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“一審”即審題:抓住要點(diǎn),注意文體是什么,準(zhǔn)備寫(xiě)作的人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài):如果是日記和故事,宜采用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài);如是簡(jiǎn)介之類(lèi)的,宜采用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
“二寫(xiě)”即列綱:考慮所要選用的單詞、詞組、句型,要能根據(jù)自己的英語(yǔ)水平,盡量揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短,避難就易。綜合考慮所涉及到的情景、場(chǎng)合,語(yǔ)言要地道。
“三連”即連句成文:按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實(shí)際需要,重新排列組合已寫(xiě)成的句子,劃分必要的段落。要注意句式的靈活運(yùn)用,長(zhǎng)、短句,簡(jiǎn)單句,復(fù)合句要搭配運(yùn)用。
“四改”即修改潤(rùn)色全文:主要是看全文符不符合題目要求,行文是否流暢,有沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn);語(yǔ)法是不是正確,包括單詞的拼寫(xiě)、大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂一致、冠詞等。
文章分3段:
(1)綜述:概括性強(qiáng),最多2句話(huà)引入主題;
(2)正文:主要內(nèi)容層次性強(qiáng),一定要有過(guò)渡型連接詞。最多展開(kāi)3個(gè)方面,每個(gè)方面最多2句話(huà);
(3)結(jié)尾:緊扣主題,2句話(huà)內(nèi)結(jié)束,盡量升華。
1. “開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”式開(kāi)頭
一般來(lái)說(shuō),文章的開(kāi)頭應(yīng)盡量做到“開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”,即要用簡(jiǎn)單明了的語(yǔ)言引出文章的話(huà)題,使人一開(kāi)始就能了解文章要說(shuō)明的內(nèi)容。
① 對(duì)于敘事類(lèi)的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭把人物、時(shí)間、事件和環(huán)境交代清楚。
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:
Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 對(duì)于論述性的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭處先闡明自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn),接著展開(kāi)進(jìn)一步的論述。
如“The Time and the Money (時(shí)間和金錢(qián))” 的開(kāi)頭可以是:
Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2. 回憶性開(kāi)頭
在描述事件或游記類(lèi)的文章中,采用回憶性的開(kāi)頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。這種類(lèi)型的開(kāi)頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞匯,如never forget(永遠(yuǎn)無(wú)法忘記)、 remember (記得)、unforgettable(難以忘懷的)、 exciting(令人激動(dòng)的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad (難過(guò)的)……
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭還以這樣寫(xiě):
I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan.
或 It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑問(wèn)性開(kāi)頭
在敘事類(lèi)或論述性的文章中,都可采用疑問(wèn)型開(kāi)頭,這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。
如“Planting Trees(種樹(shù))”的開(kāi)頭可以是:
Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……
再如“Traveling Abroad(出國(guó)之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:
If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?
4. 倒敘式開(kāi)頭
在有的文章,特別是敘事類(lèi)的文章中,可以采用倒敘的寫(xiě)作手法,先寫(xiě)出事件的結(jié)果,再陳述過(guò)程。
如“Catching Thieves (捉賊)”的開(kāi)頭可以這樣寫(xiě):
I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.
1.自然結(jié)尾,點(diǎn)明主題
隨著文章的結(jié)束,文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。
如“Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)”的結(jié)尾可以是:
The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.
再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)” 的結(jié)尾可以是:
When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2. 首尾呼應(yīng),升華主題
在文章的結(jié)尾可以用含義較深的話(huà)點(diǎn)明主題,深化主題,起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的效果。
如“I Love My Hometown(我愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng))”的結(jié)尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.
3. 反問(wèn)結(jié)尾,引起深思
這種方式的結(jié)尾雖然形式是問(wèn)句,但意義卻是肯定的,而且具有一定的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用,可引起他人的深思。
如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (學(xué)英語(yǔ)能為我們帶來(lái)許多樂(lè)趣)” 的結(jié)尾可以是:
If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?
4. 表達(dá)祝愿,闡述愿望
這種方式的結(jié)尾常出現(xiàn)在書(shū)信或演講稿的文體中,表示對(duì)他人的祝?;?qū)?lái)的展望等。
如“A Letter to the Farmers(給農(nóng)民們的一封信)”的結(jié)尾可以是:
I hope the farmers' life will be better and better.
