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Summer vacation is coming. Suppose you are Xu Hui. Your friend Mike e-mailed you and asked you about your vacation plan. Write an e-mail to him and tell him about your plan and explain the reasons briefly(簡(jiǎn)單地). Your e-mail should include the following points:
1.徙步旅行;
2.閱讀書(shū)籍。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)60—80左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已寫(xiě)好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));
2.圍繞所給要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫。
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.______________
_________________________________________
Best Wishes.
Yours truly,
Xu Hui
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. And I am happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. My first plan is going hiking for about one week. The reason why I choose this activity is that I love this sport and it can give me a new impression of different places and different people. When I come back from my hiking, I will read some good books of great writers. Books are source of knowledge. And I have to grasp this chance to read more and get more. If you have any good suggestions, please tell me in your next e-mail.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Xu Hui
權(quán)威解讀
這篇文章語(yǔ)法嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，文風(fēng)平和，邏輯思維強(qiáng)。作者運(yùn)用充分的說(shuō)明，逐步展現(xiàn)兩方面
的原因，上下文銜接自然，過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，言之成理，水到渠成。其中The reason why Ichoose this activity is that I love this sport and it can give me a new impression of different places and different people. 之中包含了同位語(yǔ)從句和表語(yǔ)從句，是此文中最能體現(xiàn)作者語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用技巧的句子，給文章增色不少。
好詞佳句
1.share sth. with sb. 某人分享某事
2.go hiking 徒步旅行
3.grasp this chance 抓住這次機(jī)會(huì)
4.And I am happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. 能很高興和你分享我的暑假計(jì)劃。
點(diǎn)撥：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，表明要與Mike分享計(jì)劃，為下文陳述做了很好的鋪墊，表明了小作者較強(qiáng)的邏輯思維。
5.when I come back from my hiking, I will read some good books of great writers. 徒步旅行回來(lái)后，我將會(huì)讀一些大作家的著作。
點(diǎn)撥：時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句將整篇文章銜接地非常好，更加體現(xiàn)了小作者清晰的邏輯思維。
參考樣文
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.
It's a pleasure to share my summer vacation plan with you. First, I'm going hiking in the mountains because I'd like to get close to nature and take exercise as well. Then I plan to read a few books. I love reading but I don't have much time when I'm at school. I think my vacation is going to be a colorful one.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Xu Hui
Summer vacation is coming. Suppose you are Xu Hui. Your friend Mike e-mailed you and asked you about your vacation plan. Write an e-mail to him and tell him about your plan and explain the reasons briefly(簡(jiǎn)單地). Your e-mail should include the following points:
1.徙步旅行;
2.閱讀書(shū)籍。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)60—80左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已寫(xiě)好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));
2.圍繞所給要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫。
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.______________
_________________________________________
Best Wishes.
Yours truly,
Xu Hui
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. And I am happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. My first plan is going hiking for about one week. The reason why I choose this activity is that I love this sport and it can give me a new impression of different places and different people. When I come back from my hiking, I will read some good books of great writers. Books are source of knowledge. And I have to grasp this chance to read more and get more. If you have any good suggestions, please tell me in your next e-mail.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Xu Hui
權(quán)威解讀
這篇文章語(yǔ)法嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，文風(fēng)平和，邏輯思維強(qiáng)。作者運(yùn)用充分的說(shuō)明，逐步展現(xiàn)兩方面
的原因，上下文銜接自然，過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，言之成理，水到渠成。其中The reason why Ichoose this activity is that I love this sport and it can give me a new impression of different places and different people. 之中包含了同位語(yǔ)從句和表語(yǔ)從句，是此文中最能體現(xiàn)作者語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用技巧的句子，給文章增色不少。
好詞佳句
1.share sth. with sb. 某人分享某事
2.go hiking 徒步旅行
3.grasp this chance 抓住這次機(jī)會(huì)
4.And I am happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. 能很高興和你分享我的暑假計(jì)劃。
點(diǎn)撥：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，表明要與Mike分享計(jì)劃，為下文陳述做了很好的鋪墊，表明了小作者較強(qiáng)的邏輯思維。
5.when I come back from my hiking, I will read some good books of great writers. 徒步旅行回來(lái)后，我將會(huì)讀一些大作家的著作。
點(diǎn)撥：時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句將整篇文章銜接地非常好，更加體現(xiàn)了小作者清晰的邏輯思維。
參考樣文
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.
It's a pleasure to share my summer vacation plan with you. First, I'm going hiking in the mountains because I'd like to get close to nature and take exercise as well. Then I plan to read a few books. I love reading but I don't have much time when I'm at school. I think my vacation is going to be a colorful one.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Xu Hui