美國留學(xué)申請中，套磁非常重要，連續(xù)不斷地暢通的套磁會為你的美國留學(xué)申請加分，而一封糟糕的套磁信，可能會讓美國大學(xué)教授對你的印象減分。下面是一封糟糕的套磁信，教授直接把這封信給刪除了，當(dāng)我看到這篇文章的時候決定跟大家分享一下，因為我覺得這是一篇很真實也很有經(jīng)驗性教育的文章，在我們申請美國留學(xué)申請過程中，會在思維上幫到我們很多。
作者: Sanjoy Das, Assistant Professor, Kansas StateUniversity
Ph.D. 1994, Louisiana State University.
Evolutionary algorithms, neural networks,artificial intelligence, discrete optimization.
International applicants seeking assistantship/admission: please do not send me emails blindly without reading this
Every day I receive emails from international candidates for information,for advice, and especially requesting financial assistance. Unfortunately, I delete most of them without even reading them carefully. I get so many mirrelevant emails that cannot reply to each. Extremely rarely has one caught my attention. Please do not send me emails without reading this first. I am only interested in corresponding to candidates who are exceptional, and have a strong interest and experience in my immediate area of specialization, and I highly prefer ones with a Master's degree.
糟糕的套磁信Unwanted email
Respected sir,
I am very interested in going to the US for higher studies. I am seeking admission and financial assistance in your esteemed University.
I am very interested in artificial intelligence and computer architecture. I have programming experience in C++, C and java. I am also familiar with several software packages in the Windows environment (MS Word, Excel V+ CSpreadsheet etc.). I also have networking certification from NOVELL. My GRE score is 2050, and I got 99 percentile in the TOEFL exam.
I request you to spare a few moments from your precious time to go through my attached resume.Sir - if you are kind enough to offer me assistantship, I promise to work very hard for you. I have a very good academic record since primary school. Alternately, can you tell me what are my chances of getting assistantship from your department?
Can you kindly inform me about the last dates for Summer term 2002 before which I can apply?
Thank you for your valuable time,
Yours obediently
美國教授對這封糟糕套磁信的評價：
My comments: I simply delete these emails, which I consider garbage . The person seems to be too obsequious and flattering. In the emails that I do read (occasionally), I do a first scan for keywords like "precious", "respected" etc. deleting the email if I find one. Obviously the person is not professional enough. The person is interested in artificial intelligence and computer architecture - these are quite unrelated areas, making me think that he is trying to cover as many professors as possible to get aid from any possible source. Besides, he does not have anything in support of his claim (about his interest in artificial intelligence). He emphasizes on his software skills, making me think that his goal is to get a programming job in the US and higher studies is only to allow him access to the US job market. His GRE scores are OK, but not exceptional. He asks me to tell him what his chances of getting an assistantship are, elsewhere in the department. I have absolutely no way of finding that out, and even if I knew, I would not bother to reply back. He also asks me to give him information about summer deadlines. How am I supposed to know that?
I would typically expect that this information should be available fromthe University web site, or from the grad school, but my guess is as good
Finally, this letter is too generic . He probably uses exactly thesame format for hundreds of email letters to various professors throughout the country, leaving no stone uncovered. I receive hundreds of email like this. Regretfully, I cannot answer veryone, and these applications do not interest me at all.
通過這封糟糕的套磁信可以看出，美國大學(xué)教授對它的態(tài)度，以及它對美國留學(xué)申請的影響，因此，在撰寫套磁信時，你需要做的是好好研究套磁技巧，多多參考優(yōu)秀的套磁信范文，撰寫出不讓教授反感，而讓其眼前一亮的套磁信。