GRE作文是中國(guó)學(xué)生比較頭痛的，經(jīng)常準(zhǔn)備很多時(shí)間最后還是只得到3.5。我之所以得到6分，個(gè)人認(rèn)為我的文風(fēng)比較淳樸扎實(shí)，有科學(xué)性，寫(xiě)的思路比較廣(正、反、特)，字?jǐn)?shù)也比較多(I800+、A700+)。
Cooperation---orTragedy?
Thesolutiontotheworld’sgrowingenvironmentalproblemsmayhavetowaitawhile.Ithasbeensaidthat"environmentalproblemsareglobalandrespectnonation’sboundaries."Unfortunately,pollutionanditsconsequencesstillfalltolargemeasureonthoseleastlikelytodoanythingaboutit:poorcountrieswillingtosacrificeanythinginordertositatthetablewiththeworld’swealthy.
Asfarastheindustrializednationsoftheworldareconcerned,theworldisabigplace.Environmentaldestructiontakingplaceoutsidetheirbordersmaysometimesbefodderforgovernmentpronouncementsofconcern,butfewconcreteactions.DeforestationoftheAmazon,forinstance,isofvitalconcerntoallthosewhowishtocontinuebreathing.Buttheonlyeffectivedeterrenttothisactivity,therestrictionofinternationalaidmoneytothosecountriesshowingnetdeforestation,hasbeenstalledintheUnitedNationsbythoseunwillingto"interfere"intheinternalpoliticsofothernations.
Becauseofthedifferentialimpactofpollutingactivitiesaroundtheworld,andevenindifferentregionsofasinglecountry,manygovernmentswillundoubtedlycontinuetopromulgateonlymodestenvironmentalregulations.Coststopollutingcompanieswillcontinuetocarryasmuchweightasthebenefitofapollution-freeenvironment.ParticularlyinthecurrentpoliticalclimateoftheUnitedStates,thewell-documentedexpenseoftoday’spollution-controlmeasureswillbestackedagainsttheunknownlong-termeffectsofpollutingactitivities."WhyshouldIspendmillionsofdollarsayear,whichcausesmetohavetoraisethecostofmygoodsoreliminatejobs,ifnoonereallyknowsifairpollutionisallthatharmful?Showmetheproof,"anairpollutingcompanymaydemand.
Realistically,itwon’轉(zhuǎn)自:考試網(wǎng) - [liuxue86.com/gre]tbeuntilcriticalmassisachievedthatthehopedfor"choiceofunityandcooperation"willbeaviableone.Onlywhentheearthasawholeissopollutedthatlifeitselfbecomesincreasinglydifficultforamajorityoftheworld’speoplewilltherelikelybethepoliticalwilltoforceglobalenvironmentallawsongovernmentsworldwide.Buttheoptimists(read:environmentalactivists)amonguscontinuetobelievethattheworldcanbeshowntheerrorofitsways.Theycontinuetopointoutthattheskyisprobablyfalling--oratleastdevelopingabighole.Theworld,asawhole,ignoresthem.
Onewouldhope,however,thatgovernments,perhapsthroughastrengthenedU.N.,couldsomehowbeforcedtorealizethatwhentheEarthreachesthecriticalmassofpollution,itmaybetoolatetodoanythingaboutit.Thatwouldbea"commontragedy"indeed.
評(píng)價(jià)
Thisexcellentresponsedisplaysanin-depthanalysisoftheissueandsuperiorfacilitywithlanguage.
Whileacknowledgingthatenvironmentalproblemsareseriousandofglobaldimensions,theessayexploresthecomplexityofinternationalcooperation.Suchcooperation,theessayargues,runsintoavarietyofproblems,andthewriterofferspersuasiveexamplestosupportthatpoint:
--theunwillingnessofnationsto"interfere"withothernationsthrough
politicalmeasuressuchasrestrictionofforeignaid
--inadequateenvironmentalregulations,whicharecausedbothby"the
differentialimpactofpollutingactivities"betweencountriesand
regionsandbythedifficultyofcomparingthe"long-termeffectsof
pollutingactitivities"withthemoreeasilydocumented,short-term
costsofreducingpollution.
Theessaydistinguishesitselfinpartbyitsexcellentorganization.Thefirstparagraphanalyzestheclaimandannouncesthewriter’sposition;thesecondandthirdparagraphsprovideclearexamplessupportingthatposition.Theskillfuluseofaquotationfromabusinesspersonvividlyillustratestheeconomicimpactofpollutioncontrols.Thelasttwoparagraphsbringasenseofclosuretotheessaybycontinuingthethemeannouncedinthefirstparagraph--thatcooperationmustwaituntilmoredirecircumstancesproducethepoliticalwillnecessarytoreducepollution.
