2016托福獨(dú)立寫作解題思路講解

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    題目來自于TPO29獨(dú)立寫作。
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
    To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries for university professors.
    Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
    拿到這一個(gè)題目,考生首先要做的就是分析一下題目中的利弊關(guān)系,如下:
    此題中含有should,屬應(yīng)不應(yīng)該題。若是同意該做法,可思考大學(xué)教師的好處,總結(jié)分論點(diǎn);若是不同意該做法,則思考大學(xué)中除教師以外的重要因素,總結(jié)分論點(diǎn)。
    一般向這樣的話題中,我們可以從兩個(gè)方向來進(jìn)行答題:
    Agree:
    1. 一個(gè)好教授,將成為學(xué)生在他們進(jìn)入未來的職業(yè)前的真正的引導(dǎo)者。
    2. 一個(gè)好教授,可以教學(xué)生畢業(yè)所需的專業(yè)知識(shí)。
    3. 一個(gè)好教授,可以推動(dòng)科技和知識(shí)領(lǐng)域的創(chuàng)新,增強(qiáng)國(guó)家綜合實(shí)力。
    4. 一個(gè)好教授,可以激發(fā)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)熱情,從而激發(fā)學(xué)生的想象力和創(chuàng)造力。
    Disagree:
    1. 大學(xué)應(yīng)該聘用更多的教職員工,且購買更多的設(shè)備來應(yīng)對(duì)在校園內(nèi)不斷增加的學(xué)生數(shù)量。
    2. 大學(xué)應(yīng)該舉行一些國(guó)際交流會(huì)議,給學(xué)生介紹一些有才華的、知識(shí)淵博且著名的教授。
    3. 大學(xué)應(yīng)該把資金用來給更多的學(xué)生們提供獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金,從而吸引到更多優(yōu)秀的人才。
    4. 大學(xué)應(yīng)該把資金用來組織更多的科研項(xiàng)目,為學(xué)校和社會(huì)帶來更多的利益,學(xué)生也能從實(shí)踐中學(xué)習(xí)到更多的知識(shí)。
    下面是TPO29獨(dú)立寫作滿分范文,大家可以一起來看看:
    With the rapid development of society, more and more elites are required for advanced science and technology. So how to improve the quality of higher education becomes an emergency problem for universities. Some people still maintain that universities should spend money on salaries for university professors. However, I think universities should prefer to take multiple methods to improve the quality of education rather than just spending money on professors. My view point is based on the following reasons and examples.
    Firstly, as a boast enrollment in universities nowadays, there are so many students attending college that will require more funding and resource. Universities should employ more faculties, purchase more facilities to cope with the increasing population in campus. Only that happens that every student will get equal chance to gain knowledge and share the colorful campus life. For instance, when I was a fresh student in my college, owing to so many students want to study in library that I need to get up early and rush the way to get a seat. Limited seats in the library influences students' study passion which leads to the decline of the quality of education in the end. So the most important thing to improve quality of education is to make the facilities prefect.
    What's more, universities should hold some international communicating meetings and introduce professors who are talented, knowledgeable and prestigious. For example, my university will invite some famous professor to give speech every semester. So students can have more opportunities to share the advanced achievements directly and communicate with the professors who are famous in their interested field. I think that will inspire students' creativity, intelligence and imagination which is needed in the college study, then they will contribute more to the university and the society.
    Admittedly, universities should also increase the salaries for professors. A college teacher is more responsible for the quality of education because college life maybe the last stage of students' study period before taking a job. However, improve the facilities and equipment, design attracting courses, introducing famous professors or provide more resources for students like holding international communicating meetings, all these strategies will improve the quality of education.
    All in all, universities should not only spend money on salaries for university professors. If universities have enough money, they should take a variety of ways to improve the quality of education, such as employing more faculties or holding some international communicating meetings.
    從這篇托福獨(dú)立寫作滿分范文中,小站教育編輯在這里整理了詞匯/詞組的使用以及語法等內(nèi)容方面,看看文章的亮點(diǎn)都有哪些。
    詞匯/詞組
    1. elite 精英
    2. science and technology 科學(xué)和技術(shù)
    3. higher education高等教育
    4. emergency problem緊急問題
    5. salary工資
    6. prefer to take multiple method偏向采取多種方法
    7. quality of education教育質(zhì)量
    8. boast 以有…而自豪
    9. require more fund and resource需要更多的資金和資源
    10. employ more faculties聘請(qǐng)更多的教職員工
    11. cope with 應(yīng)對(duì)…
    12. get equal chance得到平等的機(jī)會(huì)
    13. gain knowledge獲得知識(shí)
    14. colorful campus life豐富多彩的校園生活
    15. fresh student大一新生
    16. owe to 歸功于…
    17. rush沖、闖
    18.study passion學(xué)習(xí)熱情
    19.decline下降
    20.make the facilities prefect使設(shè)施完善
    21.international communicating meeting國(guó)際交流會(huì)議
    22.talented有才華的
    23.knowledgeable知識(shí)淵博的
    24.prestigious著名的
    25.advanced achievement先進(jìn)的成就
    26.inspire students' creativity激發(fā)學(xué)生的創(chuàng)造力
    27. intelligence and imagination智慧和想象力
    28. contribute to做出貢獻(xiàn)
    29. be responsible for對(duì)…負(fù)責(zé)
    30. the last stage最后階段
    31. design attracting course設(shè)計(jì)吸引人的課程
    32. strategy 策略
    語法講解:
    1.My view point is based on the following reasons and examples.
    翻譯:我的觀點(diǎn)基于如下理由和例子。
    語法:簡(jiǎn)單句。is based on ,基于,被動(dòng)語態(tài)。
    2.Universities should employ more faculties.
    翻譯:大學(xué)應(yīng)該雇傭更多的教職員工。
    語法:簡(jiǎn)單句。Universities ,主語。should employ ,謂語動(dòng)詞。
    3.I need to get up early .
    翻譯:我需要很早起床。
    語法:簡(jiǎn)單句。I ,主語。need ,謂語動(dòng)詞,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。to get up early,動(dòng)詞不定式做賓語。
    4.All these strategies will improve the quality of education.
    翻譯:所有的這些策略都將提升教學(xué)質(zhì)量。
    語法:簡(jiǎn)單句。All these strategies ,主語。will improve ,謂語動(dòng)詞,一般將來時(shí)。the quality of education,賓語。
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