名師解析issue寫作思路的備考建議

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 從ets對gre實施改革以來,如何備考新gre考試在各大論壇討論火熱,對于考生來說突如其來的改革有些棘手與茫然,該如何備考?相比舊g新gre考試對我們來說是有點陌生,俗話說:“一口吃不成個胖子”,下面參考一下名師解析issue寫作思路的備考建議:
    讓我們來詳細分析一道題目吧
    As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
    在這道題中很明顯有一個時間的關(guān)系在里面,也就是條件,遇到了前面提到的有時間,地點,原因,結(jié)果,目的,條件,讓步,比較和方式的邏輯分析情況時需要考生做拆分式分析。我們不難將這個題目拆成了兩部分進行分析。
    1. As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems我們
    首先會看到rely這個單詞,這個時候要分析我們是否真的越來越多的依賴科技來解決問題,是否有些領(lǐng)域的某些部分我們并不是依賴科技來解決問題呢。其次,rely是用機器輔助思考呢還是完全依賴科技思考呢。再次我們要關(guān)注問題problem這個單詞,解決的是什么問題對于我們的思維習(xí)慣影響也會非常大,如果解決的是科技帶來的問題呢?我們會繼續(xù)思考。如果解決的問題是休閑娛樂方面的,則有可能會讓我們,比如說沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲,從時間的角度上影響我們思考學(xué)習(xí)的精力,但是又會從另外一個角度上增強我們的游戲操作能力。
    2. the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 這里面最值得關(guān)注的一個單詞就是surly。作者將這個論點絕對化了,任何絕對化的論斷都是可以被一定程度上攻擊的。
    我們可以如下開頭:(事實陳述類)
    As is intensely described in the thought-provoking statement, not only does the author focus on the fact that people are relying more and more on technology to solve problems but also insinuates that the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate, which seems to be irrelevant at first glance but exceedingly associated on second thought. Admittedly, under the condition that we rely extremely on such technologies as calculators, our ability of calculation will deteriorate. However, with the proviso that human beings only take advantage of technology as a tool for assistance, the scenario will not likely take place.The author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. The purpose of my issue is to stress on the disagreement with the statement. To account for the above-mentioned phenomena, several aspects must be pushed forward to help us gain a deep insight into what has happened.
    我們再舉一個例子:Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.(聲明類)
    As is intensely described in the thought-provoking statement, not only does the author focus on the fact that scandals are useful but also insinuates that they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could, which seems to be irrelevant at first glance but exceedingly associated on second thought. Admittedly, under the condition that scandals reveal the darkness of our society, point out the corruption in our politics and, to some extent, concentrate our concerns on immortalities, they can surly let us pay the greatest attention on these subjects. However, with the proviso that the scandals prove unsound or forged ones, the scenario will not likely take place.The author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. The purpose of my issue is to stress on the disagreement with the statement. To account for the above-mentioned phenomena, several aspects must be pushed forward to help us gain a deep insight into what has happened.
    最后舉一個建議類的例子:A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
    As is intensely described in the thought-provoking statement, not only does the author focus on the fact that students should study the same national curriculum but also insinuates that it should be obligatory all over the nation, which seems to be irrelevant at first glance but exceedingly associated on second thought. Admittedly, under the condition that students are allowed to choose their favorite subjects, they will have a chance to develop their abilities according the interests and hobbies However, with the proviso that such fundamental subjects as math are not paid enough attention to, other related field of study will be severely affected. The author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. The purpose of my issue is to stress on the general agreement with the statement. To account for the above-mentioned phenomena, several aspects must be pushed forward to help us gain a deep insight into what has happened.
    我們可以如下開頭:(事實陳述類)
    由于激烈的是發(fā)人深省的發(fā)言中所述,不僅作者重點的事實,人們依靠技術(shù)越來越多的解決問題,但也影射必將惡化,人類有能力為自己著想,這似乎乍一看無關(guān),但極其相關(guān)的第二次思想。誠然,我們非常依靠這種技術(shù)作為計算器的條件下,我們的計算能力將惡化。然而,人類只能作為輔助工具的技術(shù)優(yōu)勢與規(guī)定,方案將可能不會采取不必要的place.The作者擴展了這個廣闊的斷言一個不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的極端,而忽略了一定的影響這個問題的緊迫因素。我的問題的目的是要強調(diào)與聲明中的分歧。為了對上述現(xiàn)象,幾個方面必須推進,以幫助我們獲得了深刻洞察到發(fā)生了什么事。
    我們再舉一個例子:丑聞有用,因為我們的注意力集中在問題的方式?jīng)]有喇叭或改革者(聲明類)
    由于強烈的描述發(fā)人深省的發(fā)言中,不僅作者的事實,丑聞是有用的,但也影射,我們關(guān)注的重點問題的方式?jīng)]有揚聲器或改革者,這似乎是不相關(guān)的在重點乍看之下,但極其相關(guān)的第二個想法。誠然,丑聞揭示了我們社會的黑暗的條件下,,指出我們的政治腐敗,在一定程度上,集中對immortalities我們的關(guān)注,他們能切切實實讓我們付出的這些科目的最大關(guān)注。然而,該方案規(guī)定的丑聞被證明是不健全的或偽造的,不會有可能采取不必要的place.The作者擴展了這個廣闊的斷言一個不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的極端,而忽略了一定的影響這個問題的緊迫因素。我的問題的目的是要強調(diào)與聲明中的分歧。為了對上述現(xiàn)象,幾個方面必須推進,以幫助我們獲得了深刻洞察到發(fā)生了什么事。
    最后舉一個建議類的例子:一個國家應(yīng)該要求所有學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)相同的國家課程,直到他們進入大學(xué)。
    由于是強烈的描述發(fā)人深省的發(fā)言中,不僅沒有的事實,學(xué)生應(yīng)學(xué)習(xí)相同的國家課程,但也影射,它應(yīng)該是強制性的全國各地,這似乎乍一看無關(guān),但作者的重點第二次思想極其相關(guān)的。誠然,條件下,允許學(xué)生選擇自己最喜歡的科目,他們將有機會發(fā)展自己的能力,根據(jù)興趣和愛好,但,與書中,數(shù)學(xué)等基礎(chǔ)科目沒有給予足夠的重視,其他相關(guān)領(lǐng)域研究將受到嚴重影響。作者不必要的延伸這一廣泛的說法是不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的極端,而忽略了一定的影響這個問題的緊迫因素。我的問題的目的是要強調(diào)與聲明一般協(xié)議。為了對上述現(xiàn)象,幾個方面必須推進,以幫助我們獲得了深刻洞察到發(fā)生了什么事。
    以上的例證不是為了讓考生死記硬背模板!重要的是讓考生們學(xué)會分析思路,形散而神不散,反之就違背了筆者本意,也容易被GRE的雷達探測器發(fā)現(xiàn)雷同,釀成慘劇。
    關(guān)于結(jié)尾部分,我們需要考生再次點題,告知閱卷人:我們的觀點是什么,整體的邏輯和例證有哪些即可。文章不要求文字多么華麗。
    和剛才說到開頭的部分一樣,不要機械的背誦所謂的模板,更重要的是知道答題每一個步驟的思路,創(chuàng)建形散而神不散的寫作模式。
    新gre考試寫作不僅需要考生在平時增強語言功底,還要請與思考分析,新gre考試寫作題目更加具體,是為了更好的反應(yīng)研究生院和商學(xué)院所需思維方式,所以考生要盡快適應(yīng)新gre考試。