托福議論文樣例:老人與成人子女是否應(yīng)生活在一起

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Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Other people sy that they shouldn't. Which do you think is a good practice?
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    一 條件: 有人認(rèn)為老人應(yīng)與成人子女生活在一起/有人認(rèn)為不應(yīng)一道生活
    二 要求: 談?wù)勀姆N做法好
    三 寫作分析: 本題為家常話題,人人都有話可說,關(guān)鍵是確立自己的觀點(diǎn),思路要有條理.關(guān)于父母與子女的關(guān)系,發(fā)達(dá)國家的流行做法是子女成年之后另立門戶,中國人幾世同堂的局面也在改變,這是世界范圍內(nèi)相同的發(fā)展趨勢.盡管如此,文章的觀點(diǎn)仍可任意選擇,只要言之有理,語言規(guī)范無誤,判卷著也會公正判分.文章的結(jié)構(gòu)仍可采用三步式.來源:www.examda.com
    One of the topic in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer to the question is that it is betterr for them not to.
    To begin with, adult children, like their parents, love indenpendence and freedom, but their parents may still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts. Besides, the new menbers of the family have no blood relations with the parents. When the relationship between the inlaws and the parents is not harmonious, the sons or daughters of the parents will be in a dificult position.
    Secondly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life; whereas the young love noises, activities, and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, the old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.
    Furthermore, people of different generations have differrent views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on maters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and interrnational issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.來源:www.examda.com
    In short, if the parents and their adult children donot live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other. Separate living does not mean separation of relations. The parents and their children can still visit and help each other if they stay in the same area.
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    文章在語義上分三部分,但包含五個自然段,目的是使人感到一目了然.第一段敘述作文題內(nèi)容,然后直接擺出自己觀點(diǎn),形成一個主題句,之后的三段為三個理由.最后一段起概括和說明的作用,同時文章收尾.在語言上,文章第一段含主題句,之后四段分別以邏輯詞開頭,使文章條理清楚,層次分明.