provide their children with everything they need. American parents, on the other hand, like to pay more attention to the development of children’s ability to be independent. They would rather encourage their children to support themselves. As for students, Chinese students tend to depend on parents while American students think it natural to depend on themselves.
單句改錯(cuò)：
1. American students get 50% of their income from parents. While in China, 90% of the students’ income come from parents.
2. It causes the students in China don’t want to do part-time work to earn money.
3. American students are more indepent while Chinese students always depend their parents.
4. Besides the income from parents, who make up 50%, 35% of American students’ income are from their part-time jobs.
5. There is about 35% of the income comes from part-time jobs.
6. As is shown in the charts that half of the income of American students is from parents.
7. Chinese students are easier to depend on their parents.
8. Chinese parents don’t like American parents who attach great importance to their independence.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（七）
根據(jù)圖示，為報(bào)社寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于我國(guó)交通事故的報(bào)告。分析原因并對(duì)這種情況提出改進(jìn)措施。字?jǐn)?shù)120字左右。（開(kāi)頭已給出）
The number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years. As can be seen from the graph,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（七）
根據(jù)圖示，為報(bào)社寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于我國(guó)交通事故的報(bào)告。分析原因并對(duì)這種情況提出改進(jìn)措施。字?jǐn)?shù)120字左右。（開(kāi)頭已給出）
The number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years. As can be seen from the graph, in 2004 there occurred 570,000 traffic accidents, in which109,000 people got killed. By October 2005, the number of the accidents reached 566,000 and 95,600 people lost their lives. While the number of the cars makes up only 2% of the total of the world, the rate of the deaths is 22%, making China a country with the highest death rate of traffic accidents in the world.
The main reason why so many traffic accidents have happened is that the roads are too crowded and people ignore traffic rules. In order to reduce the traffic accidents, first, the government should take some proper measures, such as developing public traffics. Second, people should obey traffic rules, especially the drivers.
Only when people have decided to take action will traffic problems be solved.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（八）
（南通二?？荚嚪段模?BR> Recently I have conducted a survey on taking a nap after lunch among my classmates. Most of them are in the habit of sleeping for a while at noon for they believe it does good to them. In general, students prefer to do so around 12:30 and the nap usually lasts for about 30 minutes. They often choose to sleep at home instead of in their classroom or dormitory.
Hopefully, the result of my survey can draw the attention of our parents and school. Since most students are in need of a nap, proper arrangements should be made so that students can have a good rest after a whole morning’s hard work. Students should not be asked to do extra schoolwork during this period of time. After all, with a nap after lunch, one can feel refreshed and energetic enough to study more efficiently in the afternoon.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （應(yīng)用文）（九）
（揚(yáng)州一模考試范文）
Dear Wang Hai,
How are you doing?
Recently an American bestseller is popular among the students in our school. I read it, and to my
excitement, it was really inspiring. I would like to recommend it to you.
The book Chicken Soup for the Soul, written by Jack Canfield, was first published in 1993 and soon became a bestseller. So far over 8 million copies have been sold, ranking first in New York Times and USA Today. The book with 101 stories to open your heart and rekindle your spirit will surely inspire readers of all ages. It has been translated into tens of languages, spreading love to every corner of the world. Besides, an English version will be of great help to English learners as it will help improve our English.
The original price of the book is 64 yuan, but you can get one for 54.4 yuan at dangdang.com, which will save you 9.6 yuan. The book will be delivered to you within 24-48 hours after your payment.
To get more information, you can visit the website. Get one and enjoy it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
主要存在問(wèn)題：
遺漏要點(diǎn)：24-48小時(shí)內(nèi)送達(dá)
理解錯(cuò)誤：款到付貨
注意不同表達(dá)方式：
1．適合英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)者
be good for English learners
be of benefit to English learners
be a great help to English learners
2． 款到付貨
It won’t be delivered to you until paid for.
Pay money first and then the book will be delivered to your door.
The book will be delivered to you after your payment.
3． 定價(jià)64元 當(dāng)當(dāng)價(jià)54.5元 節(jié)省9.60元
It costs only 54.4 yuan on line, which is 9.6 yuan cheaper than the original price.
It costs only 54.4 yuan on line and can save you as much as 9.60 yuan.
Dangdang.com offers 15% discount, meaning you only have to pay 54.5 yuan.
It allows 15% discount off the original price.
4． 這是能激勵(lì)所有年齡層次讀者的書(shū)
It’s an inspiring book intended for all ages.
