作文考試的分?jǐn)?shù)，在托?？荚囍械恼急仁欠浅８叩?，所以大家需要認(rèn)真的進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)備，保證考試順利。跟著出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)的小編看看托福作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)介紹。
一、托福寫作的內(nèi)容
托福包括2個(gè)內(nèi)容：綜合寫作和獨(dú)立寫作
(1)綜合寫作
綜合寫作也就是我們常說的小作文，但是為什么名字是綜合寫作，當(dāng)然是有原因的了，我們都知道小作文要求是150字左右，但是托福小作文的精妙之處就在于它的綜合考察。首先，會(huì)給你一篇passage，文章內(nèi)容會(huì)就某件事來表達(dá)一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，之后你會(huì)聽到一個(gè)lecture，lecture表達(dá)的是與文章完全相反的觀點(diǎn)，聽完之后才到你來寫作的部分，所以綜合寫作部分之所以為綜合，是綜合了聽、讀、寫三者一起的作文。
(2)獨(dú)立寫作
看到獨(dú)立二字大家也可能猜到這部分寫作考察我們什么了吧，獨(dú)立考的是我們獨(dú)立的思考，對(duì)于獨(dú)立寫作的類型大部分都是disagree or agree 的類型，所以需要你同意或不同意一個(gè)statement，表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。而獨(dú)立寫作題目的妙處就在于無論你是同意還是不同意，你都有很大的空間去論述你的觀點(diǎn)，可見出題的深思熟慮。
二、托福寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
大家先來看看，官方的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
5分的文章能夠有效地完成任務(wù)，文章的組織清晰，有恰當(dāng)?shù)慕忉專e例和細(xì)節(jié);文章內(nèi)容連貫，統(tǒng)一;語言運(yùn)用熟練，詞匯豐富，用詞得當(dāng)，盡管可能出現(xiàn)稍許詞匯和語法錯(cuò)誤。
4分的文章能夠較好地完成任務(wù)，但是有些觀點(diǎn)闡述地不夠詳細(xì);總體上組織論證不錯(cuò)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)慕忉?，舉例和細(xì)節(jié);文章整體內(nèi)容連貫統(tǒng)一，但是可能含有冗余，離題和不清晰的連接;語言使用較熟練，有較為豐富的詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)，但是也可能有較為明顯的小錯(cuò)誤，但不影響總體理解。
3分的文章做了任務(wù)，用了一些解釋，舉例和細(xì)節(jié);能看出文章的連貫和統(tǒng)一，但分論點(diǎn)的銜接可能不清晰;語言運(yùn)用稍有欠缺，可能在遣詞造句上出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤造成語義晦澀;有準(zhǔn)確的語言和語法結(jié)構(gòu)，但是多樣性比較單一。
2分的文章只完成了部分任務(wù)，文章組織論證不夠充分;解釋，舉例或者細(xì)節(jié)不太得當(dāng)或者不充分;出現(xiàn)明顯的用詞不當(dāng);語法結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤較多。
1分的文章組織非?；靵y;基本沒有細(xì)節(jié)，或者出現(xiàn)不相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié);嚴(yán)重和頻繁的用詞和語法錯(cuò)誤。
0分的文章僅僅從題目中抄了一些文字，或者完全離題，用非英語語言來寫作或者空白卷
熟悉和理解4大評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是高分關(guān)鍵
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1：要求考生有效地闡明主題，考生千萬不要跑題。從考生的情況看，考生全部跑題現(xiàn)象較少，但是局部跑題現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重，這也是考生不能輕取高分的緣故。
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2：邏輯條理清楚，發(fā)展充分。
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)3： 考生的論據(jù)一定要具體、明確，且對(duì)論點(diǎn)有支持作用，而不能空洞和泛泛而談。
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)4：通過譴詞造句和習(xí)慣表達(dá)來展示語言的熟練程。
托福范文
Some people prefer to buy technological devices as soon as possible， while others prefer to wait for a second to buy them. In my opinion， I prefer to wait， because this will have advantages in product quality， reliability and price.
First of all， when a high-tech device comes out， we usually don’t know how its quality is， because the public is unfamiliar with it. Only after some people buy and use it， we could distinguish whether it is good or bad. If we buy products before then， we may purchase low quality products， which will lead to poor experience and waste of money. For example， a company＇s VR equipment， due to advertising， attracted many customers to rush for the first time； but after the actual use， it was found that the effect was very poor； and as a result， the equipment quickly became unpopular. If these customers chose to wait for the first time， they would find that the VR device was not so good， and turned to purchase better quality products which had been tested by the market.
Second， even if it is a very good technological device， some design problems may not be found， and we will get a defective item if we buy it as soon as it is available to the public. However， if we choose to wait for a moment， these problems may have been discovered and solved， and the reliability of the products will be guaranteed. For example， when iPhone4 has just come out， for design reasons， there were occasional failures of calling by no signals， and the users were complaining about it. The Apple Corp later amended the problem by improving its design. If we purchased iPhone as soon as it came out， we can only get a mobile phone with a problem； and when it came out for a while， the problem is repaired and we could have a very reliable iPhone.
And last， when technological products have just been launched， the price will usually be the highest. After a certain time， in order to promote， the price tend to reduce； devices could be much cheaper if we choose to wait. We may take iPhone4 as an example again. When it was just released， it sold for 649，andafterayear，thepricedroppedto649，andafterayear，thepricedroppedto499. If we purchased at this time， we can save a lot.
In conclusion， we could purchase higher quality， more reliable， and cheaper products if we choose to wait， so I prefer to wait for a while instead of buying these technological devices as soon as they are available to the public.