GRE作文是中國學生比較頭痛的，經常準備很多時間最后還是只得到3.5。我之所以得到6分，個人認為我的文風比較淳樸扎實，有科學性，寫的思路比較廣(正、反、特)，字數(shù)也比較多(I800+、A700+)。
題目：
"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria， where fish consumption is very high， people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly， eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds represent the most frequently given reason for absences from school and work， we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid—a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil—as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
我們注意到一種新的可以保證顯著減少學校和工作崗位缺席的療法。一項研究顯示在附近的EM，魚的消費量很高，那的百姓每年因為感冒去看醫(yī)生的次數(shù)每年只有一兩次。這表明吃大量的魚很明顯可以預防感冒。另外，由于感冒是缺課和缺席的最常見原因，我們建議每天服用從魚油提煉出的營養(yǎng)物以來有效的預防感冒和減少缺席。
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題目：
"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria， where fish consumption is very high， people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly， eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds represent the most frequently given reason for absences from school and work， we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid—a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil—as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
我們注意到一種新的可以保證顯著減少學校和工作崗位缺席的療法。一項研究顯示在附近的EM，魚的消費量很高，那的百姓每年因為感冒去看醫(yī)生的次數(shù)每年只有一兩次。這表明吃大量的魚很明顯可以預防感冒。另外，由于感冒是缺課和缺席的最常見原因，我們建議每天服用從魚油提煉出的營養(yǎng)物以來有效的預防感冒和減少缺席。
感謝您閱讀《argument36 》一文，出國留學網(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。