The book will inspire readers of all ages.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （應(yīng)用文）（十）
假如你叫王平，根據(jù)圖表提示，給你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Smith 寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你的寒假生活（共20天），可根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況添加細(xì)節(jié)。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Smith,
How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （應(yīng)用文）（十）
假如你叫王平，根據(jù)圖表提示，給你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Smith 寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你的寒假生活（共20天），可根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況添加細(xì)節(jié)。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Smith,
How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.
We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival. It took me about a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China. Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons. As you know, I will take the National Examination in June and there’s a short time ahead. Every day I did some English reading, practised writing compositions, worked out a number of maths problems and so on. When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.
In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday. How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Ping
2004年雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)使中國(guó)令世人矚目，中國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)員創(chuàng)造了新的奧運(yùn)會(huì)金牌記錄。獲金牌的運(yùn)動(dòng)員除了得到政府獎(jiǎng)金20萬(wàn)元以外，還會(huì)從地方得到更多的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)。對(duì)此，社會(huì)各界反響不一。
贊 成 不 贊 成
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)員為國(guó)爭(zhēng)了光
2．運(yùn)動(dòng)員付出了許多辛苦和汗水
3．獎(jiǎng)金有利于中國(guó)體育后備力量的培養(yǎng) 1．運(yùn)動(dòng)員是國(guó)家培養(yǎng)出來(lái)的，為國(guó)爭(zhēng)光理所當(dāng)然
2．得到大量獎(jiǎng)金后，有些隊(duì)員就會(huì)退役
3．一些企業(yè)趁機(jī)炒作，從中獲取廣告效應(yīng)
請(qǐng)你就此現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單闡述，并提出自己的一些看法或建議。（120詞左右）
提示詞匯：獎(jiǎng)金bonus
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 觀點(diǎn)辯論）（一）
書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo):
一、議論文常用詞匯和句型：
Opinions are divided on the question.
Some are in favor of it.(be for/ approve of/agree/support…) In their opinion,…/They hold the view that…
Others hold the opposite opinion(be against/disagree…). They argue that…
Every coin has two sides.
As far as I am concerned…/In my opinion…
二、議論性作文的結(jié)構(gòu)：
1. 開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地點(diǎn)明所要闡述的內(nèi)容。
2. 分析不同的觀點(diǎn)：可采用分類式或?qū)Ρ仁剑㈥U明理由。要注意層次清楚
條理清晰。
3. 歸納總結(jié)或發(fā)表評(píng)論。
2004年雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)使中國(guó)令世人矚目，中國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)員創(chuàng)造了新的奧運(yùn)會(huì)金牌記錄。獲金牌的運(yùn)動(dòng)員除了得到政府獎(jiǎng)金20萬(wàn)元以外，還會(huì)從地方得到更多的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)。對(duì)此，社會(huì)各界反響不一。
贊 成 不 贊 成
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)員為國(guó)爭(zhēng)了光
2．運(yùn)動(dòng)員付出了許多辛苦和汗水
3．獎(jiǎng)金有利于中國(guó)體育后備力量的培養(yǎng) 1．運(yùn)動(dòng)員是國(guó)家培養(yǎng)出來(lái)的，為國(guó)爭(zhēng)光理所當(dāng)然
2．得到大量獎(jiǎng)金后，有些隊(duì)員就會(huì)退役
3．一些企業(yè)趁機(jī)炒作，從中獲取廣告效應(yīng)
請(qǐng)你就此現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單闡述，并提出自己的一些看法或建議。（120詞左右）
提示詞匯：獎(jiǎng)金bonus
范文：
China drew the most ever attention of the world in the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, in which the Chinese athletes set a new record by winning more gold medals than before. The winners of gold medals each received more rewards from local governments as well as a bonus of 200,000
yuan from the central government. Opinions are divided on the phenomenon.
Some are in favor of it. In their opinion, athletes have won great honour for the country and to win a gold medal, athletes have to make great efforts. What’s more, rewards will benefit the training of future players.
In contrast, others hold the opinion that athletes are trained by the country so they are supposed to win honor for China. Also some athletes will probably quit after getting much money. What’s worse, some enterprises will take advantage of the successful athletes to advertise for them, which will have a bad effect on their image.
