作文是英語學(xué)習(xí)的重要內(nèi)容之一，也是學(xué)生綜合能力的體現(xiàn)。它與學(xué)生的詞匯量、語法、句法能力和邏輯思維能力等有密不可分的關(guān)系，在考試中比重也不小。而許多學(xué)生在此方面丟分甚多，以致影響后總分，因此培養(yǎng)學(xué)生寫作能力是非常有意義的。以下是整理的相關(guān)資料，希望對您有所幫助！
【篇一】
My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評】
這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開門見山，直接點(diǎn)題，首先介紹了英語老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點(diǎn)以及師生情感等。
【篇二】
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進(jìn)行介紹。整篇文章用詞準(zhǔn)確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。另外，文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了。
【篇三】
In the park
It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評】
寫法：這篇習(xí)作是用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時描繪出公園里的人和動物們正在進(jìn)行的活動還運(yùn)用了一般現(xiàn)在時敘述了公園美麗的景色。
時態(tài)：這篇文章可以采用一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時兩種時態(tài)，由于本單元的語法項(xiàng)目是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時，因此，描述的重點(diǎn)要放在現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時態(tài)上。
句型：一般現(xiàn)在時：主語+謂語+其他
現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時：
(1)What +be (am,is ,are)+主語+v.-ing+其他?
(2)主語+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。
【篇一】
My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評】
這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開門見山，直接點(diǎn)題，首先介紹了英語老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點(diǎn)以及師生情感等。
【篇二】
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進(jìn)行介紹。整篇文章用詞準(zhǔn)確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。另外，文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了。
【篇三】
In the park
It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評】
寫法：這篇習(xí)作是用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時描繪出公園里的人和動物們正在進(jìn)行的活動還運(yùn)用了一般現(xiàn)在時敘述了公園美麗的景色。
時態(tài)：這篇文章可以采用一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時兩種時態(tài)，由于本單元的語法項(xiàng)目是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時，因此，描述的重點(diǎn)要放在現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時態(tài)上。
句型：一般現(xiàn)在時：主語+謂語+其他
現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時：
(1)What +be (am,is ,are)+主語+v.-ing+其他?
(2)主語+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。