比較型作文之8分作文
比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說明式比較在比較過程中,作者不發(fā)表個人意見,在文中不體現(xiàn)個人取向,單純以說明介紹為目的。在四、六級考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場為目的,一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。
一、傾向型比較論說文
1.、首段 = 引言+ 主題句
引言句(第一句):引出比較的對象
主題句(第二句):提出主題,明確表明作者的個人取向與偏好。
2、主體部分
對比點的筆墨分配:應有所側重,對于作者持否定態(tài)度的事物的優(yōu)勢要少寫,而肯定的事物的優(yōu)點則要多用筆墨,對于其缺點則可輕描淡寫、一筆帶過。
3、結尾段 = 呼應主題句 + 強調被肯定事物的積極作用等
第一句:呼應主題句
第二句:可以用一句話歸納被肯定事物的優(yōu)點等。
結尾段 = 讓步句 + 呼應主題句
第一句:以讓步的口吻,提出被否定事物的一個小優(yōu)點
第二句:筆鋒一轉,用一句話歸納并突出被肯定事物的重大優(yōu)點,進一步確定自己的選擇,與主題句相互照應。
二、中立型比較論說文
首段和主體部分與傾向型比較論說文相同,而結尾段一般采用簡化總結模式:
結尾段 = 呼應主題句 + 一句話總結
第一句:呼應主題句
第二句:總結所比較對象最突出的優(yōu)點,可用while,whereas 連接
萬能模板:
傾向型
1. 有人認為大學住宿應該獨處一室 2.有人認為應該與同學合住 3.我的觀點
It is often difficult for ______ to decide whether A or B . In my opinion, A is always better.
Some students don't like B . First, they think ______ because ______. Second, _______. Third,_________.
The incomparable advantage of A is that ___________. First,___________. Second,________ .Third,________.
I regard A as a precious opportunity for it is the best way of ___________. And I confidently believe that _______.
中立型
1.有人喜歡鄉(xiāng)村生活 2.有人喜歡都市生活 3.我的觀點
Those who prefer A have their own reasons,while some other people prefer B . As for me ,both A and B have merits and demerits.
First and foremost,__________. Moreover, ____________. Last but not least, _______.
On the contrary _________. In addition,___________. What’s the commonest,________
Either ___________ or a _______gives _________ .I believe__________
引出不同觀點:
1、 People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that…. 人們對…的觀點因人而異.有些人認為….. 然而其他人卻認為...
2、 People may have different opinions on… 人們對…可能會有不同的見解.
3、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人們對待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異.
4、There are different opinions among people as to… 關于…. 人們的觀點大不相同.
5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 對(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同.
結尾:
1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會得出結論…
2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考慮所有這些因素,我們可能會得出合理的結論…
3、Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我們得出這樣的結論…
4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫無疑問,跳槽有優(yōu)點也有缺點.
5、All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
總之,我們沒有…是無法生活的.但同時,我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現(xiàn)的新問題.
比較型連接詞:like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說明式比較在比較過程中,作者不發(fā)表個人意見,在文中不體現(xiàn)個人取向,單純以說明介紹為目的。在四、六級考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場為目的,一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。
一、傾向型比較論說文
1.、首段 = 引言+ 主題句
引言句(第一句):引出比較的對象
主題句(第二句):提出主題,明確表明作者的個人取向與偏好。
2、主體部分
對比點的筆墨分配:應有所側重,對于作者持否定態(tài)度的事物的優(yōu)勢要少寫,而肯定的事物的優(yōu)點則要多用筆墨,對于其缺點則可輕描淡寫、一筆帶過。
3、結尾段 = 呼應主題句 + 強調被肯定事物的積極作用等
第一句:呼應主題句
第二句:可以用一句話歸納被肯定事物的優(yōu)點等。
結尾段 = 讓步句 + 呼應主題句
第一句:以讓步的口吻,提出被否定事物的一個小優(yōu)點
第二句:筆鋒一轉,用一句話歸納并突出被肯定事物的重大優(yōu)點,進一步確定自己的選擇,與主題句相互照應。
二、中立型比較論說文
首段和主體部分與傾向型比較論說文相同,而結尾段一般采用簡化總結模式:
結尾段 = 呼應主題句 + 一句話總結
第一句:呼應主題句
第二句:總結所比較對象最突出的優(yōu)點,可用while,whereas 連接
萬能模板:
傾向型
1. 有人認為大學住宿應該獨處一室 2.有人認為應該與同學合住 3.我的觀點
It is often difficult for ______ to decide whether A or B . In my opinion, A is always better.
Some students don't like B . First, they think ______ because ______. Second, _______. Third,_________.
The incomparable advantage of A is that ___________. First,___________. Second,________ .Third,________.
I regard A as a precious opportunity for it is the best way of ___________. And I confidently believe that _______.
中立型
1.有人喜歡鄉(xiāng)村生活 2.有人喜歡都市生活 3.我的觀點
Those who prefer A have their own reasons,while some other people prefer B . As for me ,both A and B have merits and demerits.
First and foremost,__________. Moreover, ____________. Last but not least, _______.
On the contrary _________. In addition,___________. What’s the commonest,________
Either ___________ or a _______gives _________ .I believe__________
引出不同觀點:
1、 People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that…. 人們對…的觀點因人而異.有些人認為….. 然而其他人卻認為...
2、 People may have different opinions on… 人們對…可能會有不同的見解.
3、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人們對待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異.
4、There are different opinions among people as to… 關于…. 人們的觀點大不相同.
5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 對(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同.
結尾:
1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會得出結論…
2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考慮所有這些因素,我們可能會得出合理的結論…
3、Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我們得出這樣的結論…
4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫無疑問,跳槽有優(yōu)點也有缺點.
5、All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
總之,我們沒有…是無法生活的.但同時,我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現(xiàn)的新問題.
比較型連接詞:like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.