托福獨立寫作工作類話題開頭寫作技巧

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工作類話題題目:
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
    思路分析:
    1.話題引入:選出作文命題中的關鍵詞(一般為名詞),進行背景描述,引入話題
    2.他人觀點:第二步有三種處理方法。陳述對立觀點、敘述雙方觀點或保留雙方觀點
    3.亮明觀點:第三句話明確給出本文總觀點
    4.尾句過渡:用固定句式進行開頭段與主體段的過渡
    開頭段范文:
    Everyone in the society is seeking for success in career, but what is the key factor of becoming successful? There are two choices – good networking and hardworking. Although someone tends to choose the first aspect, I definitely agree that hardworking at school should be a key factor of success. 圧椀琀梔漀甀琀 hardworking at school, success in the future cannot be guaranteed.
    范文解析:
    1.根據題干內容,選取關鍵詞success, future job, relate well to people or study hard at school。開頭句作為話題引入,先描述當前背景,即社會上的每個人都追求事業(yè)成功,但成功的關鍵因素是什么?第二句對應題干信息,指出有兩種選擇——良好的人際關系還是努力學習。
    2.該步驟采取了陳述對立觀點的方法,Although … 指出有人認為良好的人際關系對于事業(yè)成功更重要。
    3.I definitely agree that直接引出作者的態(tài)度,即在學校努力學習是成功的關鍵因素,亮出文章的總觀點。
    4.最后一句,作為對整體段落內容上的收尾,并且引出下文來支持作者觀點的理由。
    開頭段所涉及詞匯講解(工作類)
    seek for success in career 追求事業(yè)上的成功
    the key factor of… …的關鍵因素
    good networking 良好的人際關系
    cannot be guaranteed 無法保證