2017年GRE考試寫作專題解析及作文提綱(7)

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  •     GRE寫作題庫之GRE作文題目:
        83"Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."
        GRE寫作精講之提綱解析:
        83 wilderness areas受到 human civilization 威脅,政府需要保護(hù)
        1、環(huán)境破壞已經(jīng)對(duì)生態(tài)平衡造成很大影響,環(huán)境破壞影響人類,迫切需要保護(hù)
        since the humans arrived in Australia, the species there have decreased sharply
        The significance of preservation has already been seen in Australia, where lots of regulations have
        been set by the government to protect the wilderness areas, its wildlife have been preserved and
        thrived significantly.
        2、邊遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的環(huán)境破壞也會(huì)影響到更大環(huán)境(整體性),
        Take the depletion of ozone layer in Antarctica as example. Due to the wildly use of refrigerator, a lot
        of gases spread to the atmosphere and thus leads to a thinner Ozone Layer. The Ozone Layer helps
        prevent unwanted ultraviolet radiation ,hence the temperature of the world is not too high. However,
        because of the depletion of Ozone Layer in Antarctica, the temperature in this area rises ,therefore the
        iceberg in this area thaw out and consequently result in a higher level of Ocean, which means a
        disaster to human beings.
        3、政府有責(zé)任 undeniable mission保護(hù)環(huán)境,個(gè)人的力量有限,政府可以采取更有效措施
        Tibetan Antelope Tibetan pleatue
        There is a long-standing non-governmental organization called wild yak team. Although they do
        many thing to combat with those evil strugglers, their efforts are slim. The first difficulty is that they
        have no right to punish those evil strugglers. The only thing they could do is try to prevent those evil
        struggles. However their strength is too weak compared to the strugglers. Another difficulty they face
        to is that they even can’t ensure their survival. They can’t get money from the wild yak team,
        meanwhile most of their time are spent on protecting Tibetan Antelope and could not do other things
        to earn money.
        ISSUE83
        政府應(yīng)該保護(hù)那些荒野地帶(主要與生態(tài)環(huán)境有關(guān))
        1 荒野地帶對(duì)生態(tài)環(huán)境有很大影響biological diversity natural balance
        2 荒野地帶對(duì)科研有很大作用
        3 適當(dāng)?shù)睦?BR>    83 這些地方往往是具有生態(tài)價(jià)值,保護(hù)這些地方有利于生態(tài)的平衡,如果被破壞則很難恢復(fù)。比如國(guó)家公園,保護(hù)
        區(qū),原始森林,保護(hù)了野生動(dòng)植物。
        這些地方往往收人類影響很少,保護(hù)可以為人類將來對(duì)地球氣候,地址演化提供資料。
        但是對(duì)于一些生態(tài)環(huán)境已經(jīng)十分惡化的地方,比如出現(xiàn)沙漠化的草原,會(huì)威脅到周圍人的生存,政府需要采取措施,
        順其自然只能使情況更加惡化。
        83【題目】"Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even
        though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."
        【翻譯】政府應(yīng)該保護(hù)公共所有的野生地區(qū),使得它們維持自然的狀態(tài),即使這些地方十分地偏遠(yuǎn)因而大多數(shù)人無
        法到達(dá)。
        【提綱】同意
        1、野生地區(qū)應(yīng)當(dāng)予以保護(hù):因?yàn)榈谝?,野生地區(qū)有豐富的動(dòng)、植物資源,具有很高的研究?jī)r(jià)值,如果沒有保護(hù)的話,
        物種可能會(huì)滅絕;第二,野生自然地區(qū)的狀況對(duì)于環(huán)境、氣候影響也有影響; 99
        2、野生地區(qū)容易受到人類的影響,即使偏遠(yuǎn)或者只有很少人能夠到達(dá),仍然可能遭受嚴(yán)重的破壞,因此應(yīng)當(dāng)予以保
        護(hù);舉例人們對(duì)于象牙 ivory
        (前兩點(diǎn)似乎涉及到一些專業(yè)知識(shí),需要查一查,不然說起來很空洞)
        3、政府是有效的保護(hù)手段,如通過法律,很多國(guó)家都有相關(guān)的規(guī)定來保護(hù);如:the 1964 Wilderness Act,自
        然保護(hù)區(qū)的建立;除此以外,人類自身也要通過宣傳、教育自覺地進(jìn)行保護(hù);
        83.政府保護(hù)荒地
        一、應(yīng)該保護(hù) virgin lands, 不然被破壞,為了 descendants。比 individual effective
        二、保護(hù)動(dòng)植物 For the purpose of protecting wild animals and plants, government needs to take
        actions.
        1.研究生物進(jìn)化,和基因多樣性provide abundant original information for the study of evolution, and add
        rich diversity to genetics.
        2.不保護(hù)可能滅絕,chain, delicate balance
        3. 即使很偏遠(yuǎn),take heart from extremely high profits,比如 Tibetan Antelopes
        三、對(duì)于有豐富資源的地區(qū)there may be rich energy sources or mineral resources in the wilderness areas.
        1.如果不保護(hù)等于讓私人開采,而私人沒有興趣保護(hù),violently, inefficiently
        2.為了應(yīng)對(duì)能源危機(jī),為了留給后代 scientifically exploit
        四、不保護(hù)就沒機(jī)會(huì)了 as some damages are irreversible, present inaction is tantamount to forever loss.
        1.Ancient time形成的 Amazon rainforests 被砍伐,新雨林成長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間很長(zhǎng),而這期間 ecosystem may not
        revive from human damages
        2.Butterfly effect,全球變暖和 deforestation
        五、有人建議私人基金或非政府組織 the argument against the claim which some opponents suggest may
        be non-government organizations like environmentalist association can also do well in protecting the
        wild areas.
        1.資金不足,因?yàn)闆]什么利潤(rùn) capital abundance
        2.不具備強(qiáng)制性 powerful coercion
        83T "Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though
        these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people." 83. 政府應(yīng)該保護(hù)
        那些疆域范圍內(nèi)的偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū),盡管這些地區(qū)人煙稀少
        ① 從環(huán)境的角度考慮,理所應(yīng)當(dāng)。留給人類后一份美麗。To the environment's sake, it is necessary to do
        so. Leaving some pristine not polluted surrounding to the posterity, and remain the last resident
        to the prosecuted and protected animals. /這些地方通常還有獨(dú)特的民族文化
        ② 為后代子孫造福,不僅從經(jīng)濟(jì),也從學(xué)術(shù)研究的角度。經(jīng)濟(jì)上:可能有能源 energy sources 或礦產(chǎn) mineral
        resources.研究上:可能可以提供物種變化 species variety 以及地球演變 earth evolvement 等原始資料
        sources(因?yàn)樯形幢蝗祟惪桃馄茐?。
        ③ 隨著科技的發(fā)展,A 這些地方越來越容易遭到破壞 B 這些地方一旦破壞,會(huì)給周邊的大環(huán)境帶來影響, 如:
        Amazon Tropical rainforest C這些破壞往往都是難以恢復(fù)的。
        所以政府要保護(hù)環(huán)境。So the government should keep an eye on the protection on the wildnes