2007年12月英語六級短文改錯(十四)

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    Sporting activities are essentially modified forms of
    hunting behavior. Viewing biologically, the modern footballer __1__
    is revealed as a member of a disguised hunting pack. His
    killing weapon has turned into a harmless football and his prey
    into a goal-mouth. If his aim is inaccurate and he scores a goal, ___2___
    enjoys the hunter’s triumph of killing his prey. ___3___
    To understand how this transformation has taken place we
    must briefly look up at our ancient ancestors. They spent over a ___4___
    million year evolving as co-operative hunters. Their very survival ___5___
    depended on success in the hunting-field. Under this pressure
    their whole way of life, even if their bodies, became radicaily ___6___
    changed. They became chasers, runners, jumpers, aimers,
    throwers and prey-killers. They cooperate as skillful male-group ___7___
    attackers.
    Then, about ten thousand years ago, when this immensely ___8___
    long formative period of hunting for food, they became farmers.
    Their improved intelligence, so vital to their old hunting life,
    were put to a new use—that of penning (把……關(guān)在圈中), ___9___
    controlling and domesticating their prey. The food was there on
    the farms, awaiting their needs. The risks and uncertainties of
    farming were no longer essential for survival. ___10___
    參考答案及解析:
    1. Viewing -> viewed
    本句的主語the modern footballer也就是view的邏輯主語,兩者之間為被動關(guān)系。
    2. inaccurate -> accurate
    根據(jù)上下文,顯然inaccurate使句意前后矛盾,若目標不正確,就不可能score a goal。故應該把inaccurate改為accurate。
    3. enjoys前加he
    這是由一個條件狀語從句引導的復合句。但主句只有謂語動詞enjoys,缺少主語,因此要步上主語。根據(jù)從句的his aim可推斷應該加上主語he。
    4. up -> / 或 back
    表示“看,了解一下”時,只能用look at。
    5. year -> years
    6. if -> /
    even if 表示“即使”,后接分句。本句的大意是說壓力讓人們發(fā)生了變化,一是生活方式,二是身體。此處只能用even“甚至”來引導their bodies,表示遞進。
    7. cooperate -> cooperated
    事情是our ancient ancestors在過去所從事的,所以要用一般過去時。
    8. when -> after
    this immensely long formative period of hunting for food是名詞短語,when 后面不能接名詞及其短語作時間狀語,故when使用不當,根據(jù)句子的意思應該改為after。
    9.were -> was
    本句的主語是 Their improved intelligence,intelligence表示“智力,智能”時是不可數(shù)名詞,謂語動詞要用單數(shù)。
    10. farming -> hunting
    根據(jù)上下文,這里說的是狩獵。