英國留學個人陳述的寫作小技巧

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    去英國留學是需要具備一定的條件的,其中包括申請材料,個人陳述是留學申請材料中很很重要的一部分,出國留學網(wǎng)的小編為大家分享了個人陳述的寫作技巧,來看看吧!
    一、寫作技巧
    1.選擇專業(yè)的理由
    你為什么選擇這個專業(yè)?談?wù)勀銓@個專業(yè)的興趣是如何發(fā)展起來的,你之前做過什么努力,根據(jù)你目前的學習情況,你從這個專業(yè)得到了什么啟發(fā),或者只是告訴我你對這個專業(yè)的癡迷。英國留學申請,到英國留學大家要認真學習。
    英語招生老師說:“要盡可能具體。”
    2.適應(yīng)專業(yè)
    請給出一個你是如何達到要求的例子——不僅僅是你的專業(yè)的入學要求,還有你在那個專業(yè)上所做的研究。找出你在大學里可以從這個專業(yè)學到什么,以及你為這個專業(yè)做了哪些準備。
    體育專業(yè)的招生導師應(yīng)該說:“一定要開門見山,談?wù)勀愕难芯?,知道你為什么選擇這個專業(yè)。”
    3.學習以外的事情
    如果可能的話,在課程大綱之外,再列出你的主要相關(guān)興趣。
    例如,對你讀到的專業(yè)給出你的觀點??梢允菚?、報紙、互聯(lián)網(wǎng)、科學期刊、電影、紀錄片、博客、廣播、播客、講座等。盡量避免陳詞濫調(diào)。
    4、所謂專業(yè)相關(guān)
    談?wù)勀銖倪@次經(jīng)歷中學到了什么,或者它是如何幫助你培養(yǎng)職業(yè)興趣的。可以是工作經(jīng)驗、志愿服務(wù)、參加大學拓展活動、夏令營、參觀博物館、畫廊、劇院、法庭、考古發(fā)掘、旅行、競賽或數(shù)學挑戰(zhàn)。
    這位考古招生導師不得不說:“看起來不錯的經(jīng)歷在實踐中不如在實踐中有用?!?BR>    5.未來的就業(yè)方向
    如果你被這個專業(yè)錄取,并且這個專業(yè)有一個明確的職業(yè)方向,你應(yīng)該仔細考慮你可以從這個專業(yè)獲得的經(jīng)驗,以及它是否與你選擇的職業(yè)方向相關(guān)。
    想想你以前的經(jīng)歷。你學到了什么技能?如何增加對就業(yè)概念的了解,是否喜歡這個行業(yè)?
    職業(yè)治療招生指導員必須說:“反思你的經(jīng)驗,談?wù)勀阍诠ぷ髦行枰@得的技能。你如何發(fā)展這些技能?”
    二、寫作內(nèi)容
    1.開頭應(yīng)該要表現(xiàn)出對于所申請專業(yè)的喜愛,最好有一個什么生動的列子,由于那個原因所以你就喜歡上了這個專業(yè),比如說看著身邊的某一個親人由于疾病離去,可是你卻無能為力,所以想要學習醫(yī)學,去治療好某一種疾病。當然正式寫的時候不一定要這么大,平常的一些小事一樣可以,不過一定要保證是真實的,不是編造的。
    2.中間可以說一下為了學習這個專業(yè)所做的努力,如果是申請大學,就可以表明在高中時就學習過一些相關(guān)的課程,有著一定的基礎(chǔ),如果是申請研究生就更容易了,只要提供你在大學的論文,參加過什么相關(guān)課題等等。
    3.沒有也不要緊,如果沒有參加過課程,也可以是自己看過與之相關(guān)的課外書,自己已經(jīng)預(yù)先了解過這個專業(yè)。
    4.還有很重要的一點就是要展現(xiàn)自己的價值,讓他覺得不招你就是一種損失,這一點也可以通過你對未來的清晰規(guī)劃來表現(xiàn),在PS上面對于未來的規(guī)劃一定要具體,要有具體的目標,過程也要有一個大概。一定要把你自己和其他的申請者區(qū)分開,就算不能夠表現(xiàn)的比其他的申請者更強,也一定要有特色。
    5.寫PS時有一個大忌就算列清單式的寫法,只是在那里列舉得過的獎項,什么優(yōu)勢等等,這樣的PS是不入流的,就算真的優(yōu)秀都沒有用。
    三、寫作范文
    Personal Statement
    This is applicant -- from China. As an aspiring dreamer, I have been enthusiastically fond of accounting and finance and aspired to make a difference in this domain. However, I clearly know that there is a long way to go from an aspiring dreamer to a talent in the field of accounting and finance. In striving for my goal, I pursue constant progress and self-transcending to become a best me. After entering Wuhan Institute of Technology in 2010, I chose Accounting as my major without hesitation. Now, to perfect my knowledge system and sharpen my vision, I am sincerely applying for the postgraduate programme in your esteemed university.
    Through the extensive study at university, I not only enriched my professional knowledge but also enhanced my independent thinking, logical thinking as well as computing skills. Also, the undergraduate study enabled me to get a general understanding of accounting. my interest in finance and management was strengthened. With strong enthusiasm, I made full use of time to watch economic reports and read financial books. Driven by my self-motivation, I learned the specialized courses assiduously and achieved satisfying performance. To be more competent, I obtained the Accountant Qualification Certificate. I am convinced that the knowledge storage will serve as a strong support for my further study.
    I regard your esteemed university as my dream place to pursue a higher degree. With favorable learning environment, eminent faculty, abundant resources and sound facilities, your distinguished university attracts me a lot.
    After my completion of the postgraduate study, I intend to find a job relevant to accounting and finance in a large scale enterprise. Then, I will endeavor to be a distinguished accountant who can make a difference. I know that the postgraduate study demands hard work and commitment; it is a real investment of time and money, but I’m getting fully prepared to embark on the learning journey. I am not afraid of challenges. And I always regard myself as a fighter with an unconquerable will to upgrade and develop myself.