著力設(shè)置語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)考研英語(yǔ)寫作三大高分句式

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考研作文在考研英語(yǔ)考試中占了30分,是不容忽視的部分?!犊佳杏⒄Z(yǔ)大綱》把對(duì)作文“語(yǔ)言”的要求放在了第一位,即:語(yǔ)言第一,內(nèi)容第二,思想第三。各位考生要想在這一部分勝出,就必須在語(yǔ)言的“精美度”上下功夫。筆者建議大家時(shí)刻培養(yǎng)“亮點(diǎn)”意識(shí),在考研作文中設(shè)置“語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)”,從而為獲得高分打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。本文將為大家介紹考研寫作的三大高分句式——短句拉長(zhǎng)、插入語(yǔ)和并列結(jié)構(gòu)。
    高分句式一——短句拉長(zhǎng)
    在考研英語(yǔ)作文中,一般短句都可以拉為長(zhǎng)句,而且,從理論上講,一個(gè)句子的長(zhǎng)度可以是無(wú)限的,但是出于實(shí)際情況,大家要學(xué)會(huì)寫有限度的長(zhǎng)句。
    雖然《考研英語(yǔ)大綱》沒(méi)有明確規(guī)定作文中長(zhǎng)句的長(zhǎng)度和數(shù)量,但是基于考研作文實(shí)戰(zhàn)的需要,考生需要有一種“長(zhǎng)句設(shè)置”意識(shí),即通過(guò)在文中設(shè)置若干個(gè)長(zhǎng)句,向閱卷老師展示考生對(duì)于復(fù)雜語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)的掌握能力,從而征服老師的心,獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。
    寫作要領(lǐng)
    1.名詞+形容詞,+同位語(yǔ),+定語(yǔ)從句;
    2.動(dòng)詞+狀語(yǔ)(時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的、方式)。
    實(shí)戰(zhàn)舉例
    例1:Officials have built highways.
    In recent years, responsible, hard-working and warm-hearted officials have built a great number of highways which have brought much convenience to the local citizens.
    例1中短句拉長(zhǎng)的步驟:
    1.在句首,加上時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)in recent years;
    2.在名詞officials前面加上responsible, hard-working, warm-hearted三個(gè)形容詞修飾它;
    3.在名詞highways后面加上定語(yǔ)從句which have brought much convenience to the local citizens。
    例2:Factories have discharged gas and liquid.
    The newly-built chemical factories have discharged harmful and even poisonous gases and liquids which have had a seriously negative impact on the surrounding environment.
    例2中短句拉長(zhǎng)的步驟:
    1.在名詞factories前面加上兩個(gè)修飾形容詞newly- built和chemical;
    2.在名詞gases and liquids后面上加上一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句which have had a seriously negative impact on the surrounding environment。