As far as I am concerned, it is necessary to do so since it can inspire athletes to do better in the next Olympics.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（議論文 觀點(diǎn)辯論）（二）
假如你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。最近，你班同學(xué)正在參加21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)“大家談”欄目的一個(gè)討論。本次話題為：“父母有沒(méi)有必要陪讀？”
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列情況給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，客觀地介紹討論的情況。
70%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為： 30%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：
1． 父母不應(yīng)該陪讀
2． 父母陪讀讓我們養(yǎng)成依賴的習(xí)慣，不利于我們將來(lái)自控能力的培養(yǎng)，不利于我們培養(yǎng)良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。
3． 父母陪讀影響了他們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)和休息。 1． 父母應(yīng)該陪讀
2． 父母陪讀能使我們騰出更多的專心學(xué)習(xí)，使我們身體更健康。
3． 父母陪讀能幫助我們確立學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，督促我們完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，鼓勵(lì)我們獨(dú)立解決困難，培養(yǎng)我們養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。
注意：1. 信的形式已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好。
2．詞數(shù)100左右。
3．參考詞匯：陪讀 accompany sb. studying at school 督促 urge
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 觀點(diǎn)辯論）（二）
假如你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。最近，你班同學(xué)正在參加21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)“大家談”欄目的一個(gè)討論。本次話題為：“父母有沒(méi)有必要陪讀？”
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列情況給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，客觀地介紹討論的情況。
70%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為： 30%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：
1． 父母不應(yīng)該陪讀
2． 父母陪讀讓我們養(yǎng)成依賴的習(xí)慣，不利于我們將來(lái)自控能力的培養(yǎng)，不利于我們培養(yǎng)良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。
3． 父母陪讀影響了他們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)和休息。 1． 父母應(yīng)該陪讀
2． 父母陪讀能使我們騰出更多的專心學(xué)習(xí)，使我們身體更健康。
3． 父母陪讀能幫助我們確立學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，督促我們完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，鼓勵(lì)我們獨(dú)立解決困難，培養(yǎng)我們養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。
注意：1. 信的形式已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好。
2．詞數(shù)100左右。
3．參考詞匯：陪讀 accompany sb. studying at school 督促 urge
Dear editor,
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on whether students should be accompanied by parents studying at school. Opinions are divided on the topic.
70% of my classmates hold the view that there is no need for parents to do so. For one thing, we may fall into the habit of dependence, which will have a negative effect on the development of our self-control ability. For another, it will affect our parents’ work, study and rest.
However, 30% of us are in favor of it. In their opinion, with parents accompanying us, we can spare more time to concentrate on our study and we will become more healthy. Furthermore, parents can help set our study goal and urge us to complete our study tasks. Also we can overcome difficulties on our own. with their encouragement and develop a good habit of studying.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（三）
假如你們學(xué)校“英語(yǔ)愛(ài)好者俱樂(lè)部”將對(duì)“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：
部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣
良好的飲食習(xí)慣
個(gè)人看法
注意：1.發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.發(fā)言稿開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3.詞數(shù)：120左右.
4.參考詞匯:偏食be particular about food 零食 snack
Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore , it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. ____________________________________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you!
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（三）
假如你們學(xué)?！坝⒄Z(yǔ)愛(ài)好者俱樂(lè)部”將對(duì)“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：
部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣
良好的飲食習(xí)慣
個(gè)人看法
注意：1.發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.發(fā)言稿開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3.詞數(shù)：120左右.
4.參考詞匯:偏食be particular about food 零食 snack
范文：
Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s a very important for us to from healthy
eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often
go to school without breakfast and some like to have snacks during breaks, as a result of which they can’t take in enough nutrients. We can also find that some students are particular about food; and
still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.
To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
That’s all. Thank you!
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（四）
假設(shè)你是李華，在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間，到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译?看了一場(chǎng)精彩的電影，但在觀影過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)給*經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封信。
1. 因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映晚點(diǎn)；
2. 影片播放音量過(guò)大；
3. 安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患；
適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)：80～120；
2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
參考詞匯：安全出口－exit
安全隱患－potential safety hazard
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（四）
假設(shè)你是李華，在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間，到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译?看了一場(chǎng)精彩的電影，但在觀影過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)給*經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封信。
1. 因廣告過(guò)多，影片放映晚點(diǎn)；
2. 影片播放音量過(guò)大；
3. 安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患；
適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)：80～120；
2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
參考詞匯：安全出口－exit
安全隱患－potential safety hazard
Dear Manager,
I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was
very good, but I’d like to tell you several problems I found while watching the film.
Firstly, because there were too many advertisements, the film failed to begin on time, which made some audience angry. Secondly, the volume was too high, only to make me feel uncomfortable. And the last, when the film was on, I looked around carefully but didn’t see an exit sign. I think we shouldn’t ignore potential safety hazard in public places, especially in a cinema.
