2017年GRE考試寫作作文思路火力全開(2)

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  •     GRE寫作題目:
        "Competition is ultimately more beneficial than detrimental to society."
        GRE寫作思路解析及提綱:
        2、同意,防止不良競爭
        1、經(jīng)濟(jì)領(lǐng)域,競爭可以提高產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量,促進(jìn)創(chuàng)新
        更好的質(zhì)量、服務(wù)、創(chuàng)新的動(dòng)力,消費(fèi)者受益
        2、政治領(lǐng)域,競爭可以選出有能力的,人民受益
        競爭中,福利,個(gè)人能力;防止無能政府
        3、不良競爭對(duì)社會(huì)帶來問題,如壓力,不正當(dāng)競爭
        學(xué)生成績競爭;工作崗位競爭;immoral競爭,slag off behind the back
        2T "Competition is ultimately more beneficial than detrimental to society."
        歸根結(jié)底,競爭對(duì)于社會(huì)是利多弊少。 4
        ①使得更有效率。A 同事之間競爭 B優(yōu)勝劣汰
        ②增加社會(huì)福利。如:競選時(shí),使得民眾對(duì)于該選誰更清晰。
        ③當(dāng)競爭失控時(shí),會(huì)有問題。如:超出法律和道德的界限
        ④導(dǎo)致社會(huì)上人們普遍壓力增大
        Through competing, the one who is most eligible is put on the right place, and then will produce much
        more values than those who are not competent as he or she.
        While, on the other hand, if a competition is fraught with adulteration and illegality, it will bring
        deterioration to the society rather than progress. A case in point is related to market economy.