「內(nèi)容提示」
某一天，有人告訴你說(shuō)你家里出了大事。你趕回家一看是自己的一位親人去世了。你悲痛萬(wàn)分，有幾天沉浸在悲傷之中。你辦完喪事返校后，同學(xué)們都來(lái)向你致哀，并用各種方法安慰你，有的同學(xué)還拿出錢來(lái)資助你的學(xué)習(xí)生活費(fèi)，你十分感激。
「作文示范」
After Father's Death
周敏
November 4， 1996 was a day I shall never forget.
At 9 o'clock that night， I was told that something serious had happened in my family. I hurried home from school. When I saw many of my father's fellow workers in his bedroom， I knew the worst thing had happened . I pushed my way into the room and saw Father lying in bed ， covered with a white sheet①。 I rushed to him， lifted the white sheet with trembling hands， and caught sight of his pale face with his eyes tightly closed. In despair I shook his shoulders， crying， “Dad！ Dad！ ” But his mouth never opened. Tears began running down my cheeks.
During the following two days I was deep in sorrow. When I was arranging Father's funeral②， many classmates and friends came to comfort③ Mother and me.
On the day I returned to school， my classmates again tried to comfort me . When I opened my desk ， I found in it a lot of letters and notes， in which were many comforting and encouraging words. I was so moved that I coudn't keep my tears. Then a teacher told me that my classmates had contributed④ a large amount of money to help me pay living and school expenses⑤。 I was very thankful to them and tears again filled my eyes . I covered my face with my hands though I was a big boy. I could find no words to express my feelings at that moment. Their love for me gave me much courage. I was proud of such a warmhearted⑥ class.
（選自《英語(yǔ)畫(huà)刊》高中版1997年第7期）
「詞語(yǔ)解釋」
①sheet [Mi：t] n.被單
②funeral ['fju：n+r+l] n.喪葬；葬禮
③comfort ['k）mf+t] v.安慰
④contribute [k+n'tribju（：）t] v.捐獻(xiàn)
⑤expense [ik'spens] n.花費(fèi)
⑥warmhearted ['w&：m'ha：tid] a.富于同情心的
「寫(xiě)法指要」
本文寫(xiě)得真實(shí)、清楚，表達(dá)了三種感情：悲痛之情，友愛(ài)之情和感激之情。悲痛之情和感激之情是通過(guò)兩種眼淚表達(dá)的：悲痛的眼淚奪眶而出，淚如泉涌（crying，began running down）；感激的眼淚情不自禁“couldn't keep back my tears， tears again filled my eyes”。友愛(ài)之情的表達(dá)主要是通過(guò)重復(fù)動(dòng)詞“comfort”，“contribute”和分詞“comforting”，“encouraging”實(shí)現(xiàn)的。最后，作者為有這樣富于同情心的班集體而驕傲，并要化悲痛為力量，表達(dá)對(duì)同學(xué)、老師們關(guān)懷的謝意。
某一天，有人告訴你說(shuō)你家里出了大事。你趕回家一看是自己的一位親人去世了。你悲痛萬(wàn)分，有幾天沉浸在悲傷之中。你辦完喪事返校后，同學(xué)們都來(lái)向你致哀，并用各種方法安慰你，有的同學(xué)還拿出錢來(lái)資助你的學(xué)習(xí)生活費(fèi)，你十分感激。
「作文示范」
After Father's Death
周敏
November 4， 1996 was a day I shall never forget.
At 9 o'clock that night， I was told that something serious had happened in my family. I hurried home from school. When I saw many of my father's fellow workers in his bedroom， I knew the worst thing had happened . I pushed my way into the room and saw Father lying in bed ， covered with a white sheet①。 I rushed to him， lifted the white sheet with trembling hands， and caught sight of his pale face with his eyes tightly closed. In despair I shook his shoulders， crying， “Dad！ Dad！ ” But his mouth never opened. Tears began running down my cheeks.
During the following two days I was deep in sorrow. When I was arranging Father's funeral②， many classmates and friends came to comfort③ Mother and me.
On the day I returned to school， my classmates again tried to comfort me . When I opened my desk ， I found in it a lot of letters and notes， in which were many comforting and encouraging words. I was so moved that I coudn't keep my tears. Then a teacher told me that my classmates had contributed④ a large amount of money to help me pay living and school expenses⑤。 I was very thankful to them and tears again filled my eyes . I covered my face with my hands though I was a big boy. I could find no words to express my feelings at that moment. Their love for me gave me much courage. I was proud of such a warmhearted⑥ class.
（選自《英語(yǔ)畫(huà)刊》高中版1997年第7期）
「詞語(yǔ)解釋」
①sheet [Mi：t] n.被單
②funeral ['fju：n+r+l] n.喪葬；葬禮
③comfort ['k）mf+t] v.安慰
④contribute [k+n'tribju（：）t] v.捐獻(xiàn)
⑤expense [ik'spens] n.花費(fèi)
⑥warmhearted ['w&：m'ha：tid] a.富于同情心的
「寫(xiě)法指要」
本文寫(xiě)得真實(shí)、清楚，表達(dá)了三種感情：悲痛之情，友愛(ài)之情和感激之情。悲痛之情和感激之情是通過(guò)兩種眼淚表達(dá)的：悲痛的眼淚奪眶而出，淚如泉涌（crying，began running down）；感激的眼淚情不自禁“couldn't keep back my tears， tears again filled my eyes”。友愛(ài)之情的表達(dá)主要是通過(guò)重復(fù)動(dòng)詞“comfort”，“contribute”和分詞“comforting”，“encouraging”實(shí)現(xiàn)的。最后，作者為有這樣富于同情心的班集體而驕傲，并要化悲痛為力量，表達(dá)對(duì)同學(xué)、老師們關(guān)懷的謝意。