另外,書(shū)信的結(jié)尾常有以下形式的祝福語(yǔ):Best wishes; I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。
狀語(yǔ)從句舉例:
If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
常用狀語(yǔ)從句句型
(1)時(shí)間:when, not…until, as soon as
(2)目的:so that+從句; to do(為了)
(3)結(jié)果:so…that+從句, too…to do(太……以至于……)
(4)條件:if, unless(除非), as long as(只要)
(5)讓步:though,although,even though,even if,no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
(6)比較:as…as…, not so…as…, than
重點(diǎn)句型
(1) It is said that + 句子 據(jù)說(shuō)… It is reported that + 句子 據(jù)報(bào)道…
(2) There is no need to do 沒(méi)必要做…
(3) It’s adj for sb to do 做…對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)…
(4) so /such… that … 如此… 以至于… too … to do 太… 而不能…
(5) not…until… 直到…才… 例: I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back。
(6) The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…
(7) The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生氣的原因是她對(duì)他說(shuō)了謊。)
(8) That is why + 句子 那是…的原因
(9) That is because + 句子 那是因?yàn)椤?BR> (10) as we all know, +句子 據(jù)我們所知
(11) It is generally/ publicly known / considered that…, 眾所周知
“一審”即審題:抓住要點(diǎn),注意文體是什么,準(zhǔn)備寫(xiě)作的人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài):如果是日記和故事,宜采用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài);如是簡(jiǎn)介之類(lèi)的,宜采用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
“二寫(xiě)”即列綱:考慮所要選用的單詞、詞組、句型,要能根據(jù)自己的英語(yǔ)水平,盡量揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短,避難就易。綜合考慮所涉及到的情景、場(chǎng)合,語(yǔ)言要地道。
“三連”即連句成文:按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實(shí)際需要,重新排列組合已寫(xiě)成的句子,劃分必要的段落。要注意句式的靈活運(yùn)用,長(zhǎng)、短句,簡(jiǎn)單句,復(fù)合句要搭配運(yùn)用。
“四改”即修改潤(rùn)色全文:主要是看全文符不符合題目要求,行文是否流暢,有沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn);語(yǔ)法是不是正確,包括單詞的拼寫(xiě)、大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂一致、冠詞等。
文章分3段:
(1)綜述:概括性強(qiáng),最多2句話(huà)引入主題;
(2)正文:主要內(nèi)容層次性強(qiáng),一定要有過(guò)渡型連接詞。最多展開(kāi)3個(gè)方面,每個(gè)方面最多2句話(huà);
(3)結(jié)尾:緊扣主題,2句話(huà)內(nèi)結(jié)束,盡量升華。
1. “開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”式開(kāi)頭
一般來(lái)說(shuō),文章的開(kāi)頭應(yīng)盡量做到“開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”,即要用簡(jiǎn)單明了的語(yǔ)言引出文章的話(huà)題,使人一開(kāi)始就能了解文章要說(shuō)明的內(nèi)容。
① 對(duì)于敘事類(lèi)的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭把人物、時(shí)間、事件和環(huán)境交代清楚。
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:
Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 對(duì)于論述性的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭處先闡明自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn),接著展開(kāi)進(jìn)一步的論述。
如“The Time and the Money (時(shí)間和金錢(qián))” 的開(kāi)頭可以是:
Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2. 回憶性開(kāi)頭
在描述事件或游記類(lèi)的文章中,采用回憶性的開(kāi)頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。這種類(lèi)型的開(kāi)頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞匯,如never forget(永遠(yuǎn)無(wú)法忘記)、 remember (記得)、unforgettable(難以忘懷的)、 exciting(令人激動(dòng)的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad (難過(guò)的)……
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭還以這樣寫(xiě):
I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan.
或 It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑問(wèn)性開(kāi)頭
在敘事類(lèi)或論述性的文章中,都可采用疑問(wèn)型開(kāi)頭,這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。
如“Planting Trees(種樹(shù))”的開(kāi)頭可以是:
Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……
再如“Traveling Abroad(出國(guó)之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:
If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?
4. 倒敘式開(kāi)頭
在有的文章,特別是敘事類(lèi)的文章中,可以采用倒敘的寫(xiě)作手法,先寫(xiě)出事件的結(jié)果,再陳述過(guò)程。
如“Catching Thieves (捉賊)”的開(kāi)頭可以這樣寫(xiě):
I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.
1.自然結(jié)尾,點(diǎn)明主題
隨著文章的結(jié)束,文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。
如“Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)”的結(jié)尾可以是:
The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.
再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)” 的結(jié)尾可以是:
When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2. 首尾呼應(yīng),升華主題
在文章的結(jié)尾可以用含義較深的話(huà)點(diǎn)明主題,深化主題,起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的效果。
如“I Love My Hometown(我愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng))”的結(jié)尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.
3. 反問(wèn)結(jié)尾,引起深思
這種方式的結(jié)尾雖然形式是問(wèn)句,但意義卻是肯定的,而且具有一定的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用,可引起他人的深思。
如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (學(xué)英語(yǔ)能為我們帶來(lái)許多樂(lè)趣)” 的結(jié)尾可以是:
If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?
4. 表達(dá)祝愿,闡述愿望
這種方式的結(jié)尾常出現(xiàn)在書(shū)信或演講稿的文體中,表示對(duì)他人的祝?;?qū)?lái)的展望等。
如“A Letter to the Farmers(給農(nóng)民們的一封信)”的結(jié)尾可以是:
I hope the farmers' life will be better and better.
另外,書(shū)信的結(jié)尾常有以下形式的祝福語(yǔ):Best wishes; I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。
狀語(yǔ)從句舉例:
If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
常用狀語(yǔ)從句句型
(1)時(shí)間:when, not…until, as soon as
(2)目的:so that+從句; to do(為了)
(3)結(jié)果:so…that+從句, too…to do(太……以至于……)
(4)條件:if, unless(除非), as long as(只要)
(5)讓步:though,although,even though,even if,no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
(6)比較:as…as…, not so…as…, than
重點(diǎn)句型
(1) It is said that + 句子 據(jù)說(shuō)… It is reported that + 句子 據(jù)報(bào)道…
(2) There is no need to do 沒(méi)必要做…
(3) It’s adj for sb to do 做…對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)…
(4) so /such… that … 如此… 以至于… too … to do 太… 而不能…
(5) not…until… 直到…才… 例: I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back。
(6) The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…
(7) The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生氣的原因是她對(duì)他說(shuō)了謊。)
(8) That is why + 句子 那是…的原因
(9) That is because + 句子 那是因?yàn)椤?BR> (10) as we all know, +句子 據(jù)我們所知
(11) It is generally/ publicly known / considered that…, 眾所周知