2017年12月英語六級滿分作文精講:我的夢想

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    大學(xué)英語級作文一直是考生重點(diǎn)關(guān)注的部分,也是考試的重難點(diǎn),在備考階段,大家要多復(fù)習(xí)一些英語六級作文精講,考試的時(shí)候可以幫助自己提高作文水平,預(yù)祝同學(xué)們高分通過考試。
    My Dream
    我的夢想
    Everyone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionairesovernight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have alot of dreams, too. When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Luogenin future. However, I knew ve ry well that I could not succeed without painstaking efforts. So Istudied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.
    After graduating from college, I found a job as a teacher. Although I was very busy withteaching, I never gave up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I madeexperiments to pr actise and apply what I had learnt from the books. Sometimes, I was sodeeply indulged in my research that I forgot my meals and time. Now I have made greatprogress. Several of my research papers have been published. The methods proposed in mypapers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems. I am very happy. The ladder of becoming a scientist is still far ahead, but I have climbed the first rung anyway.
    CET6六級作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析
    ·Everybody has a lot of dreams
    * Some people’s dr eams
    * Other people’s dreams
    * My dream
    · How I realize my dream
    * Study hard
    * Work hard
    * Achievements so far made
    * A long way to go
     CET6六級作文內(nèi)容分析:
    本文為一篇記敘文。文中第一段為夾敘夾議, 以general comment 開頭, 引出“我的夢想”。第二段為作者為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想所做的努力和取得的成果, 最后一句“成為科學(xué)家的階梯還遙遙在上, 但我至少已攀登了第一級?!奔仁强偨Y(jié)又是方向。此句摹仿了Jack London 的散文“What Life Mean s to Me”中的一句精彩句子。
     CET6六級作文萬能句型:
    dream of 夢想……
    jump to great fame 一舉成名
    be indulged in . . . 沉緬于
    propose v . 提出
    ladde r n . 梯子
    rung n . (梯子的)級