gre寫作例子:GRE作文argument210詳解

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GRE,全稱Graduate Record Examination,中文名稱為美國研究生入學(xué)考試,適用于除法律與商業(yè)外的各專業(yè)。由美國教育考試服務(wù)處(Educational Testing Service,簡稱ETS)主辦,GRE是美國、加拿大的大學(xué)各類研究生院(除管理類學(xué)院,法學(xué)院)要求申請者所必須具備的一個考試成績,也是教授對申請者是否授予獎學(xué)金所依據(jù)的最重要的標準。 另有,Generic Routing Encapsulation(通用路由封裝)也簡稱GRE。
    【題目】210 The following is a letter to the editor of a news magazine.
    "Clearly, the successful use of robots on missions to explore outer space in the past 20 years demonstrates that robots could be increasingly used to perform factory work more effectively, efficiently, and profitably than human factory workers. The use of robots in factories would offer several advantages. First, robots never get sick, so absenteeism would be reduced. Second, robots do not make mistakes, so factories would increase their output. Finally, the use of robots would also improve the morale of factory workers, since factory work can be so boring that many workers would be glad to shift to more interesting kinds of tasks."
    【翻譯】顯然,過去20年中機器人在探索外層空間任務(wù)中的成功使用證明,機器人可以比人類工作人員更有效、更有益地用于進行很多工作。工廠中機器人的使用將帶來若干好處。首先,機器人從不生病,從而曠工將會減少。其次,機器人不會出錯,因此工廠產(chǎn)量將會增加。最后,使用機器人同樣也會提高工廠工人的精神狀態(tài),因為工廠工作有時如此枯燥以至于很多工人將會樂于轉(zhuǎn)換到更有趣的任務(wù)。
    【找關(guān)鍵詞,梳理邏輯層次】
    "Clearly, the successful use of robots on missions to explore outer space in the past 20 years demonstrates that robots could be increasingly used to perform factory work more effectively, efficiently, and profitably than human factory workers. The use of robots in factories would offer several advantages. First, robots never get sick, so absenteeism would be reduced. Second, robots do not make mistakes, so factories would increase their output. Finally, the use of robots would also improve the morale of factory workers, since factory work can be so boring that many workers would be glad to shift to more interesting kinds of tasks."
    【題目拆析】
    論點: Clearly, the successful use of robots on missions to explore outer space in the past 20 years demonstrates that robots could be increasingly used to perform factory work more effectively, efficiently, and profitably than human factory workers. The use of robots in factories would offer several advantages.
    論據(jù):
    1。First, robots never get sick, so absenteeism would be reduced. 首先,機器人從不生病,從而曠工將會減少。
    2。Second, robots do not make mistakes, so factories would increase their output. 其次,機器人不會出錯,因此工廠產(chǎn)量將會增加。
    3。Finally, the use of robots would also improve the morale of factory workers, since factory work can so boring that many workers would be glad to shift to more interesting kinds of tasks. 最后,使用機器人同樣也會提高工廠工人的精神狀態(tài),因為工廠工作有時如此枯燥以至于很多工人將會樂于轉(zhuǎn)換到更有趣的任務(wù)。
    【攻擊分析】
    論據(jù)1:雖然機器人不會生病,但是它也會產(chǎn)生機械故障,停止工作,阻礙生產(chǎn)。錯誤類比
    論據(jù)2:
    A.機器人也會出錯,因為它是有由直接或者間接控制的。EG.控制機器人的程序出現(xiàn)問題,“千年蟲”
    B.機器人出錯與否和產(chǎn)量增加沒有必然聯(lián)系。產(chǎn)量的提升是由諸多因素構(gòu)成的。
    論據(jù)3:機器人的大量使用必然代替了工人的勞動崗位,致使工人焦慮,大量的事業(yè)肯定不會讓工人們有很高的精神狀態(tài)。
    對于論據(jù)1。2。3。而言:只提機器人的優(yōu)點而對其缺點閉口不談 一面之詞
    結(jié)論: 機器人在外層空間里的成功并不能說明它能在實際的工廠生產(chǎn)中起到它相應(yīng)的作用。
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