My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair.
And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文所給要點是幾個問題，故動筆前先要閱讀要點，找出問題的答案。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將問題所涉及內(nèi)容表達完整；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:be strict with對……嚴格；be ready to do sth準備做某事；in trouble處于困難中；try one’s best do to sth盡力做某事等。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。
And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.
試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文所給要點是幾個問題，故動筆前先要閱讀要點，找出問題的答案。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將問題所涉及內(nèi)容表達完整；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:be strict with對……嚴格；be ready to do sth準備做某事；in trouble處于困難中；try one’s best do to sth盡力做某事等。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。