2020考研英語小作文感謝信范文賞析二

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不積跬步,無以至千里;不積小流,無以成江海。對于考試而言,每天進步一點點,基礎(chǔ)扎實一點點,通過考試就會更容易一點點。為您提供2020考研英語小作文感謝信范文賞析,鞏固所學(xué)知識并靈活運用,考試時會更得心應(yīng)手,快來看看吧!
    
    考研英語待批改作文:
    Dear Eleven
    I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my Olympic Game in Maths. I fear that I would have been give it up early.
    Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    考研英語作文批改點評如下:
    Dear Eleven,
    I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my (加上study of)Olympic Game in Maths(奧數(shù)是Mathematic Olympiad ). I fear that I would have been give(改為giving) it up early.
    Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
    8分
    同學(xué)你好,這篇小作文整體來講寫的不錯。建議你如果遇到某些不確定但又不是非常重要的專有名詞,可以改為其他有把握的詞,例如本篇作文中提到的奧數(shù),完全可以改為其他的比賽。