Last week, our school had a talent show. There were 8 kinds of activities, such as English speech contest, singing, dancing and playing instruments. A number of students took
part in this show.
In this show, I joined in the English speech contest. My topic is “Can middle school students make friends online.” At first, I was a little bit nervous. With my classmates’
encouragement, I slowly calmed down. Luckily, I won the third prize, I was very happy.
In a word, this show not only makes us happy, but also enriches our school life. We all like it.
點評：透過這位同學(xué)的文字，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)這真是一場精彩的才藝表演：有英語演講、歌唱比賽、舞蹈比賽等等。通過這個平臺，小作者和同學(xué)們展示了自己的才藝。文章文字流暢，用詞得當(dāng)，是一篇不錯的學(xué)生作品
part in this show.
In this show, I joined in the English speech contest. My topic is “Can middle school students make friends online.” At first, I was a little bit nervous. With my classmates’
encouragement, I slowly calmed down. Luckily, I won the third prize, I was very happy.
In a word, this show not only makes us happy, but also enriches our school life. We all like it.
點評：透過這位同學(xué)的文字，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)這真是一場精彩的才藝表演：有英語演講、歌唱比賽、舞蹈比賽等等。通過這個平臺，小作者和同學(xué)們展示了自己的才藝。文章文字流暢，用詞得當(dāng)，是一篇不錯的學(xué)生作品