申請美國留學的學生,必需準備文書申請材料,其中有一項就是個人陳述。那么個人陳述的書寫基本內(nèi)容都包括哪些方面,下面出國留學網(wǎng)小編給大家簡單介紹一下。
首先來看看書寫內(nèi)容。
教育背景:你的大學專業(yè)是什么?你為何選擇這個專業(yè)?通過多年來的專業(yè)學習,你學到了什么?與你選擇的專業(yè)有什么關系?
工作經(jīng)歷:你曾經(jīng)擔任過什么樣的職務?這幾年來的工作中有什么業(yè)績、學到了什么?
社會活動組織能力:在大學期間曾經(jīng)參與或組織過什么活動?曾擔任什么樣的職務,從中又學到了什么?
最滿意的一次經(jīng)歷:最滿意的一項工作或科研學習經(jīng)歷是什么?是怎樣做好它的?
最突出的才能:你認為自己最突出的方面是什么?如領導能力、組織能力、交流溝通能力或是協(xié)調能力。
學習計劃和目的:學習期間的學習計劃是什么?與你的職業(yè)追求、職業(yè)目標又有什么關聯(lián)?
獎勵:你曾經(jīng)受過何種獎勵?你是否擔任過助教?你是否有優(yōu)秀的論文曾經(jīng)得到發(fā)表或受到獎勵?
特長愛好:你的特長與愛好是什么?
接著來看看書寫技巧。
開始要趁早
一般要給自己4-6周的時間來寫這個人陳述。不是因為你在兩天之內(nèi)寫不完,而是為了避免時間太短促,個人壓力很大,因而影響發(fā)揮,而且我們需要時間得到反饋。如果你是一個拖延癥患者,給自己的寫作設置一個期限,基本上就一周左右吧(這樣距離申請還有三周的時間),必要的時候才能有時間檢查和修改。
留意你的字數(shù),可以幫助你更好的突出自己的優(yōu)點
有不少同學,洋洋灑灑的寫了好幾千字,事實上,沒有老師愿意閱讀這么多字的。當你留意你的字數(shù)統(tǒng)計列表時,你會有意識的將一些不重要的內(nèi)容刪除掉,留下更重要的內(nèi)容,幫助你突出自己的優(yōu)點。
充足的時間,才能寫好PS
如果你下周就是截止期了,那么你要準備郵寄雅思托福成績單,從教務處開本科成績單,從學院里開出各類證明材料,你很可能沒法專心寫作的。
因此,至少準備幾個星期,來慢慢寫作你的個人陳述。由于你是初次寫作,會走很多彎路,浪費掉一些時間,所以早點動手,是個不錯的選擇。
注意使用一些高級詞匯,但是別走太遠了
比如,用accomplish代替do, 這樣會顯得你的語言水平更高一些。但是,不要使用GRE的長難句來寫作。
不要請母語為英語的人寫作
PS是需要你個人提交的材料。而你作為一個,英語非母語的人,寫的東西有瑕疵是非常正常的。找母語人士寫,小心過猶不及了。
自我反思時間
簡單寫一寫為什么是你的理由:你有一些什么樣能拿得上臺面的個人興趣、天賦和能力,讓你在眾多申請者中脫穎而出。
了解學校
找出你申請的學校什么方面最有名,最驕傲的部分是什么,證明為什么這個學校適合你與你的興趣發(fā)展。運用這些知識儲備向招生負責人展示你有多了解學校,這些成績對你而言究竟代表了什么意義。舉個例子,你感興趣的學校剛好有一個很大型的本科研究項目,告訴他們你很愿意成為那個項目的一份子(前提是那個項目對你的專業(yè)學習有幫助)。如果學校里有一位你特別喜歡的老師,你想要跟他/她一起學習,一起合作,那么就在你的陳述中寫出來。
最后帶來一篇參考范文。
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE
’For Knowledge Itself Is Power’. This is one of my favorite precepts and at this point in my life when I am about to complete my graduation and my future spreads in front of me like a dream, this adage has never influenced my life more than this before.
Knowledge and proper training are essential to succeed in today's highly competitive world. The best place where I can achieve this is in the United States of America - the undisputed leader in developing new products and processes. Not only is America the birthplace of my chosen field of study, it has also nurtured it for it's full growth and continuous development. To achieve my goals, I want to pursue a Master's program in Computer Science. It is the ideal way for me to gain the knowledge and skills to stand tall as a computer professional.
During my undergraduate studies, I acquired a comprehensive knowledge of computer hardware in all its complexity. I also learnt of diverse software and their applications. The highly dedicated teaching staff of my college taught me the various concepts involved in the field of computer engineering. Some of the subjects I studied were computer graphics, computer methodology and algorithms, logic circuits, principles of communication engineering, C programming, object oriented programming as well as programming using different tools.
I take a keen interest in Networking and Database Management Systems. As a part of my final year curriculum, I am working on a project with one of the India's finest web-site designing companies - MicroGiga Info. Sys. Ltd. The aim of the project is to create a web-site. The web-site, called "Jobs4All", aims to provide the user with a job depending upon his qualifications. Various database concepts', programming scripts and the maintenance of a server are some of the features included in our web-site. Some of the products and tools used are ASP scripts, Java scripts, Microsoft Access '97, Personal Web Server, etc. I am also interested in System Programming. For this very reason, I have selected Compiler Construction as the elective subject for my final year.
There is truly no end to learning, as this has become a world where a constant addition to abilities is the key to growth in a dynamic world. I am fortunate to belong to a family that places a high value of education. I have been given all the encouragement and facility to develop my talents and interests. I have completed several courses in public speaking and leadership training. Sports, music and reading also fill my life. I was also one of the organizer's for the Open Software competition in TECHNOMANIA '98, which is an inter-college festival annually, organized annually by my college. I am also an active participant in various events held in other institutes.
I seek to fulfill my goals in an environment that encourages creativity and motivation. I feel confident that the staff and facilities in your institute will provide me with such an environment. I am well aware of the demands of studying in the more competitive American environment. I am certain that I am mentally and physically competent to succeed at your school. I am basically a hard working and a sincere person. My enthusiasm and urge to excel will help me to make the best use of every learning opportunity.
In conclusion I would like to say that the knowledge gained from 4 years of engineering has provided me with a solid foundation. This will certainly help me in my desire to specialize in my chosen field. My country India has a thriving software industry. I aim to study abroad and return with the skill and competence to find my mark and be a vital part of this booming, futuristic industry. I assure you of my sincerity, dedication and hard work.