「要求」
放暑假了，天氣炎熱，你和同學(xué)們?nèi)W(xué)校游泳館游泳。人很多，人們以各種不同的泳姿游著。你一開(kāi)始不會(huì)跳水。但在同學(xué)的指導(dǎo)下，你終于學(xué)會(huì)了?；丶乙院螅憔徒裉煊斡镜氖聦懥似沼?。
「范文」
A Diary
July 20th， Sunday Sunny
It was a hot Sunday afternoon. I want to swim in the school swimming natarorium with several of my classmates. When we arrived， many people were already there. They swam in various styles.
Quickly changing into my swimming suit in the changing room， I jumped into the pool.
One of my classmates told me how to dive and showed me. I put my arms over my head and dived. I did beautifully at last.
An hour passed before I knew it. I got out of the pool and fell a little tired but very happy.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
這是一篇日記體的記敘文，記敘了一次游泳。作者先概括寫了游泳池的情況，然后寫自己學(xué)跳水的經(jīng)過(guò)。文章內(nèi)容不多，但有些詞語(yǔ)如“in company with”，“changing room”等要學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用。
放暑假了，天氣炎熱，你和同學(xué)們?nèi)W(xué)校游泳館游泳。人很多，人們以各種不同的泳姿游著。你一開(kāi)始不會(huì)跳水。但在同學(xué)的指導(dǎo)下，你終于學(xué)會(huì)了?；丶乙院螅憔徒裉煊斡镜氖聦懥似沼?。
「范文」
A Diary
July 20th， Sunday Sunny
It was a hot Sunday afternoon. I want to swim in the school swimming natarorium with several of my classmates. When we arrived， many people were already there. They swam in various styles.
Quickly changing into my swimming suit in the changing room， I jumped into the pool.
One of my classmates told me how to dive and showed me. I put my arms over my head and dived. I did beautifully at last.
An hour passed before I knew it. I got out of the pool and fell a little tired but very happy.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
這是一篇日記體的記敘文，記敘了一次游泳。作者先概括寫了游泳池的情況，然后寫自己學(xué)跳水的經(jīng)過(guò)。文章內(nèi)容不多，但有些詞語(yǔ)如“in company with”，“changing room”等要學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用。