Of course, it’s my own opinion, but I do hope that my suggestion will be a little help to you and that your cinema will take on a new look.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（五）
今年寒假，你參加了社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，去某旅行社當(dāng)業(yè)余導(dǎo)游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)該旅行社提供的數(shù)據(jù)和你的所見(jiàn)所聞，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，作為寒假作業(yè)交給你的英語(yǔ)老師。
Number of people in City X travelling
abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006
要求：1. 簡(jiǎn)析表格，說(shuō)明產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；2. 結(jié)合漫畫(huà)，談?wù)劸惩饴糜纬霈F(xiàn)的問(wèn)題；
3. 針對(duì)所出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題闡述你自己的看法（至少兩點(diǎn)）；4. 詞數(shù)120左右；
5. 參考詞匯：吐痰 spit v.
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（五）
今年寒假，你參加了社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，去某旅行社當(dāng)業(yè)余導(dǎo)游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)該旅行社提供的數(shù)據(jù)和你的所見(jiàn)所聞，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，作為寒假作業(yè)交給你的英語(yǔ)老師。
Number of people in City X travelling
abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006
要求：1. 簡(jiǎn)析表格，說(shuō)明產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；2. 結(jié)合漫畫(huà)，談?wù)劸惩饴糜纬霈F(xiàn)的問(wèn)題；
3. 針對(duì)所出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題闡述你自己的看法（至少兩點(diǎn)）；4. 詞數(shù)120左右；
5. 參考詞匯：吐痰 spit v.
When people’s life is getting better and better, more and more people choose to spend their holidays abroad. The year 2006 sees a sharp increase in the number of overseas travelers compared with the year 2001, when the number was already more than double that of the year 1996. It’s a good thing that Chinese tourism is developing very fast. And yet, reports about people’s bad manners flood in. Some are even asked if all Chinese spit and litter everywhere. The poor behavior has done great harm to the image of China, which is really shameful.
China has long been regarded as a country with good manners. Everybody should keep some do’s and don’ts in their mind to guide their behavior in public, home and abroad. Win respect for yourself and our country!
一、 評(píng)分原則
1． 詞數(shù)少于100，從總分中減去2分。
2． 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。
3． 拼寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。
4． 如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以致影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。
二、 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)
1. 簡(jiǎn)析表格內(nèi)容；
2. 出境旅游人數(shù)快速增長(zhǎng)的原因，如：生活水平的提高（學(xué)生需自己發(fā)揮）
3. 漫畫(huà)中的問(wèn)題: 隨地吐痰，亂扔垃圾
4. 個(gè)人的看法，指出這些行為是不文明的；要提倡社會(huì)公德（學(xué)生需自己發(fā)揮至少兩點(diǎn)）
書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)（結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表看法）
常用句型:
1. As is shown by the graph/in the table。。（概述圖表，得出結(jié)論）
It can be seen from the table that … （概述圖表，得出結(jié)論）
A. 正如曲線所示，最近54年來(lái)該國(guó)人口飛速增長(zhǎng)。
As is shown by the graph, there has been a rapid increase in the population of the country in the
past five years.
B. 從表中所給的統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字可以看出，從1985年到1990年中國(guó)的人均收入迅速提高。
From the statistics given in the table it can be seen that the average personal income of the Chinese people increased (grew 、rose) rapidly from 1985 to 1990.
C. 從曲線圖可以得出結(jié)論，最近5年來(lái)中國(guó)人口的出生率已經(jīng)大大下降。
It can be concluded from the graph that there has been a great decline in birth rates in China in the past five years.
2. … amount to … （數(shù)量總計(jì)）
add up to/come to /sum up to
全部費(fèi)用合計(jì)200美元。
All the expenses (costs) amount to (= add up to) $ 200.
3. … increase/rise/grow/climb from … to … （數(shù)量增減）
…decrease/fall/drop from…to…
A. 這個(gè)工廠生產(chǎn)的彩電已由1986年的5000臺(tái)增加到1990年的21000臺(tái)。
The number of colour TV sets produced by the factory increased (rose , grew , climbed) from 5000 in 1986 to 21000 in 1990.
B. 這個(gè)學(xué)校的教職工人數(shù)已減少到700人。
The number of teaching staff members in this school has decreased to 700 persons.
There is (was) a rapid/sharp/sudden /gradual/slow rise/decrease in …
…be on the increase/decline
最近幾年來(lái)這個(gè)地區(qū)的棉花產(chǎn)量有了迅速增長(zhǎng)。
There has been a rapid increase in the cotton output in this area in the past few years.
