以下是整理的《考官是如何巧妙改寫雅思寫作話題的》，一起來看看吧！
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? (p.79, C8)
很明顯，題目中的觀點(diǎn)是提高油價是的方式(Increasing the price of petrol is the best way)，而話題則是交通和污染問題( growing traffic and pollution problems)。那么，在考官的范文中，這個話題是如何進(jìn)行改寫的呢?
Introduction: traffic and pollution from vehicles
Body 1: the increase in traffic and pollution
Body 2: the problem of pollution
Body 3: traffic congestion
Conclusion: long-term traffic and pollution reductions
- p.167, C8
我們可以看到，考官在重述題目的話題(rewrite the question topic)時，traffic和pollution這兩個單詞并沒有替換過，而是通過加減詞匯(例如traffic改成traffic congestion)或者調(diào)整單詞順序(例如pollution problems改成the problem of pollution)的方式進(jìn)行改寫的，因此我們在遇到類似情況時，也可以使用這兩種技巧，這樣就可以輕松改寫題目的話題了。
來看一個例子：
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
在上述題目中，話題是improve the environment，寫作時大家不需要糾結(jié)如何改寫environment這個單詞，可以利用加減詞匯和調(diào)整單詞順序的技巧進(jìn)行替換，就會變得容易很多，例如，protect the environment, protect the natural environment, protection of the environment, environmental protection等等。
同樣我們再來看一個題目：
With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people write letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of letter writing will disappear. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
這個題目的話題是write letters，看似很難改寫，但是如果使用上述的方法，我們同樣可以較為輕松地想到下面的一些替換表達(dá)：the skill of letter writing, the tradition of letter writing, letter writing skills, write/send a letter, handwritten letters, a business / love / thank-you letter等。
我們最后再來看一道犯罪類的“難題”，看看上面這種改寫的技巧是否適用。
Some people believe that a police force carrying guns leads to higher levels of violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
這道題目的Topic是a police force carrying guns，而通過加減詞匯和調(diào)整單詞順序之后我們可以找到以下的替換：a police force that carries guns, police officers carrying guns, police use of guns, police use of firearms, guns carried by police officers。
所以，在重述Task 2題目的話題時，加減詞匯和調(diào)整單詞順序總是可以給我們帶來意外的驚喜，讓你輕輕松松rewrite the topic。
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? (p.79, C8)
很明顯，題目中的觀點(diǎn)是提高油價是的方式(Increasing the price of petrol is the best way)，而話題則是交通和污染問題( growing traffic and pollution problems)。那么，在考官的范文中，這個話題是如何進(jìn)行改寫的呢?
Introduction: traffic and pollution from vehicles
Body 1: the increase in traffic and pollution
Body 2: the problem of pollution
Body 3: traffic congestion
Conclusion: long-term traffic and pollution reductions
- p.167, C8
我們可以看到，考官在重述題目的話題(rewrite the question topic)時，traffic和pollution這兩個單詞并沒有替換過，而是通過加減詞匯(例如traffic改成traffic congestion)或者調(diào)整單詞順序(例如pollution problems改成the problem of pollution)的方式進(jìn)行改寫的，因此我們在遇到類似情況時，也可以使用這兩種技巧，這樣就可以輕松改寫題目的話題了。
來看一個例子：
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
在上述題目中，話題是improve the environment，寫作時大家不需要糾結(jié)如何改寫environment這個單詞，可以利用加減詞匯和調(diào)整單詞順序的技巧進(jìn)行替換，就會變得容易很多，例如，protect the environment, protect the natural environment, protection of the environment, environmental protection等等。
同樣我們再來看一個題目：
With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people write letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of letter writing will disappear. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
這個題目的話題是write letters，看似很難改寫，但是如果使用上述的方法，我們同樣可以較為輕松地想到下面的一些替換表達(dá)：the skill of letter writing, the tradition of letter writing, letter writing skills, write/send a letter, handwritten letters, a business / love / thank-you letter等。
我們最后再來看一道犯罪類的“難題”，看看上面這種改寫的技巧是否適用。
Some people believe that a police force carrying guns leads to higher levels of violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
這道題目的Topic是a police force carrying guns，而通過加減詞匯和調(diào)整單詞順序之后我們可以找到以下的替換：a police force that carries guns, police officers carrying guns, police use of guns, police use of firearms, guns carried by police officers。
所以，在重述Task 2題目的話題時，加減詞匯和調(diào)整單詞順序總是可以給我們帶來意外的驚喜，讓你輕輕松松rewrite the topic。