Writing
Write a composition of 160-200 words under the title “The Use of Computer in the future”, which should include the following three aspects.
1. The possible areas in which computers may be used.
2. Their shortcomings and limitations.
3. Their possibilities of replacing human beings, or otherwise.
寫作策略:
本課的寫作題目是屬于提綱式議論文的寫作。前面我們已經(jīng)介紹過了提綱式作文的寫作,這里我們重點(diǎn)介紹以下議論文寫作的注意事項(xiàng)。
議論文是一種說理性文體,它的三要素是論點(diǎn),論據(jù)和論證。寫議論文的時(shí)候,作者是要通過擺事實(shí),講道理來說服讀者同意自己的觀點(diǎn)或接受自己的建議。雜文,評(píng)論,社論,論文都屬于此類文體。在寫作手法上,議論文與記敘文和說明文有不少相似的地方,其中與說明文的關(guān)系為密切。許多說明文的寫作手法都可以用于 議論文。因此有人將它們統(tǒng)稱為論說文。議論文與說明文都有說理的成分,但是角度不同。作為兩種不同的文體,它們之間的差異主要表現(xiàn)為:說明文側(cè)重于客觀地陳述事物的本來面目,目的是讓人們明白并理解;而議論文則是從主觀的角度出發(fā),表達(dá)一種自我的觀點(diǎn)和看法,并努力說服他人贊同并接受自己的觀點(diǎn)。
寫作提綱:
首段:
列舉可能使用到計(jì)算機(jī)的諸多領(lǐng)域,說明計(jì)算機(jī)在這些領(lǐng)域中發(fā)揮的重要作用。
主題段落:
計(jì)算機(jī)雖然有強(qiáng)大的功能,但仍然有自身的缺點(diǎn)和局限性。
缺點(diǎn):
1. 進(jìn)入網(wǎng)絡(luò)的計(jì)算機(jī)傳播不健康的信息,毒害青少年。
2.一些青少年沉溺于計(jì)算機(jī)游戲。
局限性:
計(jì)算機(jī)終歸只是機(jī)器,它不能獨(dú)立于程序而獨(dú)立思考。
結(jié)尾段:
發(fā)表自己的看法。未來的計(jì)算機(jī)將以更快的速度飛速發(fā)展,但永遠(yuǎn)不能代替人類,因?yàn)樗鼈儫o法進(jìn)行獨(dú)立的思考。
參考范文:
The Use of Computer in the Future
Computers are becoming more and more essential in many areas of our lives. We depend on the computer very much in our daily life, for instance, modern banking, hospital file management, supermarket retail information exchange and so on. Different people use computers in different areas. Young guys entertain themselves through computer games. Scientists collect data and information through computer network. Doctors refer to the results of computers have even been introduced onto the classroom of primary schools. Undoubtedly, computers are playing an important role in our social life.
However, there is a good side and a bad side to everything—and that includes the computer. Its drawbacks should not be neglected. The computer connected to internet may spread some bad contents, such as subversive and pornographic items, putting bad effect on the growths of young people. Furthermore, many students become addicted to computer games, spending too much time in front of the screen. As a result, they don’t have enough time for study. Some even think they are the roles in the violent games maybe acting according t the virtual people in the reality finally.
This is very dangerous for the young generation. Although a computer has a lot of advanced function, it still has its limitations. Computers work according to the fixed program which has been written into micro-chips. They can’t think by themselves independently. So the intelligence of computers is only a representation of human intelligence.
While there is a great deal of enthusiasm nowadays over the great power of computers, it is impossible for computers to take the place of human being. They can not think independently, which is their vital weakness. No matter what progress computers make in the future, their intelligence can never surpass that of human being.
Write a composition of 160-200 words under the title “The Use of Computer in the future”, which should include the following three aspects.
1. The possible areas in which computers may be used.
2. Their shortcomings and limitations.
3. Their possibilities of replacing human beings, or otherwise.
寫作策略:
本課的寫作題目是屬于提綱式議論文的寫作。前面我們已經(jīng)介紹過了提綱式作文的寫作,這里我們重點(diǎn)介紹以下議論文寫作的注意事項(xiàng)。
議論文是一種說理性文體,它的三要素是論點(diǎn),論據(jù)和論證。寫議論文的時(shí)候,作者是要通過擺事實(shí),講道理來說服讀者同意自己的觀點(diǎn)或接受自己的建議。雜文,評(píng)論,社論,論文都屬于此類文體。在寫作手法上,議論文與記敘文和說明文有不少相似的地方,其中與說明文的關(guān)系為密切。許多說明文的寫作手法都可以用于 議論文。因此有人將它們統(tǒng)稱為論說文。議論文與說明文都有說理的成分,但是角度不同。作為兩種不同的文體,它們之間的差異主要表現(xiàn)為:說明文側(cè)重于客觀地陳述事物的本來面目,目的是讓人們明白并理解;而議論文則是從主觀的角度出發(fā),表達(dá)一種自我的觀點(diǎn)和看法,并努力說服他人贊同并接受自己的觀點(diǎn)。
寫作提綱:
首段:
列舉可能使用到計(jì)算機(jī)的諸多領(lǐng)域,說明計(jì)算機(jī)在這些領(lǐng)域中發(fā)揮的重要作用。
主題段落:
計(jì)算機(jī)雖然有強(qiáng)大的功能,但仍然有自身的缺點(diǎn)和局限性。
缺點(diǎn):
1. 進(jìn)入網(wǎng)絡(luò)的計(jì)算機(jī)傳播不健康的信息,毒害青少年。
2.一些青少年沉溺于計(jì)算機(jī)游戲。
局限性:
計(jì)算機(jī)終歸只是機(jī)器,它不能獨(dú)立于程序而獨(dú)立思考。
結(jié)尾段:
發(fā)表自己的看法。未來的計(jì)算機(jī)將以更快的速度飛速發(fā)展,但永遠(yuǎn)不能代替人類,因?yàn)樗鼈儫o法進(jìn)行獨(dú)立的思考。
參考范文:
The Use of Computer in the Future
Computers are becoming more and more essential in many areas of our lives. We depend on the computer very much in our daily life, for instance, modern banking, hospital file management, supermarket retail information exchange and so on. Different people use computers in different areas. Young guys entertain themselves through computer games. Scientists collect data and information through computer network. Doctors refer to the results of computers have even been introduced onto the classroom of primary schools. Undoubtedly, computers are playing an important role in our social life.
However, there is a good side and a bad side to everything—and that includes the computer. Its drawbacks should not be neglected. The computer connected to internet may spread some bad contents, such as subversive and pornographic items, putting bad effect on the growths of young people. Furthermore, many students become addicted to computer games, spending too much time in front of the screen. As a result, they don’t have enough time for study. Some even think they are the roles in the violent games maybe acting according t the virtual people in the reality finally.
This is very dangerous for the young generation. Although a computer has a lot of advanced function, it still has its limitations. Computers work according to the fixed program which has been written into micro-chips. They can’t think by themselves independently. So the intelligence of computers is only a representation of human intelligence.
While there is a great deal of enthusiasm nowadays over the great power of computers, it is impossible for computers to take the place of human being. They can not think independently, which is their vital weakness. No matter what progress computers make in the future, their intelligence can never surpass that of human being.