4.（be）three times as + 形容詞 + as …
(be) three times the size/amount/number/height/length of…
A. 現(xiàn)在我們地區(qū)的糧食產(chǎn)量相當(dāng)于1970年的3倍。
The grain production (= output)in our area now is three times as great as that of 1970.
B. 我校學(xué)生人數(shù)是去年的兩倍。
The number of the students in our school is twice that of last year.
5. Compared with … , …
與去年相比，今年13項(xiàng)主要產(chǎn)品的產(chǎn)量都有大幅度增長(zhǎng)。
Compared with that of last year, the output of 13 main products (= items) this year has increased to a great extent.
6. “結(jié)尾”段落中常用的句型：
1. In my opinion, … 2. Personally, I … 3. In short (= In brief), …
4. In conclusion, … 5.As far as I’m concerned, … 6. To conclude , it seems clear that …
至于說(shuō)到我，我贊成前一種觀點(diǎn)。所以，我的結(jié)論是，只要我們堅(jiān)持正確的東西，改正錯(cuò)誤的東西，我們就一定能成功。
As far as I’m concerned ,I’m in favour of the former view. Therefore, my conclusion is that we are certain to succeed as long as we stick to what is right and correct what is wrong.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（六）
假設(shè)你是李華.你將代表學(xué)校參加國(guó)際中學(xué)生論壇，就你所在城市的教育狀況發(fā)表演講。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下兩幅圖表,介紹你市高中學(xué)生構(gòu)成情況及畢業(yè)去向的選擇，并針對(duì)兩幅圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況發(fā)表你自己的看法。
注意：1．文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出；
2．詞數(shù)100左右(不包括已給部分)
3. 參考詞匯: 圖表: chart 職業(yè)學(xué)校: vocational school
外來(lái)務(wù)工人員: non-local workers
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（六）
假設(shè)你是李華.你將代表學(xué)校參加國(guó)際中學(xué)生論壇，就你所在城市的教育狀況發(fā)表演講。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下兩幅圖表,介紹你市高中學(xué)生構(gòu)成情況及畢業(yè)去向的選擇，并針對(duì)兩幅圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況發(fā)表你自己的看法。
注意：1．文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出；2．詞數(shù)100左右(不包括已給部分)
3. 參考詞匯: 圖表: chart 職業(yè)學(xué)校: vocational school
外來(lái)務(wù)工人員: non-local workers
范文：
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm Li Hua. Today, I'm greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I'm going to talk about the high school education of my city.
From Chart 1, we can see high school students are from different family backgrounds. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers. Another 1 percent are foreigner students.
As is shown in chart 2, sixty percent of them intend to go to university, which is double the number of those who will attend vocational schools. Besides, the other ten percent choose to go abroad for further study.
In conclusion, it seems clear that our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers, whose children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city students. Also with the economic development of our city, more foreigners are attracted to set up businesses here and they are happy to send their children to local schools to learn more about China and Chinese culture. In addition, we have more freedom to choose what we would like to do after graduation. Going to college is no longer the only choice for most of us as it was years ago.
I believe the future of the education in our city is promising!
That's all. Thank you.
07揚(yáng)州一模試卷書(shū)面表達(dá)范文：
Different Sources of Income Between Chinese and American Students
These two charts show the differences in the sources of income between Chinese and American students. As is shown in the charts, Chinese students get 90 percent of their income from their parents while American students get only 50 percent from parents. Besides, for Chinese students, income from doing part time jobs makes up only 5 percent of the total. So does income from scholarships. However, money from part time jobs and scholarships for American students amount to 35 and 15 percent respectively.
From the analysis above, we can easily find out the reasons. Chinese parents like to take more care of their children. They’d rather work hard and save money in order to provide their children with everything they need. American parents, on the other hand, like to pay more attention to the development of children’s ability to be independent. They would rather encourage their children to support themselves. As for students, Chinese students tend to depend on parents while American students think it natural to depend on themselves.
單句改錯(cuò)：
1. American students get 50% of their income from parents. While in China, 90% of the students’ income come from parents.