Theessayexhibitssuperiorcontrolofgrammarandsyntax,withonlyminorerrors.Transitionalphrases--"because,""however,""forinstance"--helpguidethereaderthroughtheargument.Also,effectivesentencevarietyandtheuseofprecisewordchoicehelpconfirmthescoreof6. 感謝您閱讀《歷年GRE考試Issue主題范文及評(píng)析13 》一文，出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。
Cooperation---orTragedy?
Thesolutiontotheworld’sgrowingenvironmentalproblemsmayhavetowaitawhile.Ithasbeensaidthat"environmentalproblemsareglobalandrespectnonation’sboundaries."Unfortunately,pollutionanditsconsequencesstillfalltolargemeasureonthoseleastlikelytodoanythingaboutit:poorcountrieswillingtosacrificeanythinginordertositatthetablewiththeworld’swealthy.
Asfarastheindustrializednationsoftheworldareconcerned,theworldisabigplace.Environmentaldestructiontakingplaceoutsidetheirbordersmaysometimesbefodderforgovernmentpronouncementsofconcern,butfewconcreteactions.DeforestationoftheAmazon,forinstance,isofvitalconcerntoallthosewhowishtocontinuebreathing.Buttheonlyeffectivedeterrenttothisactivity,therestrictionofinternationalaidmoneytothosecountriesshowingnetdeforestation,hasbeenstalledintheUnitedNationsbythoseunwillingto"interfere"intheinternalpoliticsofothernations.
Becauseofthedifferentialimpactofpollutingactivitiesaroundtheworld,andevenindifferentregionsofasinglecountry,manygovernmentswillundoubtedlycontinuetopromulgateonlymodestenvironmentalregulations.Coststopollutingcompanieswillcontinuetocarryasmuchweightasthebenefitofapollution-freeenvironment.ParticularlyinthecurrentpoliticalclimateoftheUnitedStates,thewell-documentedexpenseoftoday’spollution-controlmeasureswillbestackedagainsttheunknownlong-termeffectsofpollutingactitivities."WhyshouldIspendmillionsofdollarsayear,whichcausesmetohavetoraisethecostofmygoodsoreliminatejobs,ifnoonereallyknowsifairpollutionisallthatharmful?Showmetheproof,"anairpollutingcompanymaydemand.
Realistically,itwon’轉(zhuǎn)自:考試網(wǎng) - [liuxue86.com/gre]tbeuntilcriticalmassisachievedthatthehopedfor"choiceofunityandcooperation"willbeaviableone.Onlywhentheearthasawholeissopollutedthatlifeitselfbecomesincreasinglydifficultforamajorityoftheworld’speoplewilltherelikelybethepoliticalwilltoforceglobalenvironmentallawsongovernmentsworldwide.Buttheoptimists(read:environmentalactivists)amonguscontinuetobelievethattheworldcanbeshowntheerrorofitsways.Theycontinuetopointoutthattheskyisprobablyfalling--oratleastdevelopingabighole.Theworld,asawhole,ignoresthem.
Onewouldhope,however,thatgovernments,perhapsthroughastrengthenedU.N.,couldsomehowbeforcedtorealizethatwhentheEarthreachesthecriticalmassofpollution,itmaybetoolatetodoanythingaboutit.Thatwouldbea"commontragedy"indeed.
評(píng)價(jià)
Thisexcellentresponsedisplaysanin-depthanalysisoftheissueandsuperiorfacilitywithlanguage.
Whileacknowledgingthatenvironmentalproblemsareseriousandofglobaldimensions,theessayexploresthecomplexityofinternationalcooperation.Suchcooperation,theessayargues,runsintoavarietyofproblems,andthewriterofferspersuasiveexamplestosupportthatpoint:
--theunwillingnessofnationsto"interfere"withothernationsthrough
politicalmeasuressuchasrestrictionofforeignaid
--inadequateenvironmentalregulations,whicharecausedbothby"the
differentialimpactofpollutingactivities"betweencountriesand
regionsandbythedifficultyofcomparingthe"long-termeffectsof
pollutingactitivities"withthemoreeasilydocumented,short-term
costsofreducingpollution.
Theessaydistinguishesitselfinpartbyitsexcellentorganization.Thefirstparagraphanalyzestheclaimandannouncesthewriter’sposition;thesecondandthirdparagraphsprovideclearexamplessupportingthatposition.Theskillfuluseofaquotationfromabusinesspersonvividlyillustratestheeconomicimpactofpollutioncontrols.Thelasttwoparagraphsbringasenseofclosuretotheessaybycontinuingthethemeannouncedinthefirstparagraph--thatcooperationmustwaituntilmoredirecircumstancesproducethepoliticalwillnecessarytoreducepollution.
Theessayexhibitssuperiorcontrolofgrammarandsyntax,withonlyminorerrors.Transitionalphrases--"because,""however,""forinstance"--helpguidethereaderthroughtheargument.Also,effectivesentencevarietyandtheuseofprecisewordchoicehelpconfirmthescoreof6. 感謝您閱讀《歷年GRE考試Issue主題范文及評(píng)析13 》一文，出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。