托福寫作—鍛造地道英語句子 I

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托福寫作其實很容易:20分鐘學(xué)會三種題型的寫法。托福寫作其實很難,怎樣才能寫出地道的英語句子?建議:平時多多練習(xí),并通過查詞典把你寫作時可能常說的話由Chinglish改成地道的English。下面例子可供參考:
    句子:
    1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
    改進(jìn):Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
    2. For example, you work in a big factory.
    改進(jìn): Suppose you work in a big factory.
    3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
    改進(jìn):You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
    4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
    改進(jìn): We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
    5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
    改進(jìn): He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
    6. Their brain is still very young.
    改進(jìn): They are still immature.
    7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
    改進(jìn): Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
    8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
    改進(jìn): They cannot tell right from wrong.
    9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
    改進(jìn): It will help children learn to make good use of time.
    10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
    改進(jìn): Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.