2. It causes the students in China don’t want to do part-time work to earn money.
3. American students are more indepent while Chinese students always depend their parents.
4. Besides the income from parents, who make up 50%, 35% of American students’ income are from their part-time jobs.
5. There is about 35% of the income comes from part-time jobs.
6. As is shown in the charts that half of the income of American students is from parents.
7. Chinese students are easier to depend on their parents.
8. Chinese parents don’t like American parents who attach great importance to their independence.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（七）
根據(jù)圖示，為報(bào)社寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于我國(guó)交通事故的報(bào)告。分析原因并對(duì)這種情況提出改進(jìn)措施。字?jǐn)?shù)120字左右。（開(kāi)頭已給出）
The number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years. As can be seen from the graph,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（七）
根據(jù)圖示，為報(bào)社寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于我國(guó)交通事故的報(bào)告。分析原因并對(duì)這種情況提出改進(jìn)措施。字?jǐn)?shù)120字左右。（開(kāi)頭已給出）
The number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years. As can be seen from the graph, in 2004 there occurred 570,000 traffic accidents, in which109,000 people got killed. By October 2005, the number of the accidents reached 566,000 and 95,600 people lost their lives. While the number of the cars makes up only 2% of the total of the world, the rate of the deaths is 22%, making China a country with the highest death rate of traffic accidents in the world.
The main reason why so many traffic accidents have happened is that the roads are too crowded and people ignore traffic rules. In order to reduce the traffic accidents, first, the government should take some proper measures, such as developing public traffics. Second, people should obey traffic rules, especially the drivers.
Only when people have decided to take action will traffic problems be solved.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （議論文 結(jié)合圖表發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)）（八）
（南通二?？荚嚪段模?BR> Recently I have conducted a survey on taking a nap after lunch among my classmates. Most of them are in the habit of sleeping for a while at noon for they believe it does good to them. In general, students prefer to do so around 12:30 and the nap usually lasts for about 30 minutes. They often choose to sleep at home instead of in their classroom or dormitory.
Hopefully, the result of my survey can draw the attention of our parents and school. Since most students are in need of a nap, proper arrangements should be made so that students can have a good rest after a whole morning’s hard work. Students should not be asked to do extra schoolwork during this period of time. After all, with a nap after lunch, one can feel refreshed and energetic enough to study more efficiently in the afternoon.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （應(yīng)用文）（九）
（揚(yáng)州一模考試范文）
Dear Wang Hai,
How are you doing?
Recently an American bestseller is popular among the students in our school. I read it, and to my
excitement, it was really inspiring. I would like to recommend it to you.
The book Chicken Soup for the Soul, written by Jack Canfield, was first published in 1993 and soon became a bestseller. So far over 8 million copies have been sold, ranking first in New York Times and USA Today. The book with 101 stories to open your heart and rekindle your spirit will surely inspire readers of all ages. It has been translated into tens of languages, spreading love to every corner of the world. Besides, an English version will be of great help to English learners as it will help improve our English.
The original price of the book is 64 yuan, but you can get one for 54.4 yuan at dangdang.com, which will save you 9.6 yuan. The book will be delivered to you within 24-48 hours after your payment.
To get more information, you can visit the website. Get one and enjoy it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
主要存在問(wèn)題：
遺漏要點(diǎn)：24-48小時(shí)內(nèi)送達(dá)
理解錯(cuò)誤：款到付貨
注意不同表達(dá)方式：
1．適合英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)者
be good for English learners
be of benefit to English learners
be a great help to English learners
2． 款到付貨
It won’t be delivered to you until paid for.
Pay money first and then the book will be delivered to your door.
The book will be delivered to you after your payment.
3． 定價(jià)64元 當(dāng)當(dāng)價(jià)54.5元 節(jié)省9.60元
It costs only 54.4 yuan on line, which is 9.6 yuan cheaper than the original price.
It costs only 54.4 yuan on line and can save you as much as 9.60 yuan.
Dangdang.com offers 15% discount, meaning you only have to pay 54.5 yuan.
It allows 15% discount off the original price.
4． 這是能激勵(lì)所有年齡層次讀者的書(shū)
It’s an inspiring book intended for all ages.
The book will inspire readers of all ages.
書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （應(yīng)用文）（十）
假如你叫王平，根據(jù)圖表提示，給你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Smith 寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你的寒假生活（共20天），可根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況添加細(xì)節(jié)。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Smith,
How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.
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書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 （應(yīng)用文）（十）
假如你叫王平，根據(jù)圖表提示，給你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Smith 寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你的寒假生活（共20天），可根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況添加細(xì)節(jié)。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Smith,
How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.
We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival. It took me about a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China. Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons. As you know, I will take the National Examination in June and there’s a short time ahead. Every day I did some English reading, practised writing compositions, worked out a number of maths problems and so on. When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.
In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday. How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Ping